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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 10:23, 6 September 2018 (UTC)

Accelerators (comics) edit

Created/expanded by Argento Surfer (talk). Nominated by Angga1061 (talk) at 16:45, 25 August 2018 (UTC).

Substantial Good article, on excellent sources, no copyvio obvious. The hook has two terms, protagonist and antagonist, that don't appear in the article. I'd find "... encounters future versions of himself at various ages and states of sanity" more interesting. - Article: in the infobox, the three volume titles are all italic, in the text sometimes not, sometimes in quotation marks, - I think the plot is confusing enough, - keep that consistent ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:41, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
So how about this alternate hook?
ALT1: ... that in the comic book The Accelerators, the main character meets future versions of himself at various ages and states of sanity? —Angga1061 05:00, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
Thank you, I like that better, will leave it to the prep builder. We may get problems because it's from the plot, so please have an alternative in mind ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:31, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
  • Yes, please provide an alt that deals with the real world in some way, per Rule C6. Yoninah (talk) 22:33, 5 September 2018 (UTC)
O.K., I hope this one meets the rule:
ALT2: ... that the comic book The Accelerators was originally conceived by Ronnie Porto as a screenplay? —Angga1061 (talk) 04:28, 6 September 2018 (UTC)
Thank you. Suggesting to shorten it, unless we expect people to know the man ;)
ALT3: ... that the comic book The Accelerators was originally conceived as a screenplay?
, ALT3 preferred --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:28, 6 September 2018 (UTC)