Talk:Fire (Big Sean song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 18:56, 10 January 2014 (UTC)Reply

General overview

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  • No disambiguation links to correct.
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  • No exteral links to correct.

Usage of files in article

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  • Cover artwork has a valid rationale that allows usage in article.
  • Image included in Background and composition section is a bit irrelevant to the article. Are there images of the song's composers uploaded in Wiki[Commons] or Flickr?
  Not done, unfortunately there were no pictures on Commons for the songwriters, except for one picture of Big Sean that I feel like not be a free work. I did, however, expand the caption for Kanye so it ties in a little better with the section its in.
  • The non-free image of Cyrus is unnecessary. An image of Cyrus as she appears live and in music videos nowadays would suffice.
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Original research; reliable sourcing

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  • WP:OR is not present; sources are reliable except for an instance in Music video, referenced in "Prose, redundancies and visual aspect".

Prose, redundancies and visual aspect

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Introduction

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  • Remove "hip hop" from "American [...] recording artist" and instead reference the song's musical style in the end of the paragraph.
  Done
  • When saying "component chart" you should say "component chart to the US Billboard Hot 100".
  Done

Background and composition

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  • "When describing his second studio album Hall of Fame (2013) in December 2012, Big Sean stated that he wished to "teach and leave a legacy" with its tracks, admitting that the content on his debut record Finally Famous (2011) "didn't really teach too much."" → irrelevant to the matter; should be in the song's parent album article.
I feel like this would be nice to have in this article though, since the song describes overcoming difficulties and I think it helps to explain the fairly sudden shift to more mature lyrics.
  • Leak is a bit casual, I think. Could you change that to "surface"?
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Music video

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  • VideoStatic is not reliable. Find another source, please.
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Charts

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  • When saying "component chart" you should say "component chart to the US Billboard Hot 100".
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References

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  • R3 — Amazon.com needs to be wikilinked.
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Comments

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Second read-through

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  • TBC.

Comments

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Thank you for your review! Sorry I couldn't get to it earlier, I was a bit busy the last few days. WikiRedactor (talk) 18:56, 11 January 2014 (UTC)Reply
No problem! Passing right now, keep up the good work. prism 21:19, 11 January 2014 (UTC)Reply

"Darhyl Camper Jr." listed at Redirects for discussion

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An editor has asked for a discussion to address the redirect Darhyl Camper Jr.. Please participate in the redirect discussion if you wish to do so. Richhoncho (talk) 11:42, 30 October 2019 (UTC)Reply