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Submission declined on 12 February 2024 by Dan arndt (talk). This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
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The Cyrus family tree, which (relevant part) starts with Achaemenes and ends at Xerxes I, who was in the house of Cyrus due to Atossa, as His father Darius The Great Deposed Bardiya(Smerdis or possibly an imposter named Gaumata[*]). This Family tree is part of the Achaemenid family tree which starts to get out of sync afterwards and eventually ends due to Alexander The Great's Conquering Of Persia.[1][2]
Family tree edit
Achaemenes King of Persia[*] 705–675 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Teispes King of Persia 675–640 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Cyrus I King of Persia 640–600 | Ariaramnes Prince[*] | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Cambyses I King of Persia 600–559 | Arukku | Arsames Prince[*] | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Cyrus II the Great King of Persia 559–530/28 | Hystaspes Prince[*] | Pharnaces I satrap of Phrygia Pharnacid dynasty | Megabates military leader | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Artystone Princess | Smerdis (Bardiya) | Cambyses II King of Persia 530–522 | Atossa Princess | Darius I the Great King of Persia 522–486 | Artaphernes I general satrap of Lydia | Artabanus counselor | Megabazus general | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Parmys | (by daughter of Gobryas) Ariabignes admiral | (by Atossa) Masistes satrap of Bactria | (by Atossa) Xerxes I the Great King of Persia 485–465 | (by Atossa) Achaemenes satrap of Egypt | (by Artystone) Artazostre married Mardonius | (by Parmys) Ariomardus | Artaphernes II general satrap of Lydia | Artyphius commander | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
See Also edit
- Wars of Alexander - Persia
- Chronology of the expedition of Alexander the Great into Asia
- Achaemenid family tree
References edit
- ^ http://www.iranicaonline.org/articles/darius-iii%7C Shahbazi 1994
- ^ Briant, Pierre (2002). From Cyrus to Alexander: A History of the Persian Empire. Eisenbrauns. pp. 1–1196. ISBN 978-1-57506-120-7.
- "Family Tree of Darius the Great". Encyclopædia Iranica. Archived from the original (JPG) on 2012-03-24. Retrieved 2011-03-28.
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