Talk:River Works station

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:02, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "to General Electric Aviation employees" isn't the company called "GE Aviation"?
  •  Done
• "MassDOT, " expand before using this.
  •  Done
• Lynn station is linked, but nothing for West Lynn?
  • ? I'm not sure what you mean by this. Where?
• "freight sidings" link?
  •  Done
• "grade crossing" link?
  •  Done
• "in 1837. By 1852" bit repetitive.
  •  Done Reworded.
• You have several bold names, like G.E. Works but they don't all exist as redirects back to this article.
  •  Done Redirects created.
• "Boston, Revere Beach & Lynn Railroad" it was "and" in the lead.
  •  Done
• "railroad.[21][14]:77 " order.
  •  Done
• "The River Works plant" overlinked.
  •  Done
• "1952.[30][23][31]" order.
  •  Done
• "timetables.[34][35][36][37] " likewise.
  • Those appear to already be in order.
• "seven daily inbound boardings in 1983, and 27 in 2018" 7/27 or seven/twenty-seven.
  •  Done
• Is that reference really page 0?
  • It's the inside front cover, what would be page 0 given the existing pagination. I can't think of a better way to indicate that with {{rp}}.
• "schedules based on existing Saturday schedules were in effect from March 16 to June 23, 2020, due to the COVID-19 pandemic. These schedules" schedules/schedules/schedules...
  •  Done Reworded.
• "July 1, 2020–June 30, 2021" spaced en-dash.
  •  Done
• "made accessible, with"
  • ? Not sure what change you're suggesting here.
• "with MassDOT in" again, spell it out.
  •  Done
• Ref 46 could use an endash not a hyphen.
  •  Done

That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:25, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the detailed review! I've addressed most of your comments, with clarification needed on a few. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 06:07, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

I looked at the ?'s and can't see any problems! Promoting. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:08, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 10:04, 13 September 2021 (UTC)

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• ... that River Works station is only for use by GE Aviation employees? Source: Boston Globe: "The trains only stop for employees of the nearby General Electric Co. aviation plant."
  • ALT1:... that River Works station is the only private station on the MBTA Commuter Rail system? (same source: "It's the only station of its kind in the system...")

• Reviewed: Actual play

Improved to Good Article status by Pi.1415926535 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:10, 2 September 2021 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good to me. New enough, long enough, well-written, well-sourced, QPQ is done, no copyvios, and hook is cited. jp×g 22:50, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

ALT0 to T:DYK/P4