Pablo Honey edit
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I've listed this article for peer review because I think the article looks great but I am not a Wikipedia expert so I wanna make the article super good. Every other Radiohead album is good or featured so I just want Pablo Honey to catch up
Thanks, WeInTheUSA (talk) 18:40, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
@WeInTheUSA: I just checked the article and I did minor fixes. Would you review Basshunter in return? List of issues of found:
- Where is there 1,520,000 in reference number 89?
- Why there is "UK" and "US" everywhere? It looks for me like these countries has no its names.
- "and reached number seven on the UK Singles Chart when EMI rereleased it in September 1993" - "rereleased" than "re-released"?
- Reference number 20 to be removed or replaced if needed - it leads to Wikipedia article (not a source).
- "They also opened for PJ Harvey in New York City and Los Angeles." - is this correct sentence?
- "Critical reception" - I think there is chance for less direct quotations.
- "Clash argued that it "points towards everything that [Radiohead] would go on to be"." - "Clash argued"? I would add Editor from Clash argued" if the author is unknown. Same for "In 2007, Pitchfork wrote that".
- "In 1996, Colin Greenwood said" - from? He is from Daily Herald? Just noticed it's one of band members - add link for his biography and mention it that he is from the band. Same for the next reviewer.
- "O'Brien felt the album was derivative of Dinosaur Jr. and the Pixies,[61] and said in 2020" - if the first paid was said in 1997 I think it would be worth to mention t and noticed it.
- No reference for tracklist, credits and personnel section.
- I think it would be worth to mention double platinum from Canada in section "Release and promotion" and "1,520,000" number for sales in the United States as well.
- "Weekly charts" why there are "1993–1994" and "1996–1997"? You add just highest peaks for one year otherwise it was number 56 in 1996 and 1997 in Sweden?
- Links to redirects
Eurohunter (talk) 09:14, 3 June 2022 (UTC)