This article is within the scope of WikiProject Weather, which collaborates on weather and related subjects on Wikipedia. To participate, help improve this article or visit the project page for details.
Hi Hurricanehink! I think it has been a while since I last reviewed one of your GANs. So I am gonna review this one today.--12george1 (talk) 15:12, 22 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
"the basin after it crossed from the Australian region, where it as named Annette. " - "as named"?
"It tracked to the southwest, and the JTWC (JTWC) estimated peak 1 minute sustained" - Why is JTWC in parenthesis here? You already explained what it is earlier.
"On December 19, the system intensified to moderate tropical storm status, prompting the Mauritius Meteorological Service to name it Bakoly. " Maybe you should say "Later that day" or something like that, because the previous sentence has the exact same beginning.
"Domoina developed on January 16 off the northeast coast of Madagascar." - Was there any known type of weather system that spawned Domoina?
There is, but do I need to include it? Domoina has a sub-article, I didn't feel the need to go into too much detail. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:08, 25 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
Ok, I will let this issue slide.--12george1 (talk) 18:22, 25 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
"MFR began tracking a tropical disturbance in the Mozambique channel near Juan de Nova Island." - I'm just noticing that you use the phrase "Mozambique channel" 4 times in the article. Two of them have a capital "C" in "channel", while the other have half a lower case "c". I don't really care which way you have it, but make sure all four either have a capital or lower case "C".
I have found nothing else wrong with this article. So now I will be passing this article and listing it as a GA. :) --12george1 (talk) 18:22, 25 August 2013 (UTC)Reply