Talk:Phoenician settlement of North Africa
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Wiki Education assignment: The Phoenicians - Cunning Seafarers edit
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 January 2024 and 15 May 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Phoeniciansea2024 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Jking1304, ColinMc0529, Willbatchelder.
— Assignment last updated by MotoMoto1952 (talk) 13:08, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
Copyvios edit
there are significant copyvios in this article. entire paragraphs are copied with the lightest of edits or paraphrasing
some examples below. It needs a significant rewrite
The article
- Both overpopulation in the Levant and the allure of trade played a significant role in prompting the Phoenicians to migrate west.
The source [1]
- Both overpopulation in the Levant and the allure of trade played a significant role in the push towards migration.
The article
- new pottery and radiocarbon dates confirm that the Phoenicians started migrating westwards before the Assyrians imposed tribute on their homeland
The source [2]
- new pottery and radiocarbon dates confirm that the Phoenicians started migrating westwards before the Assyrian Empire put pressure on their homeland\
The article
- The densest Phoenician settlement in North Africa was on the coasts of present-day Tunisia,
The source [3]
- The densest Phoenician settlement in North Africa was to be found on on the coasts of what is now Tunisia,
The article
- The native peoples had to give up the largest and best part of the coast to the Phoenician settlers.
The source [4]
- To the Phoenicians the native peoples had to give up the largest and best part of the Northern coast
the rest of this paragraph is an extremely close paraphrase
The article
- The absence of Phoenician records detailing their migrations, combined with the fact that many sites remain either partially or completely unexcavated,
The source [5]
- With no Phoenician acount detailing their migrations, and with the majority of sites remaining either partially or completely unexcavated,
2001:8F8:1B69:1AFD:30A9:6768:87CA:4A82 (talk) 08:49, 3 May 2024 (UTC)