Talk:Elizabeth Francis

Latest comment: 5 months ago by EytanMelech in topic Writing Style

Writing Style

edit

The writing of this article can use some work. It reads like a list of bullet points rather than a cohesive article. It would be beneficial to create some paragraphs and avoid calling her by her first name in every sentence.

EmilySarah99 (talk) 09:12, 30 December 2023 (UTC)Reply

Agreed. I did some revisions of the edits by ForsythiaJo for better flow. EytanMelech (talk) 14:00, 30 December 2023 (UTC)Reply