Talk:Tropical Depression Eight (1981)
Latest comment: 6 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review
Tropical Depression Eight (1981) has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: August 8, 2017. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contribs) 01:58, 6 August 2017 (UTC)
- "...the remnant low resumed its northeastward motion, before entering Louisiana and dissipating on September 1." - Comma is unnecessary.
- "and damage or deroofed several homes and buildings, including at the Strand Historic District." - Damaged.
- You use "about" in the impact section frequently. Try to alternative words.
- "All creeks exceeded their banks and the Guadalupe and San Marcos rivers rising sharply" - Rising --> rose
- "The Boggy Creek after exceeded its banks" - Eh?
- "In Galveston, flooding primarily effected the first floor of buildings damaged by the tornado." Affected
Otherwise, this article looks in good shape. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 01:58, 6 August 2017 (UTC)