Theroadislong

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Neutralization of text in Article

Hello @Theroadislong,

I have tried to be neutral with the article Draft:Nicholas Omonuk and was hoping to hear from you if the language is abit neutral now. Kindly advice please.

Clare Nassanga (talk) 06:28, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

You still have two paragraphs of unsourced puffery in the "Achievements in Activism' section. Theroadislong (talk) 06:51, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

@Clare Nassanga (talk page watcher) However, you have created a list of stuff. Articles are not lists, they are fair, continuous prose. I am sure you will solve this as well. 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 06:55, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

Thanks @Theroadislong for this advise. I have edited the article again. I kindly request you to look though if its better now. Clare Nassanga (talk) 21:56, 1 June 2024 (UTC)

Jason Pine Entry

Hi,

I've made significant improvements to the page Draft:Jason Pine, rewriting the article in a neutral tone and including proper references.

Thank you for checking it again. Artistic Research (talk) 19:37, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

@Artisticresearch don't post messages on multiple reviewer's talk pages asking them to review a draft. You've posted a request for Qcne, who rejected the draft, so they will take look. S0091 (talk) 19:45, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

Maria-Ana Tupan

You have incorrectly restored a label. Things have been clarified in the talk page. Please cancel that tag. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Maria-Ana_Tupan2A02:2F08:EB08:8B00:E59A:F0E:D9BA:A532 (talk) 13:29, 29 May 2024 (UTC)

Thank you for your help! Have a nice day!82.78.49.235 (talk) 17:59, 29 May 2024 (UTC)

Karin van der Laag Role in Isidingo

Karin van der Laag played the LEAD role of MAGGIE WEBSTER in Isidingo for 12 years for SABC 3 under ENDEMOL the biggest television producer in the country.

Please google TV SA and IMDB and please look at every title sequence from 1998 til 2010 to see who is featured and who bills as lead actors before making the assertion that Karin van der Laag was one of the small parts in Isidingo.

Do your research, esteemed editor Karinvanderlaag (talk) 11:20, 30 May 2024 (UTC)

The article about you was deleted after a week long community discussion here Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Karin Van Der Laag, you had every opportunity to comment, IMDb is NOT a reliable source for anything so cannot be used to establish any notability. Theroadislong (talk) 13:09, 30 May 2024 (UTC)

You may be unaware of this talk page. I choose to make no comment despite inaccuracies. YMMV. 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 15:29, 30 May 2024 (UTC)

Listen

Hey, i have made a draft of Draft:Aamir_Naik with reliable sources of Indian news Media, so hiw can yiu clearly say it is not suitable. Please check carefully its about an actor who done many roles in Bollywood films Kamarrrr (talk) 06:49, 1 June 2024 (UTC)

The draft consists of one sentence and the subject does not seem to meet our standards for notable actors. Theroadislong (talk) 07:53, 1 June 2024 (UTC)

Updated Jason Pickleman page

I wanted to let you know that I updated the draft page for Jason Pickleman with new citations and made the following clearer to establish notability:

Pickleman received awards from the The Society of Typographic Arts, the James Beard Foundation, the Museum of Contemporary Photography, and others.

He received features from Atlas Obscura, Chicago magazine, Chicago Gallery News, Chicago Sun-Times, Chicago Tribune, DNAinfo Chicago, Hyperallergic, Newcity, the New York Times, and Time Out Chicago.

And has work included in significant collections such as the Art Institute of Chicago, Columbia College Chicago, and theNate.

Thanks for your work! Archndesign (talk) 02:37, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Please do not revert maintenance templates from pages on Wikipedia, as you did to Maria-Ana Tupan. If you violate the revert rule, you break the wikipedia rules. Any user without a conflict of interest may remove a maintenance template if the issue has been resolved by someone else. You can ask an administrator about this aspect.

The issue has NOT been resolved, you have a conflict of interest and should use the talk page to suggest edits. Theroadislong (talk) 06:51, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Hi Theroadislong, I think you meant to reply to a different user. I have not made any edits to a page related to Maria-Ana Tupan. Thanks again for your work on Wikipedia. Archndesign (talk) 21:30, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

I don't know what edit of mine you are referring to sorry? Theroadislong (talk) 21:47, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Archndesign Oh I see now [1] the edit was made by a user who is now blocked it had nothing to do with you. Theroadislong (talk) 21:52, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Thank you. Understood. Archndesign (talk) 22:20, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Hey look here

Draft:Sajad Hussain Malik (Volleyball) is ready for article, please check if there is any mistake Kamarrrr (talk) 05:59, 4 June 2024 (UTC)

Sorry I avoid reviewing drafts about sports people, the relevant criteria can be found at WP:NSPORTS. Theroadislong (talk) 07:32, 4 June 2024 (UTC)

Hi!

