Talk:1933 Trinidad hurricane

GA Review

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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 16:19, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

• will review. MathewTownsend (talk) 16:19, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
  • WHOOOOOO!!!!! :) ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:39, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
• ha ha! Just a few minor comments:

• "The 1933 Trinidad hurricane was one of two North Atlantic tropical cyclones on record to produce hurricane-force winds in Venezuela." - is a date needed here? Like as of 2012, only two North Atlantic tropical cyclones etc.?
  • Sure! I added "As of 2000". --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 21:06, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

• This is very minor but I can't find in the source "After the storm, Cuban President Gerardo Machado utilized the military to assist in relief operations and prevent looting.[14]" - I'm sure it's me and my inability to figure out how to use those google article sources without scrolling off the page when I try to read the continuation of the article.

• also (minor), would authorized the military or something besides "utilized"?

• It's on the page 2, a continuation of the same article. And authorized isn't exactly right, since that would mean the military was allowed to help. This was more ordering, but I felt "utilized" was a little softer. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 21:06, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

• Otherwise, a-okay. MathewTownsend (talk) 17:03, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
  • Great! BTW, about the Google news, type anything into the Google news engine, then on the bottom-left hand side, select custom range to get news stories going back hundreds of years. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 21:06, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
• ok, nice article. All issues address. GA pass. Congratulations! MathewTownsend (talk) 01:27, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

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