Talk:Tyan Taylor/GA1

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 20:25, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

  • Taylor was named to the New South Wales team --> Named? Appointed, maybe? I see this type of wording throughout the article as well, so try to fix it in other places as well.
    • Changed two of them: selected, awarded. --LauraHale (talk) 20:57, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
  • Personal --> Personal life
  • A few paragraphs are way too small, and should be bonded together.
    • Did that for this one. Worried that putting them into fewer paragraphs would make the paragraphs look more disjointed as the together in one paragraph themes work. --LauraHale (talk) 21:00, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
  • Other than that, I have found no issues with the article. Great work!
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