In the header, the sentence beginning "Innovative changes across the economy and society, ..." appears to have no verb. Maybe this article is just a foreign language text that was run through a translator? I would attempt a correction, but it would be helpful if the original author were to give some hint as to the intended meaning. Dj2r-wp (talk) 16:17, 11 January 2020 (UTC)
Copyedited this. Lfstevens (talk) 03:44, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
- Took out completely unintelligible parts and unsourced stuff.
- A lot of what's left doesn't really follow, but there are sources so I left it.
- The Big data stuff is just wrong. Can't check the Korean source, but BD is about data that service operators use for everything from personalized advertising to goods pricing.
Feedback from New Page Review processEdit
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for your new article on Intelligent information society, but note that other editors have already pointed out sources of confusion. Please consider modifying the article to reflect that this is a theory that is particular to South Korean politics..
---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 15:41, 16 April 2020 (UTC)