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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 18:34:45 27 August 2019 (UTC) [1].

List of ACF Fiorentina seasons edit

List of ACF Fiorentina seasons (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): —Chrisportelli (talk) 10:59, 2 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I think it matches the Featured List nomination criteria as well as fits with other similar articles on club seasons. —Chrisportelli (talk) 10:59, 2 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:38, 20 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]


  • Comments
  • The lead image's caption isn't a complete sentence, so it needs no period.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 18:29, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • It does need alt text.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 18:29, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The club's fortunes quickly turned in the early 2000s as they entered administration in the wake of the 2001–02 season." - This hardly seems like a quick change (going from a successful 1955–56 season to the misfortunes of 2001–02. Perhaps it would be helpful to add prose covering each promotion and relegation (only some are currently covered) as well as a general overview of successful & less successful periods in the club's history.
 Reworded the introduction to include more details —Chrisportelli (talk) 18:29, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'm not sure that the count of seasons played in each Serie is correct (or maybe it is). It says 6 seasons were played in Serie B, but I count 5, unless the 1945–46 Serie A-B season is counted. If is counted as a Serie B season, shouldn't it also be counted as a Serie A season? Maybe it's the "or equivalent" part at the end of the sentence. If this is the case, it would probably be best to indicate in parenthesis which former classifications are counted toward each current classification.
 The Serie A-B was the highest level of league football in Italy, equivalent to today's Serie A, so the count has ben added for Serie A —Chrisportelli (talk) 18:29, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Several top scorers are still in need of {{sortname}}.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 18:29, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any links to players on Italian Wikipeida will need to be formatted such as this: {{sort|Casarsa, Gianfranco|[[:it:Gianfranco Casarsa|Gianfranco Casarsa]]}} in order to sort by last names.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 18:29, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the three instances of shared capocannoniere awards, it might be interesting to know what club the co-winner played for.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 18:29, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • There's a problem with the ISBN on reference 6.
 Not sure if correct ISBN, as the one used is provided by FIGC —Chrisportelli (talk) 18:29, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:38, 20 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Even more comments from ChrisTheDude
    • "After a 55-year spell in the top division, Fiorentina was relegated to Serie B" - you still need to say when this actually was. Readers shouldn't have to look back to an earlier paragraph and then do mentally arithmetic to work out when "55 years later" was
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 19:02, 20 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • "saw him finish as the club top-scorer" => "saw him finish as the club's top scorer"
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 19:02, 20 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • " the fourth-level" => " the fourth level"
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 19:02, 20 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • "Records of competitions such as Mitropa Cup and the Anglo-Italian League Cup are not included." - except they now are :-)
 :) —Chrisportelli (talk) 19:02, 20 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • "With Serie B set for an expansion to 24 clubs for 2003–04, owner family, the Della Valle family," - this is still not correct English grammar. It should be "With Serie B set for an expansion to 24 clubs for 2003–04, the club's owners, the Della Valle family," (as I believe I said above, in fact)
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 19:13, 20 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "the 1955–56 season" season should be within the pipe. Many examples of this.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Real Madrid is piped to a redirect.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "(lost 2–0 to ..." losing ... Plus link to the article about the final. Or if not, the specific Champions League (like you do to the Coppa Italia articles linked in the lead).
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Their second league title" Reiterate Fiorentina here, the last club you mention is Rangers.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • " near relegation finishes" near-relegation should be hyphenated in this context.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "third Serie A title in the 1981–82 season, however they lost the title " repetitive use of title, needs reworking.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • " losing again to Juventus 3–1 on aggregate" they didn't lose 3-1 on aggregate last time.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Fiorentina was relegated" previously you've referred to Fiorentina in the plural.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Supercoppa Italiana" specific year article should be linked.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "played 82 seasons in Serie A, seven in Serie B and one season in Serie D " MOS:NUM cats and dogs (82/7/1) or (eighty-two/seven/one).
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • I would much rather see the use of the {{ill}} template for those articles which only exist at Italian Wikipedia. That way it encourages someone to create the articles rather than just rely on it.wiki.
 Done —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why are some top scorers in bold?
Top scorers in bold are those who were also top scorers within Fiorentina's league division that season. This has been added as a note in the introduction. —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (REJOICE!) 11:34, 22 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Chrisportelli: Are you still working on this? --PresN 01:47, 12 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@PresN: Apologies, wasn't keeping track of the article. I have completed the necessary changes as suggested —Chrisportelli (talk) 20:18, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; not yet promoting due to one issue: you're using bolding to denote information, but that's not enough per WP:ACCESS as it's invisible to people with poor eyesight or an audio-based browser. You'll need to denote that with an additional sign, like is done for the color coded cells (i.e. put a {{dagger}} or * or something in the cell). --PresN 01:48, 22 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I've added a dagger symbol next to the top-scorers so it should be easier to notice. —Chrisportelli (talk) 17:52, 22 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting. --PresN 18:34, 27 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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