Template:Did you know nominations/Sendai River

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 03:51, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

Sendai River edit

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... that sediments from the Sendai River (pictured) in Tottori Prefecture, Japan, created and replenish the Tottori Sand Dunes?

Created/expanded by Prburley (talk). Self nom at 20:15, 22 August 2012 (UTC)

All the official criteria are met (new, RS, hook, size, etc.), but there are many spelling and wording issues that prevent this from being natural English. I've fixed some, but there are more that I don't have time to fix. This will be ready for approval as soon as the spelling and wording problems are resolved. Nyttend (talk) 21:49, 22 August 2012 (UTC)

No spelling errors found, will work on wording. Prburley (talk) 23:36, 23 August 2012 (UTC)

I checked back just now, and I had a much harder time finding problems; thanks for the work. I resolved what few remaining issues I could see, and I believe that this article is now ready to go. Nyttend (talk) 20:27, 24 August 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for your review. Translation work for this article was really tough. Prburley (talk) 10:49, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

Just adding another tick lest the first one get lost and this nomination be unnecessarily delayed. Nyttend (talk) 22:43, 31 August 2012 (UTC)