Talk:1918 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1
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Reviewer: TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contribs) 21:54, 6 August 2017 (UTC)
- "Additionally, were four suspected tropical depressions," - Word swap.
- "The strongest and most notorious tropical system of the season was the second tropical storm, which peaked as a Category 3 hurricane." - Awkward to refer to it as a tropical storm (specific term) when it was a Cat 3 hurricane.
- "Most of the buildings in DeQuincy and Westlake were leveled, with the latter described as "a scene of desolation"." - Period always goes inside quotations.
- "A tropical wave developed into the season's third tropical storm just east of the Windward Islands on August 22." - Wikilink tropical wave.
- "While the storm passed south of Barbados, winds reached 48 mph (77 km/h) from the southeast." - Sustained or gusts?
- "Early the following day, the storm briefly re-emerged into the Caribbean, before making landfall near Monkey River Town, Belize." - Second comma unnecessary.
- "The cyclone quickly weakened over land and dissipated on by 12:00 UTC on August 26." - Extra word.
- No impact from Two?
- "A low pressure area developed into a tropical storm by 06:00 UTC on August 23," - Always need a hyphen for "Low-pressure area"
- "The system continued weakening,[3] before merging with a frontal system about 125 mi (200 km) east-southeast of New Jersey at 12:00 UTC on August 26.[2]" - Comma isn't necessary.
- "A low pressure area of non-tropical origins" - Need that hyphen.
- "while many boats are swamped or blown aground." - are --> were
- I don't think we need to note the reasoning for estimated winds/pressure in any of these sections.
- "The remnant extratropical storm struck Nova Scotia and Newfoundland, before dissipating over the latter on September 8." - No comma.
- "The first developed in June from a trough of low pressure in the eastern Gulf of Mexico and moved westward across Florida." - If it developed in the eastern Gulf of Mexico, Florida is to the east, not west.
- "While tracking northwestward, the depression experienced little change in intensity, and made landfall in Louisiana three days after formation." - No comma.