Talk:Kyle Palmieri

Latest comment: 2 years ago by GhostRiver in topic GA Review
Good articleKyle Palmieri has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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January 15, 2022Good article nomineeListed

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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Kyle Palmieri/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 17:45, 8 January 2022 (UTC)Reply


Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

Infobox and lede

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  • IPA pronunciation needs a reference, I recommend this one   Done
  • Delink "American" per MOS:OVERLINK   Done
  • Sentence needed in the first paragraph that he previously played for the Ducks and Devils, especially since the Devils are introduced sans-location and link in the second para   Done
  • He split his first three seasons with the team split repetition of "split"   Done

Early life

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  • Comma after "Smithtown, New York" per MOS:GEOCOMMA   Done
  • "moved to Smithtown for a few years" → "spent a few years in Smithtown"   Done

Playing career

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Amateur

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  • Spell out and link New Jersey Devils for "Devils-sponsored teams"   Done
  • "junior" should be capitalized in "16U Junior Devils"   Done
  • Comma after "New Jersey state final"   Done
  • Link hat-trick   Done
  • What team drafted him in 2008?   Done

Anaheim Ducks

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  • Comma after "to his linemate Nick Bonino"   Done
  • Comma after "He was returned to the AHL to begin the season"   Done
  • "plus/minus" → "plus–minus" with the WL   Done
  • "Upon being returned to the AHL after playing in seven games, Palmieri was selected" → "After playing in seven games for the Ducks, Palmieri was returned to the AHL, where he was selected"   Done
  • Link AHL All-Star Classic   Done
  • "first Ducks rookie" → "first Anaheim rookie" to reduce "Ducks" repetition in sentence   Done
  • Some sentence should be mentioned about the end of the lockout and when he was promoted, as I thought at first that the hat-trick came when he was still an Admiral   Done
  • second-youngest Ducks subject-verb agreement or missing word   Done
  • Link "Western Conference Quarterfinal" to 2013 Stanley Cup playoffs   Done
  • Link "2013-14 season"   Done
  • "Ducks' topline" → "Ducks' top line"   Done
  • "home-town" → "hometown"   Done
  • Postseason stats for the 2014 playoffs?   Done
  • Any idea why he was placed on injury reserve in December 2014?   Done

New Jersey Devils

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  • "second and third-round draft picks" → "second- and third-round picks"   Done
  • Comma after "re-joined coach John Hynes"   Done
  • Comma after "at the 2016 World Cup of Hockey"   Done
  • "while maintaining a shot-percentage of 13.5%" → "while maintaining a 13.5 shot percentage."   Done
  • "Upon rejoining the Devils, Palmieri reached the 500-games plateau" rejoining them after what? (The All-Star break, possibly?)   Done
    • It's the start of a new season. I will make it more clear
  • Stats for the 2018-19 season?   Done

New York Islanders

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  • In his debut game against the Flyers on April 9, Palmieri became the 512th skater to appear in an Islander regular-season game. Trivia   Done
  • "In the Islanders final" → "In the Islanders' final"   Done
  • "post-season goal" → "postseason goal"   Done
  • Mention that the Isles lost to Tampa in the finals   Done

Personal life

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References

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  • "The Athletic" should be the work, not publication, and should have "|url-access=subscription"   Done
  • Riverhead News Review, The New York Times, The Hockey News, and Sports Illustrated should all be work, not publication   Done
  • Additionally, "Sports Illustrated" should be in the publisher parameter of The Hockey News   Done
  • Per WP:ALLCAPS, [34] should be in title case   Done
  • "nj.com" is actually the website for The Star-Ledger, so that should be the work param   Done
  • Same for "Syracuse.com" and The Post-Standard   Done

General comments

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Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments, you know the drill by now. — GhostRiver 16:41, 9 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

GhostRiver, All issues have been addressed. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:38, 14 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
Everything looks good now, happy to pass! — GhostRiver 03:52, 15 January 2022 (UTC)Reply