Hey there! Reaching out because you rejected my draft a while back and then made a a comment on it last month about the sourcing. Since then I reviewed all of the sourcing very thoroughly, made necessary edits, and took out the IMDB source completely. It's been several months since re-submission, are you able to take a look? Maybe even feedback so that it goes through for sure next time around. Livvin1 (talk) 20:11, 7 June 2024 (UTC)

Regarding Pure Imagination Studios Article

Hi there! You said that the article was "blatant promotion" and I would like some advice on how to write an article that does not fall under the qualifications of "blatant promotion" if that is possible. Testinganaccount1 and I are just interns working on this project and we would really appreciate advice on how to build this article in a fair and balanced way. Phoenix219 (talk) 21:43, 7 June 2024 (UTC)

You are being paid to edit, I suggest you spend a few months editing here, to learn how Wikipedia works, you will get little help from volunteers. Theroadislong (talk) 21:45, 7 June 2024 (UTC)

re: Phillip Jeong article

I left a message on Phillip Jeong article as follows;

The article has a Notability tag now. I saw some fierce discussions on similar issues in other articles. He has three albums with Universal Music (Decca): a participation album, Feel in Duo album, and a full album as Miraclass. I was going to write a separate article for Miraclass and therefore excluded Jeong's work with the group from his own article. Would elaborating on his group activities help address the notability issue? The crossover market in Korea is substantial, and many singers from the TV program Phantom Singer are recruited as musical actors in Korea. The stage musical market size is comparable to the so-called K-pop market, at about 25% of that of Broadway. Two of the Miraclass members are prominent figures in the Korean musical market. While these points may not directly prove his notability, consider that he has three Decca albums and performs in Hong Kong, which is outside Korea.

Please let me know what to do. Rosuacamus (talk) 12:32, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

The article Phillip Jeong doesn't mention Decca records are his own records released on this label? The article is so poorly written and stuffed full of irrelevant tables it is hard to establish notability. Theroadislong (talk) 12:48, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

I included three Universal Music (Decca) albums.

1. Participation album: https://library.cedarparktexas.gov/Hoopla/12378801
2. Feel in Duo single: https://music.apple.com/kr/album/feelin/1457825078
3. Feel in Duo album: https://music.apple.com/kr/album/feelin/1457825078

I left out the Miraclass album in the article

1. Miraclass album: https://music.apple.com/kr/album/romantica/1438366360

If you think these are enough to address the notability issue, I will clean up the content of the article. Rosuacamus (talk) 13:17, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

Can you help in protecting a page

Hi, I noticed that you have done some really good work on keeping paid promotion (potentially disruptive) editors on the Piece by Piece (2024 film) page from blatantly promoting the company which they are interning for. Thank you for this. Something similar is happening with The Lego Movie (franchise) page, where an IP editor is claiming (numerous times) that the franchise which Warner Bros. Pictures separately owns is the same as Universal's upcoming movie biopic which we've been editing, and a (planned) one. Sources indicate that this is not the case and that Universal is using its own characters for the planned film, and that Piece by Piece does not exist in the same continuity as the franchise.

Can you help in having The Lego Movie (franchise) protected for now? Thank you for your work on this subject as a whole. I hope we get to interact on Wikipedia much more! With much love, BarntToust (talk) 17:38, 9 June 2024 (UTC)

It's simple to request page protection here Wikipedia:Requests for page protection. Theroadislong (talk) 18:21, 9 June 2024 (UTC)

Anaxam, Martino Poggio, Swiss Nanoscience Institute

Hello @Theroadislong, I noticed that you have marked my above-mentioned works as too promotional and deleted some passages. Probably not least because they are paid entries, which I have declared on my user page. I have tried to use sober, factual language in the articles, to provide sufficient sources (although some facts cannot be found in independent sources, but only in the business report or on the website of the described institution itself) and, at least for the entries on Martino Poggio and Swiss Nanoscience Institute, to use the “articles for creation” process (which I was not yet familiar with for Anaxam) to ensure that the entries meet the requirements. In the case of the Anaxam article, I had just discussed it a few days earlier with another admin who had flagged the article and confirmed to me that, on closer inspection, it was OK after all. I will be able to provide some further independent sources, as this deficit was critiziced on the German entry as well and I was able to find some more appropriate sources. What else can I do to meet your requirements? Or is that not possible as a paid user? --J. Berndorff (talk) 12:40, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

There is a mop reserved in your name

You are a remarkable editor in many ways. You would be a good administrator, in my opinion, and appear to be well qualified. You personify an administrator without tools and have gained my support already!

