Talk:Railroaders Memorial Museum

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Public Thing in topic Article body

Images to categorize edit

A large bundle of images of the museum can be found in commons:Category:Media needing categories as of 19 June 2017. Go and give them the appropriate commons category. ---------User:DanTD (talk) 13:44, 20 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

Never mind, I already did them all. ---------User:DanTD (talk) 03:44, 21 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

Off Topic Classification edit

I've added the off topic maintenance tag since the middle three paragraphs of the opening section seem to have little related to the museum itself and more about the city of Altoona. If these are intended to talk about the museum, they may need reworded in order to clear that up. WesleyM77 (talk) 12:24, 7 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Feels like those three paragraphs could be their own section in the Altoona, Pennsylvania page. WesleyM77 (talk) 12:25, 7 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Looks like this was cleaned up! — Preceding unsigned comment added by WesleyM77 (talkcontribs) 20:30, 3 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

The second paragraph in the article's introduction still seems to read like a history of railroading in the city of Altoona. I'd propose removing it entirely and rewriting the introduction. The Kentucky Railway Museum article might serve as a good model here. Public Thing (talk) 20:58, 5 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Article body edit

Using the Kentucky Railway Museum article as a guide, it might be helpful to rewrite the History section in paragraph form. Information about the rolling stock might also be rewritten in paragraph form and split into a separate section. The timeline could perhaps be removed when these sections have been written. Public Thing (talk) 17:25, 12 August 2021 (UTC)Reply