Draft talk:Ebony Goddess Mystique

Discussion on previous nomination

Although I just took my time now to read the whole discussion today on the previous nomination. I can see this was discussed around 28th August 2022. I actually don't know how the previous article looks like and can't figure out who created it but I believe the census on the discussion gave their opinion on how the article was written previously. Also I figured out after the deletion of the subject on the 28th of August 2022 they have been more achievement from the subject such as notability from newspapers, movies being seen and award being won/nomination aside from the movie she was starred which won an award. Although I'm not perfect, just speaking from what have learnt from wikipedia when writing articles so am just gonna leave this for a reviewer to check the past and the newer version. Meligirl5 (talk) 02:07, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

@Meligirl5: The several of the new draft's references are new. However, most of them don't advance the case for notability. By the numbers: 1. IAFD - neither reliable nor substantial. 2–6. Interviews and press releases are primary sources, substantially based on what the subject says. They don't contribute to notability. 7. This Day: A puff piece, but it's the only plausible non-trivial secondary source coverage in the draft. 8–13. No substantial change from 2022. Porn awards do not establish notability, and nominations count for even less. Besides, two of those citations are self-published. At the very least, the subject needs non-trivial, intellectually independent coverage like #7 from sources also independent of #7 (This Day). A submission would likely be declined, but the draft is improving. • Gene93k (talk) 03:25, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

• Gene93k can you please help me with the tags I think I did a mistake while resubmitting after the adjustment. Thanks.--Meligirl5 (talk) 21:08, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

Biography verification

Hello @Vanderwaalforces, thanks for your review. Although have been busy this Christmas season with my family reason why I haven’t been able to edit. I just made an adjustment per your comment review. I was able to research some of the reliable references that mentioned about her date of birth which are reference number 1 & 17th. They were many more but I feel the newspaper are more reliable. Also for the Awards I just added two more reliable sources. Merry Christmas to you. Meligirl5 (talk) 18:33, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

Article improvement

Hello @MicrobiologyMarcus, I had to keep on reading your comment all over again on the article as it seems so confusing to me because I’m just getting to know about the inline citation as a beginner. I have just take a look at the WP:INCITE and the WP:FOOTNOTES but I still need more further explanation using a sample from the article so I could clearly understand. Of course this is a draft page. So is it possible you explain to me using the article or you make a change on the article due to your comment (correction) and I take over from there. I look forward to your reply and hope you understand what I’m trying to say because I’m trying to understand as well. Thanks & hope you have a lovely day. Meligirl5 (talk) 23:53, 5 February 2024 (UTC)

Movies section

Hello @MicrobiologyMarcus:, I don't know if the IMDb reference is enough evidence as a source. If not a strong evidence we can just remove the movies section but I all saw that on the Imdb database. Meligirl5 (talk) 10:59, 20 February 2024 (UTC)