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Help editing my Sandbox

Please help me with editing my sand box that has information a new section in the data mining section for the social media Wikipedia page. Here is the link for my sandbox https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emkim123/sandbox

Emkim123 (talk) 15:24, 18 April 2018 (UTC)-

Welcome to Wikipedia! It looks like you've already edited your sandbox. If you want to add what you wrote to the social media page, you can suggest that it be added on its talk page, Talk:Social media. — pythoncoder  (talk | contribs) 16:33, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

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It may sound better to say “there are 4 general steps that..”

Include periods after numbered points.

For number two: parallelism! Change “with precision” to precisely or “accurately” to with accuracy.

Citation placement: possibly move citation number to the final place that you used the information from it? For example, move citation one to the end of the 4 point but I'm not 100% sure about this edit.

For the “these for steps” part, a comma is needed before but and after techniques.

The sentence could be rearranged to sound more neutral, for example, “although these for steps are a general basis…, data mining is subject to the discretion of the company that is implementing it”

The next sentence could be rearranged to make more sense (possibly use a colon instead of “and that is” after data mining)

May be beneficial to add more information about the two categories “supervised vs unsupervised”

The part about the problems with data mining may be better to be included in a negatives or limitations section in the page and it should be cited.

Also, make sure you do not use phrases like "some people say" or "some companies..."

Overall, these are very good additions!

Glaudeman040 (talk) 15:50, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

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