Glandular odontogenic cyst edit
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I've listed this article for peer review because much more information was added. The lead section was further expanded, and subsections were added to the article.
Thanks, Shayz2 (talk) 12:56, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
Comments from Cas Liber edit
Taking a look now....
- A glandular odontogenic cyst is a rare and benign odontogenic cyst developed at the odontogenic epithelium of the mandible or maxilla. - weird grammar, you mean something like "A glandular odontogenic cyst is a rare and benign odontogenic cyst arising from the odontogenic epithelium of the mandible or maxilla."?
- Originally, the cyst was labeled as 'sialo-odontogenic cyst' in 1987 - "was described as"?
- Following the initial classification, only 60 medically documented cases were present in the population by 2003. --> "Following the initial classification, only 60 medically documented cases had been described in the population by 2003." - also what is "in the population" here refer to?
- The cyst is established as its own biological growth after differentiation from other jaw cysts such as the ‘central mucoepidermoid carcinoma’, a popular type of neoplasm at the salivary glands - needs rewording. I ca't follow this
The wording of the lead is odd - I need to read some of the literature before embarking on any copyediting. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:55, 18 November 2020 (UTC)