Talk:Somalia at the 2016 Summer Olympics
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review
Somalia at the 2016 Summer Olympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: October 16, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:55, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
Will do this soon. JAGUAR 14:55, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- "Other Somalian nations were competed at the 2016 Summer Olympics" - you mean nationals?
- " Prior to the competition, she spoke of the difference in the quality of the training facilities in Somalia compared to those in countries such as Jamaica and the United States" - would be good if this could be elaborated further. You could pull the quote given in the source
- "she came in 8th and last place with a time of 1:10:14" - why not just "last place"?
- No dead links
- DAB links OK
Another really short one. Will place on hold until all are clarified JAGUAR 17:54, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Jaguar: Thanks for reviewing. Fixed the nations to nationals, added those quote and trimmed the 8th bit. Miyagawa (talk) 18:28, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks! Another one good to go. JAGUAR 18:32, 16 October 2016 (UTC)