Template:Did you know nominations/Stony Brook (Fishing Creek)

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Redtigerxyz Talk 06:02, 21 June 2014 (UTC)

Stony Brook (Fishing Creek) edit

The lower reaches of Stony Brook

Moved to mainspace by Jakec (talk). Self nominated at 22:18, 5 June 2014 (UTC).

  • Article is long enough, hook is cited by a reliable source in the article, expanded within 5 days, and image is good and licensed properly.--Dom497 (talk) 20:31, 6 June 2014 (UTC)
  • Hook reworded - do ferns really "reside" anywhere? It's not like they can move! Edwardx (talk) 20:01, 7 June 2014 (UTC)
  • @Edwardx: I've also changed the wording in the article. --Jakob (talk) 20:21, 7 June 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks. Slightly tweaked hook - by moving "valley" to the end, we can trim two words. If you don't like it, you can always change it back. Edwardx (talk) 20:59, 7 June 2014 (UTC)
  • Dom497, you should also check the sources for close paraphrasing. Yoninah (talk) 23:31, 7 June 2014 (UTC)
  • From the sources I can access there seems to be no problem. I've copy-edited it a little anyway, so I'm giving it a further tick. Belle (talk) 10:16, 10 June 2014 (UTC)