Talk:Battle of Kampala/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 19:27, 25 July 2019 (UTC)

Damn Indy, long time no see right? If you do not mind then I'd review this one? Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 19:27, 25 July 2019 (UTC)

@CPA-5: Any progress on the review? -Indy beetle (talk) 20:15, 5 August 2019 (UTC)

• Not really I was on holiday for two weeks I will now start with my review. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 18:27, 15 August 2019 (UTC)

• and captured the city of Kampala, Uganda Current countries shouldn't be linked.
  • Unlinked.
• Okello fled in a helicopter and flew to Sudan Same as above.
  • Unlinked.
• was sworn in as President of Uganda Link the title.
  • Done.
• In August the NRA launched a series of coordinated attacks American coordinated.
  • Fixed.
• In the autumn of 1985, the NRA laid siege Try to avoid to use seasons in the article.
  • Revised.
• Museveni President and Vice-President of Uganda Link Vice-President of Uganda.
  • Done.
• At the same time, the NRA's 9th and 19th Battalions Link both the 9th and the 19th Battalions.
  • Though as large combat formations they could technically qualify under notability per MilHist guidelines, I don't think there's enough info about them, especially outside Kainerugaba's book or the engagements they participated in, to make it worth red-linking them with the expectation that they'll become articles in the future.
• including the Former Uganda National Army (FUNA) and the Uganda Freedom Army Link both the Former Uganda National Army and the Uganda Freedom Army.
  • Done.
• The NRA's 1st, 3rd, 5th and 11th Battalions moved Link all the Battalions here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 11:48, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
  • Same as I wrote above applies here.

More to come

• while the 7th Battalion traveled down Hoima Road American travelled.
  • Britified.
• was hauling a 37 mm anti-aircraft gun No English units?
  • I was under the impression that using metric units was sufficient for weapon descriptions.
• Okello fled via helicopter to Sudan with several members Unlink Sudan because I think MOS tries to tell us we shan't link current countries.
  • