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Lazarus Aaronson married Margaret Olive Axford in 1950 they had one son David and lived at 26 Westbourne Terrace Road Paddington before moving to Harpenden Hertfordshire in 1959.16:26, 30 June 2015 (UTC)78.149.8.126 (talk)
Can tuberculosis, diabetes, socialist, economics, City of London College and coronary heart disease be wikilinked? No problem in repeating links from the lead.
Linked all, except socialist and economics
which occurred on 9 July 1938 "took place" would look better.
Well spotted. Changed.
She subsequently married the geriatrician Oscar Olbrich Does this need to be included?
Good point. Removed.
1958/59 I think "or" is better than dash, if that is the meaning.
Clarified this.
more than twenty-five years Numbers equal to or greater than 10 are typically kept in digits.
I think letters works in this instance as we are talking about a general more than twenty-five years, rather than a exact number of years.
"sympathetic to or tending towards the left in politics." The same word is used by the source to describe The Age
Can Christianity, Jew be wikilinked?
Not sure. I would probably consider that to be overlinking.
Duplink: Isaac Rosenberg
Might be worth linking twice, as there is som distance between the two mentions?
Some of his works also appeared in journals and in anthologies such as the 1953 Faber Book of Twentieth Century Verse. Source?
Fixed
Little scholarly attention have been "has been"?
Fixed
Who are Jacobs and Baker? Have they been introduced anywhere by their full names?
Introduced earlier in the section by full name.
That should be all. A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf<^>Feel at home 18:40, 27 March 2016 (UTC)Reply
Thank you very much for reviewing. I will try to adress all points. Cheers –P. S. Burton (talk) 01:46, 28 March 2016 (UTC)Reply
Hi, found time for this today. Excellent, all issues resolved. I am happy to promote this. Sainsf<^>Feel at home 05:59, 28 March 2016 (UTC)Reply
