Talk:Maria Dunn

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GA ReviewEdit

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 04:33, 21 June 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:33, 21 June 2018 (UTC)

  • Ref 2 is dead.
  • Any college sports info from the NAIA?
  • "Dunn trained for the 2012 Summer Olympics with Roy Wood in the city of Wigan. She stayed with his family while practicing freestyle wrestling." Merge sentences.
  • Some pronouns should replace "Dunn" to avoid using the same word to start consecutive sentences.
  • "Dunn won silver at the 2002 Oceania Championships [16] and won gold at the 2007,[17] 2008,[18]and 2010 Oceania Championships.[19]" Move Ref 16 to the comma and space needed after Ref 18.
    • added space, also added a comma, seems to make sense where I put it. Kees08 (Talk)
  • "She lost to New Zealand's Tayla Ford in the championship match." In which year?
  • refs should have {{free access}} templates or something similar.

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:10, 21 June 2018 (UTC)

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