Talk:Plug & Pray

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Tgeller in topic Style

Robotics attention needed edit

  • Expand if possible
  • Check citations
  • Reassess and add importance

Chaosdruid (talk) 13:05, 14 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

Style edit

Um, this is written like it was someone plugging a documentary

"Eloquent and tactful, he questions the prevailing discourses on new technologies, and their ethical relationships to human life. "

Yeah, what does "Eloquent and tactful" add to that sentence, or article, in terms of content? That isn't even a cited quote from a reviewer or anything. Also, all 5 citations are just about when and where it screened and the awards it won. I understand a synopsis doesn't need a citation every 6 words, but if you're going make an article to jerk off the people involved with this film, at least try to get half of statements backed up facts and only use the flowery bullshit for the more inherently subjective sections of an article like reception. -- (talk) 19:34, 2 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

I saw and changed some of that text before reading your comment. I agree completely, and welcome additional edits. --tgeller (talk) 15:11, 28 August 2015 (UTC)Reply