Talk:History of the Socialist Left Party

Latest comment: 6 years ago by InternetArchiveBot in topic External links modified

Subject Matter Export needed edit

For the 2011 backlog elimination drive, I have rewritten the entry's opening paragraph in the most objective, long-term view I know how. While at present this provides a strong lead into this entry for overall re-write and editing, I am not sufficiently knowledgeable to edit its detailed content.

An expert can perform this -- and may decide to rewrite the opening paragraph, too (which is fine). However, I don't know how Wikipedia encourages expert improvements for its entries.

(Also, why does so much of the same suject remain in this party's separate entry in the first place?)

--Aboudaqn (talk) 20:58, 12 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

I hope it's OK, but after copy editing I removed the {{expert-verify}} tag as well. The article is reasonably well cited. Also, it is clearly still under development (see all the empty sections near the end). I don't think there are grounds for calling upon special expertise here at the moment. --Stfg (talk) 15:43, 3 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Arising during December 2011 copy edit edit

Removed sentence edit

In the second paragraph of the "Communist Party and founding (1975)" section, I removed the sentence: "Seeing that the Socialist People's Party, who had received most of the votes for coalition, had only received one of four of the political office positions for the coalition.[7]" because it is not a complete sentence and its relationship with what preceeds and/or follows it is unclear. If anyone wishes to clarify that, FN7 was as follows:

<ref>{{cite news | author = Stemland, Jens Henrik | title = Ingen Kommunistuvilje i Oslo SV, Men Nei Til Jørgensen Personlig | work = [[Verdens Gang]] | date = April 23, 1975 | page = 3 | language = Norwegian |accessdate = February 21, 2010 }}</ref>

--Stfg (talk) 14:10, 2 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Schei Committee contradiction edit

The "Electoral activities (1977–81)" section mentions the establishment of the Schei Committee to investigate Furre and Gustavsen. However, it links to the article Schei Committee, which says that the committee "concluded its work in 1962". --Stfg (talk) 18:06, 2 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Punishment of the party? edit

Same section: how might not prosecuting Furre and Gustavsen punish the party? --Stfg (talk) 18:06, 2 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

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