Talk:In the Conservatory

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Crisco 1492 in topic File:In the Conservatory - edited.jpg

File:In the Conservatory - edited.jpg edit

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In the Conservatory is an 1879 oil painting by Édouard Manet which depicts a married couple, Manet's friends the Guillemets, in a conservatory in Paris then owned by painter Otto Rosen. Despite a hint of intimacy from the proximity of their hands, the couple appear separated from both each other and the conservatory around them. First exhibited in the 1879 Paris Salon, the painting is now held at the Alte Nationalgalerie, Berlin.Painting: Édouard Manet

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  • " the couple appear detached from both each other and the conservatory around them."
Not the case. The woman appears detached. She is deep in thought. Her husband is anything but detached; he is right there in the present. He is leaning towards her, looking at her, and raising his index finger as if to touch her hand. In other words, he is trying to break her reverie. What we have here is interaction.
In describing an image, it is necessary to really look.
  • The main page caption is based on the article. I'd have really appreciated if this had been raised a week or two ago (that's the reason why images are scheduled so far ahead). — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:31, 11 July 2014 (UTC)Reply

Posture In the text of the article, it mentions the woman's "upright posture". That posture is indicative of the constraint placed on the figure by a tight corset that goes all the way from the top of the hips to the armpits. The only points of flexibility are the neck and the hip-joints. She can sit, bend at the hip-joints and lean back at a diagonal, but stooping, slumping and twisting are impossible. It is ghastly to thing of how many generations of women suffered this constraint. (Actually, I think she has morning sickness and is about to throw up behind the aspidistra.)

The diagonal pleats are from the back of the skirt, below the bustle. It would probably be correct to describe them as part of the bustle, which implies the whole gathering of cloth at the back of the garment, rather than just the padding or frame over which the back fullness was suspended.

Amandajm (talk) 02:47, 11 July 2014 (UTC)Reply