I'm pretty new to Wikipedia edits so I wouldn't dare make any major changes to the article, but just saying that this article is very largely based on the UN page on the same topic (link in References) but rather roughly adapted with some pretty incomprehensible English mistakes. I've tried to clean up some of them but I can't figure out what some others actually mean. The article looks like it's been translated from another language for some reason - would be grateful if someone with more experience tried to make sense of some of the sentences in there and checked the quotes to make sure they're accurate. Hope this helps.
Tom-CL21 (talk) 17:39, 24 December 2016 (UTC)
Hey guys, just a heads up -- I'm going to be comprehensively editing this article for the next few weeks as part of an undergraduate technical editing course. These edits will primarily consist of structural changes, but I'm also focused on content clarity and style. Haydenstephens (talk) 20:18, 5 March 2018 (UTC)