Talk:Duckport Canal

Latest comment: 1 year ago by SL93 in topic Did you know nomination
Featured articleDuckport Canal is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
Did You Know Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 23, 2022Good article nomineeListed
August 12, 2022WikiProject A-class reviewApproved
September 18, 2022Featured article candidateNot promoted
October 29, 2022Featured article candidatePromoted
Did You Know A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on July 20, 2022.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that only one boat successfully made it through the Duckport Canal?
Current status: Featured article

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Duckport Canal/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:04, 15 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

I'll take a gander at this one. Zawed (talk) 10:04, 15 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Lead edit

  • Order built in Major General Ulysses S. Grant...: looks to be some typos here. Suggest: "Ordered built by Major General Ulysses S. Grant..."
    • Fixed the typo at the beginning, and added the intended date which was ommitted
  • Several dates are mentioned in the lead, but it is never established what year.
    • See above, should be addressed now

Background edit

  • Mississippi River to closer to...: typo here, presumably "Mississippi River closer to..." is meant.
    • The current phrasing works in AmEng, but changed
  • Work on the old Grant's Canal resumed in January,...: as it is already established that we are in January, you could just say " Work on the old Grant's Canal resumed later in the month,..."
    • Went with something similar
  • The Lake Providence canal was delayed by flooding...: to avoid close repetition of "The Lake Providence canal", suggest just "This canal was delayed by flooding was delayed by flooding..."
    • Done

Canal edit

  • The end of the previous section already establishes that the Steele's Bayou/Yazoo Pass expeditions fail. The first sentence of the Canal section could probably start at "Grant decided..."
    • Done

More to come. Zawed (talk) 10:02, 20 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Continuing with the Canal section:

  • Suggesting breaking the first paragraph at "Historian Donald L. Miller..."
    • Done
  • The soldiers began the journey to the canal site...: presumably you mean this on a daily basis? Also, the sentence uses "began", suggest rephrasing to avoid this.
    • I've attempted to rephrase this
      • Arg, I missed out a word in this comment! I meant to say the sentence uses "began" twice but your change resolves that anyway. Zawed (talk) 09:45, 23 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Aftermath edit

  • On April 30, Grant had landed troops...: is that "By April 30" or if is "On April 30", the "had" should be deleted.
    • Removed "had"

Other stuff edit

  • Image tag is OK
  • Dupe links: Mississippi River linked twice in the lead.
    • Done

That's about it for me. Zawed (talk) 10:42, 22 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

  • @Zawed: - Thanks for the review! Everything brought up so far should be addressed. Hog Farm Talk 13:43, 22 June 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • @Hog Farm: Hope the missing word in one of my comments above didn't throw you too much! Anyway, that was resolved regardless and this looks all good. Am passing as GA now as I believe it meets the necessary criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:53, 23 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Did you know nomination edit

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 00:25, 18 July 2022 (UTC)Reply

Brought to GA by Hog Farm (talk). Self-nominated at 19:11, 23 June 2022 (UTC).Reply

  •   Article nominated on same day as successful good article review; needless to say it is within policy and sufficiently long. First hook is interesting and in the source. Normsupon (talk) 06:19, 27 June 2022 (UTC)Reply