Talk:Portal Reloaded/GA1
Latest comment: 1 hour ago by Cukie Gherkin in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Nominator: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 20:07, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 18:39, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Gameplay
- Should use consistent terminology for the multiplayer mode
Development and release
- I would recommend cutting off the quote as "celebration of all [Portal's] achievements"
Reception
- "Lane argued that the looks of Portal Reloaded were not on the level of Portal 2." This feels a little awkwardly placed.
- "but he admitted that the additional elements in the puzzles could cause frustration occasionally." I think you could justify replacing "but he admitted that" with "but felt that"
Spotcheck
Checked the following sources, and am comfortable that the article does an adequate job citing information from these sources correctly: [1] [2] [3] [4]
@Vacant0: Due to the relative triviality of any issues I've found with the article, I'm going to pass it, though would recommend making these few fixes. Nice job. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 19:16, 31 August 2024 (UTC)