Talk:LGA Architectural Partners
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 13 January 2020 and 16 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Au.andrea. Peer reviewers: Wonseob.jung.
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incomprehensible edit
First, wood has historically been a principal building material of many northern Ontario indigenous peoples, and the aim of providing a culturally relevant building influenced the selection of wood and other material components on this project.[1]
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is paraphrased as "As well, the selection of mass timber construction was dedicated by the embedded history of northern Ontario Indigenous peoples and sustainability." I supposed the writer meant "dictated by" in stead of "dedicated by", but even then, it still doesn't make sense. May I suggest: "The reasons behind the decision to use mass timber construction were threefold: Making the building culturally relevant by using a material used by northern Ontario indigenous peoples, supporting the mandate to embed indigenous perspective into the curriculum and showcasing engineered wood products". Vexations (talk) 11:17, 4 April 2020 (UTC)