Maliner (talk) 15:42, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

The road is indeed long, but we’ve come to the right end of it. What you waiting for!? Vanderwaalforces (talk) 21:04, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

This is incredible what I was looking for. @User:Theroadislong is someone I used to take as an admin. You're already established and godly in all you do especially at AFC and help desk. Have my support dearest. Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 21:05, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

+1 I'm honestly surprised you aren't an admin already. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 10:20, 11 June 2024 (UTC)

Aww guys...you're making me blush. I'm just back from a four day walking holiday around the coast of Cornwall, I will give the suggestion some thought as always. Theroadislong (talk) 07:33, 15 June 2024 (UTC)

🤗 Vanderwaalforces (talk) 07:36, 15 June 2024 (UTC)

Muhammad Maharvi Page

Hi, Its me Alragon. I want to say that yes you made a mistake i was going to cite it and according to my information that information is 100% correct. Because I live here, furthermore there are citations that are in other language to i am trying to translate it too. Alragon1 (talk) 08:05, 17 June 2024 (UTC)

Then please add the relevant citations rather than edit warring. Theroadislong (talk) 08:07, 17 June 2024 (UTC)

did it I added an article there are various articles for that exact same thing.

Regards! Alragon1 (talk) 08:10, 17 June 2024 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Requested moves/Technical requests

How much time could it take for technical moves? Alragon1 (talk) 08:13, 17 June 2024 (UTC)

Wikipedia Commons

HI, can you tell me what is Wikipedia commons as i got a notification but i am not able to open it? Alragon1 (talk) 08:48, 17 June 2024 (UTC)

@Alragon1 Hi there. You mean Wikimedia Commons, it is actually a repository of media files that can be used on all Wikimedia projects. You might want to read Wikimedia Commons for more information. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 13:03, 17 June 2024 (UTC)

Revised page for artist Bonnie Rychlak

Hello @Theroadislong I very much appreciate your thoughtful input to my article on the artist Bonnie Rychlak. I have spent a significant amount of time doing further research and addressing your concerns. I either eliminated the texts that you identified as problematic as original research or included the full citation from the original source. I added a number of sources that underscore the subject's notability both as an artist and as a curator/author. I would appreciate it if you would take another look and let me know if my revisions have successfully met the terms for publication. Also, would it be possible to remove the comments at the top of the draft that have been resolved? I know there is a concerted effort to increase the representation of female artists on Wikipedia, and I sincerely hope to continue doing so as I encounter the work of artists like Bonnie Rychlak who I believe merit a place on this platform. Thank you! Gaw54 (talk) 17:09, 17 June 2024 (UTC)

There is still a lot of inappropriate tone (ie. she has advanced the use of wax in sculpture to new levels of appreciation) and too many quotes, but I will leave it for another reviewer, the comments are removed after acceptance not before. Theroadislong (talk) 17:20, 17 June 2024 (UTC)

Maharvi Page

Already added citations please don't undo it.. Alragon1 (talk) 14:25, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

I'm afraid that your style of writing is not suitable in places for an encyclopaedia, “He was the individual who had the esteemed privilege of being the first to receive the honor of pledging allegiance to Shah Fakhar-u-Din” and “To his followers he was venerated by the honorific title 'Qibla Alam', signifying an elevated spiritual status within the Islamic mystical tradition” and “Maulana Fakhruddin's remarkable benevolence deeply moved him” is NOT neutral tone. Theroadislong (talk) 14:37, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

ok you want me to make this article nuetral right? I'll make sure to do it. Alragon1 (talk) 14:40, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

Did anyone objected? Do you know him? Alragon1 (talk) 14:41, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

I didn't write that article that i cited. Alragon1 (talk) 14:41, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

I never said tht you did, ALL content should be written in your own words though referring to the source but NOT copying it. Theroadislong (talk) 14:45, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

ok boss got it. Alragon1 (talk) 14:46, 18 June 2024 (UTC)