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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 11 August 2018 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of international goals scored by Javier Hernández edit

List of international goals scored by Javier Hernández (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): SounderBruce 18:27, 24 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

In a burst of World Cup-induced mania last night, I expanded this list to a similar standard to fellow CONCACAF leaders Landon Donovan and Clint Dempsey. A few of the sources are direct match reports, which I can replace if someone finds issue with them; otherwise, the rest of the sources are (mostly) English news articles. SounderBruce 18:27, 24 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Quick comment all items that are linked in the sortable table should be linked every time. A lengthier review in due course! The Rambling Man (talk) 08:08, 3 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Gonzo_fan2007

  • Second sentence, first paragraph, replace "and has scored" with "with"
  • I am not a fan of "considered to be" at the end of the first paragraph ... I would just say "is" and let the sources speak for themselves.
  • First sentence, second paragraph, drop "had" from "grandfather had played"
  • First sentence, second paragraph is long winded. Recommend splitting into two after "his father coached"
  • Recommend replacing semi-colon with period in "...France and Argentina; his first goal..."

The tables and the only photo on the page look good. Nice work SounderBruce! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:14, 2 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: Thanks for the review. I have made all the changes you suggested. SounderBruce 20:37, 2 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Support Looks good! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:44, 2 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support I started this list not a while ago, but SounderBruce just took it to the next level. Very well-written introduction--gives a nice overview and background. Thoroughly referenced for each goal scored. It's a knock-out and makes me feel bad that I was not as through when I started it to lessen the amount of work that went into it. --Chlorineer (talk) 20:48, 2 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Source review – All of the sources appear to be well-formatted, and the link-checker shows no issues. Spot-checks of refs 47, 52, and 56 show no verifiability concerns. My only complaint is that I don't think the Daily Star (ref 40) can be considered a reliable source. It's one of a group of British tabloids of questionable reliability. I'd put it below the Daily Mail, which has had an RFC declare that it is generally unreliable. It should be possible to find something reliable to replace this. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:19, 7 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • @Giants2008: Replaced the Daily Star reference with an ESPN match report, as a few Google searches didn't turn up any reliable news reports. SounderBruce 23:54, 7 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
      • The new source looks good to me. Since that was my sole concern, I'd say this source review has been passed. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:08, 8 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Not spotting any issues myself, promoting. --PresN 03:01, 10 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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