Talk:Empire International Pictures

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Karl gregory jones in topic Redundant phrase needs work

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Redundant phrase needs work edit

The article reads:

... financial problems and long-term debt obligations ...

It seems to me that "long-term debt obligations" are "financial problems", making this phrase redundant.

Options include:

  • Remove "financial problems", leaving "long-term debt obligations".
  • Re-word "financial problems" with a specific financial problem.

Karl gregory jones (talk) 15:07, 22 April 2019 (UTC)Reply