Talk:New Jersey's 1927 biannual elections proposal/GA1

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 20:54, 30 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Picking this one up. Review to follow after the bot kicks in. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:54, 30 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

An expertly crafted article by an experienced editor writing on an esoteric subject. I could just pass it as is, but some minor stuff to prove for the record that I did read it, and since it is probably bound for FAC.

  • Could not find any spelling errors or duplicate links
  • "Dr. Frank A. Vizetelly" We don't normally use academic titles (MOS:DR)
In this case, the legislature was using him as an expert and so I'm trying to show why he was (in their view) qualified.
  • Source review:
    • Provide access dates for the URLs. This will help the archive bot if the links decay.
    • Consider adding a via=newspapers.com cards
    • Do not abbreviate New Jersey (MOS:ACRO)
    • Where the name of the newspaper does not include the location, we normally add a location card to the reference. (WP:CITE)
    • Any reason why The Evening Courier is the only redlinked newspaper?
I think I've gotten everything. Thanks for taking this on.--Wehwalt (talk) 17:27, 2 December 2022 (UTC)Reply
Still curious as to what motivated you to take it on. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:28, 2 December 2022 (UTC)Reply


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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    Some MOS issues, but not in these sections, so okay
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    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:  
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):  
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:  
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:  
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
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