Talk:Lookin' out My Back Door

Requested move

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The result of the move request was: moved to Lookin' Out My Back Door. LtPowers' analysis is supported by Google book search, which includes results from Billboard. Favonian (talk) 12:12, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

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Lookin' out My Back Door → Lookin' Out My Back Door – The casing rules do not say that we should always leave “out” in the middle of a title lowercased. Other titles of creative works, such as Up Out My Face, Cleanin' Out My Closet, and The Colour Out of Space also uppercase an internal “out”. Another user moved this page to Lookin' Out My Back Door back in 2007, after which someone else moved it back to the current page and changed the uppercased version to a redirect to this page. Rather than undo that, I thought it best to treat this as controversial. MacMog (talk) 04:40, 26 November 2011 (UTC)

• A tough one. Strictly speaking, "out" appears to be functioning as a preposition, "out my back door" being the prepositional phrase. But its use here also resembles adverbial use, modifying "lookin'". Furthermore, the phrase is really a shortening of the more complete "Lookin' Out of My Back Door"... were that the title, "Out" would be capitalized as the first word of a two-word preposition. Given points two and three, I think we can safely ignore point 1 and go ahead and capitalize "Out"... but it's really a toss-up. Powers ^T 01:36, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
• Support. The lower-case "out" just looks weird. Walrasiad (talk) 06:26, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

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Structure of the page

Hey all,

What do you think could be done to improve the "structure" of this page? I am a novice in the Wikipedia world but I really love CCR and would like to improve the page. Any ideas? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bizstudent101 (talk • contribs) 02:04, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

Check out some of our featured articles on songs, like Layla or Hey Jude. Those are examples of our best work, and they may show the path toward improving this article. Powers ^T 21:26, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

What do you think about having a "background" section and maybe a section that discusses the writing and recordings, similar to both pages that you recommended above? Bizstudent101 (talk) 01:52, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

That sounds fine. You don't have to get prior approval for every edit you want to make. Just make sure your contributions refer to reliable secondary sources and follow our neutral point-of-view policy. Powers ^T 14:27, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

Requested move 29 September 2020

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Moved as proposed. Consensus is clear. BD2412 T 03:20, 21 November 2020 (UTC)

Lookin' Out My Back Door → Lookin' out My Back Door – Per MOS:TITLECAPS, 'out' is a preposition ("Where am I lookin'? Out my back door").

The 2011 move request by MacMog mainly refers to some incomparable examples with a capitalized 'out'; in Cleanin' Out My Closet it's a particle in a phrasal verb ("What am I cleaning out? My closet"; and in contrast to prepositions in phrasal verbs, particles can be preceded by the object: "cleaning it out") and in The Colour Out of Space it's part of a compound preposition. (The third example, Up Out My Face, might also be mis-capitalized.) The most sensical point in that discussion was made by LtPowers, 'out' being a shortening of the compound preposition 'out of'. But i.m.o. that doesn't make 'out' not a preposition. See also the definition by Oxford Dictionary: "preposition; through to the outside", and the remark under 'Usage': "The use of out as a preposition (rather than the standard prepositional phrase out of), as in he threw it out the window, [..]".

With kind regards — Mar(c). ^[talk] 22:13, 29 September 2020 (UTC) —Relisting. ~ after almost two weeks of silence, per WP:RMB: "Consider relisting 8-day-old discussions with minimal participation." Please tell me if this is too soon or not the best way to draw attention to (ask for some more input in) this request. — Mar(c). ^[talk] 19:55, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Oof. I'm sympathetic, Mar(c). You're probably right that a strict reading of the rules suggests a reversion to the lowercase "out". But something just looks wrong about it. And Favonian, in the closing comment, also cited Google Books results, which seem to still support the capital 'O'. Of course, we have our own style and are not subject to what other publications do. In the end, I don't think it matters much either way, though. Powers ^T 18:01, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

Hey LtPowers, thank you for your response! I guess I only read the short discussion itself; I didn't notice the mentioning of Google Books. It seems to me that capitalizing every word (start case) is quite widely used in/around the music industry (much more than in/around the movie industry), so those Google Books statistics don't surprize me. I didn't even find one Lookin' out My Back Door in the book results, and as far as any style guides are used in those books, from what I saw it's either start case, some (other) variant of title case, or a mix of case styles ranging from start case to sentence case. But anyway, like you said, we have our own style guide.

And when does a title look wrong? To me, a needlessly capitalized preposition looks wrong, as does an un-capitalized particle of a phrasal verb, because I got accustomed to these words having a different linguistic meaning in titles, depending on their (non)capitalization. Like Come on Eileen (not sure what I should think that means) isn't the same as Come On Eileen (phrasal verb, imperative), and Plug in Baby (ehm, who put that thing where?!) isn't the same as Plug In Baby (actually the adjective 'plug-in'). So unless I missed the actual (or some double) meaning of 'looking out' a back door —English isn't my first language— 'out' is just a preposition and should therefore be lowercased.

With kind regards — Mar(c). ^[talk] 22:30, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

Ah, interesting. Perhaps the influence of the idiomatic meaning of "looking out" as "being watchful" (e.g., "looking out for trouble") is colorizing the perception here. It appears you're correct that "out" is functioning as a preposition, but "looking out" is such a common phrasal verb that the "proper" capitalization looks wrong. Powers ^T 15:55, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

• Support. Out clearly is a preposition here, so it should be "Lookin' out My Back Door" (and I think this looks just fine). Darkday (talk) 17:36, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
• Oppose Regardless of what is technically correct, Wikipedia goes by the WP:RS, and they all use the uppercase "O", including the song's cover art. I don't know how much clearer you can get._{ZXCVBNM (TALK)} 18:40, 7 October 2020 (UTC)

  The cover also capitalizes "The", though, which we'd never do in the middle of a title. Powers ^T 02:01, 10 October 2020 (UTC)

  Also, most (if not all) reliable sources have their own style guides; why does MOS:TITLECAPS even exist if we let other sources' capitalization or capitalization rules supersede it? With kind regards — Mar(c). ^[talk] 03:38, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• Support. It's a preposition here, and per the MoS it should not be capitalized. Rreagan007 (talk) 23:12, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
• Support per MOS:MUSICCAPS. "Out" is being used as a preposition, not an adjective. Therefore, should be lowercase since it's a preposition with less than 3 letters.  Bait30  ^{Talk 2 me pls?} 07:05, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
• Support per nom. It's our style and looks less wrong to use lowercase. Note that the album cover caps all words including "The" in Long As I Can See the Light, but we don't ape that. Dicklyon (talk) 21:47, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

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Dinosaur Victrola

My thoughts on the phrase "Dinosaur Victrola listening to Buck Omens".

The only reference to Victrola I could find on the web (apart from this song's lyrics) was to old 78rpm Victrola record players.

So it seems dinosaur Victrola refers to listening to old 78rpm records on a vintage Victrola record player.

Recording round 1970 Owens would have recorded on 45s and 33 LPs so perhaps listening to Buck Owens on 78 records may be a whimsical impossability meant to delight Fogerty's 3 year old son (who Fogerty said he wrote the song for).

But I did find web references to Buck Owens 78 records from Portugal. So who knows? GraL (talk) 02:09, 22 February 2024 (UTC)

(Correction)

It was Fogerty who was recording to 45s and 33s around 1970, not Owens.

Owens was active from 1945 and the last 78s were being made to 1955. So Buck Owens 78s are quite feasible. GraL (talk) 02:27, 22 February 2024 (UTC)