- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:17, 1 November 2016 (UTC)
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Jason Graae edit
- ... that Jason Graae had to use his ad libbing skills when a fake moustache "started to take on a life of its own" on the opening night of Little Me?
- (ALT1): ... that in the one-man play Fully Committed, Jason Graae handles 30 different roles in 80 minutes with "low-key charm as well as pile-driving obnoxiousness with equal skill"?
- (ALT2): ... that on the cover of his album of Charles Strouse songs, Jason Graae appears "wearing nothing but a sly smile, a top hat (not on his head) and a cane"?
- (ALT2a): ... that Jason Graae wears nothing but the biggest top hat he could find and a "sly smile" for the cover of his album of Charles Strouse songs You're Never Fully Dressed Without a Smile?
- (ALT2b): ... that on one album cover, Jason Graae wears "nothing but a sly smile, a top hat (not on his head) and a cane" – having "searched long and hard for the biggest hat [he] could find"?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Severn Railway Bridge
- Comments:
- I have listed this as a BLP expansion as it started as a 2127 byte unreferenced BLP. Here is a cumulative diff of the changes I have made. This is also a x5 expansion: 9908 / 1407 = 7.04... times.
- The article is still classed as a stub but I have requested a reassessment from the Biography WikiProject and am confident that this is not a stub.
- The source to support the ALT0 hook is: Heymont, George (3 July 2013). "The Right Girl in the Right Place at the Right Time". Huffington Post. Retrieved 30 September 2016.
On opening night, Graae's quick wit (he's a master at ad libbing onstage) came in handy when a fake moustache started to take on a life of its own. Although he had performed Little Me in concert form in Los Angeles, this was Graae's first outing in a fully-staged production. As expected, he was absolutely hilarious.
- The source to support the ALT1 hook is: Henerson, Evan (2004). "'Fully Committed' to the role Jason Graae prepares a hearty buffet of characters". Los Angeles Daily News. Retrieved 30 September 2016.
The very funny "Committed" calls for one performer to tackle some 30 roles at breakneck speed in 80 minutes ... Graae can play low-key charm as well as pile-driving obnoxiousness with equal skill
- The source to support the ALT2 hook and its variants (my preference amongst these is ALT2a) is: O'haire, Patricia (13 October 1996). "Naked Ambition Broadway Star Jason Graae Reveals Why he's Dressing Down to give his Career a Leg Up". New York Daily News. Retrieved 1 October 2016.
No one could tell if he was blushing when he posed for the photo for his album cover, either. In the photo, he's starkers wearing nothing but a sly smile, a top hat (not on his head) and a cane. Like he'd just stepped out of the shower. Well, it fits the album, which is titled, "You're Never Fully Dressed Without a Smile: Jason Graae Sings Charles Strouse." ... So I agreed. "I might also say I searched long and hard for the biggest hat I could find."
2x expanded and sourced (BLP) by EdChem (talk). Self-nominated at 13:45, 30 September 2016 (UTC).
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No issues found with article, ready for human review.
- ✓ This biographical article has been expanded from 1414 chars to 9998 chars since 22:42, 16 March 2016 (UTC), a 7.07-fold expansion
- ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 9998 characters
- ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
- Note that this is a biographical article about a living person. All claims must be cited to a reliable source.
- ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
- ? A copyright violation is suspected by an automated tool, with 34.2% confidence. (confirm)
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- ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 141 characters
- ✓ The hook ALT1 is an appropriate length at 167 characters
- ✓ The hook ALT2 is an appropriate length at 147 characters
- ✓ The hook ALT3 is an appropriate length at 178 characters
- ✓ The hook ALT4 is an appropriate length at 172 characters
- ✓ EdChem has more than 5 DYK credits. A QPQ review of Template:Did you know nominations/Severn Railway Bridge was performed for this nomination.
Automatically reviewed by DYKReviewBot. This is not a substitute for a human review. Please report any issues with the bot. --DYKReviewBot (report bugs) 20:50, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
The article expansion is recent enough, long enough and is within policy regarding neutrality, sourcing and avoidance of close paraphrase and copyvio issues. Earwig's detection of several low to mid-range confidence matches all appear related various quotations and titles. The hooks are within length, interesting an are all properly sourced. QPQ has been met. @EdChem:, nicely done. Alansohn (talk) 22:41, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
