Talk:East Lake Golf Club

Latest comment: 5 years ago by ChunyangD in topic Closing sentence in lede

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Closing sentence in lede edit

The last part of the lede - "which has helped transform one of the nation's worst public housing projects into a thriving community.[5]" sounds like advertisement and doesn't directly pertain to the East Lake Golf Club. Would it be appropriate to remove this sentence, since it already links to the East Lake Foundation which has this information in it? ChunyangD (talk) 04:10, 24 September 2018 (UTC)Reply