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I edited almost the entire text. The older version sounded too essay-ish and PoV. I toned in down and changed order of presentation, et al. Plus, moved claim of notability to lead. However, it still needs more references (I actually pointed out the places). Since I based the rewrite off the info already present, I could not clarify information that was vague or confusing. I made a note of them as comments (viewable in editing mode). Please clarify them if possible. --soum (0_o) 16:45, 28 April 2007 (UTC)Reply

Btw, how is her pseudonym pronounced? Shy-em, or Shim? Or something else? --soum (0_o) 22:14, 28 April 2007 (UTC)Reply

HEllo is crazy of shy'm ! I am, Pierro30 is a french boy ! I believe of my dream! english is very good !

my émail is pierre_souche@hotmail.com

can you speak with me please? thank —Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.242.52.150 (talk) 13:16, 7 October 2007 (UTC)Reply

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A good start, but needs more references. And of course, as I always say, a section about critical reception --soum (0_o) 13:38, 28 April 2007 (UTC)Reply

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