Template:Did you know nominations/Manilal Dwivedi

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:20, 18 August 2019 (UTC)

Manilal Dwivedi

Improved to Good Article status by Gazal world (talk). Self-nominated at 20:40, 21 July 2019 (UTC).

  • Just a comment for now, but it might be a good idea to focus on the fact that the reason why he wasn't able to attend was due to financial constraints, or to focus on the fact that he couldn't attend. Something like "although Gujarati writer Manilal Dwivedi... he was unable to attend for financial reasons?". Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:43, 25 July 2019 (UTC)
  • @Narutolovehinata5: Thanks for your suggestion. Please update the hook accordingly. --Gazal world (talk) 12:51, 25 July 2019 (UTC)
Thanks. I've changed the hook accordingly. Since I added a new hook fact, a new reviewer will be needed here. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 13:00, 25 July 2019 (UTC)
  • Full review needed from new reviewer now that hooks have been updated. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:56, 15 August 2019 (UTC)
  • Recent GA, neutral, hook interesting and inline cited (offline citation). Hook is bit long (179 characters) but below 200 character limit. QPQ done with help of other editor. Good to go. -Nizil (talk) 05:15, 17 August 2019 (UTC)