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A fact from Sigismund Ernuszt appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 26 May 2016 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
I'll give this a review. Wizardman 04:33, 7 February 2017 (UTC)Reply
I forgot I had any reviews tagged, sorry about that; will do in the next day or so. Wizardman 16:44, 19 February 2017 (UTC)Reply
Man I'm falling down on the job this month. Anyway, here's what I found:
"Ludovico Carbone who was one of his professors wrote a book about Matthias Corvinus in the form of a dialogue with Ernuszt." could this be reworded? right now it doesn't feel like it fits with the paragraph, and it took me several reads to get what it was trying to say. (if nothing else it needs commas added)
"Vladislaus Jagiellon was elected king on 15 July.[19] Ernuszt attended his coronation in Székesfehérvár in September." Combining these two sentences would make for better readability.
"The accounts cover the period between 1 February 1494, and 31 December 1495." rm comma
I'm not sure if there's an easy fix, but the prose at times does feel choppy, like it's jumping from fact to fact rather than flowing. With a biography from centuries ago the lack of information makes it difficult so I won't keep it from GA status solely for that reason, but I would like to see some fine-tuning, namely in the earlier sections, before I pass it.
I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 03:22, 24 February 2017 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for your review. I hope I fixed the above issues. I will also try to modify the text during the weekend. Borsoka (talk) 13:45, 24 February 2017 (UTC)Reply
Wizardman, I would be grateful if you could continue your review, because I will not be able to address your concerns for a couple of days after 15th March. Thank you for your work. Borsoka (talk) 15:57, 5 March 2017 (UTC)Reply
Will check now. Sorry for the delay, not sure what's been going on with me lately; usually I'm the one yelling at other reviewers to get a move on. Wizardman 21:20, 5 March 2017 (UTC)Reply
Everything looks good now, so I'll pass this as a GA. Wizardman 22:19, 5 March 2017 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for your support. Have a nice week. Borsoka (talk) 02:20, 6 March 2017 (UTC)Reply
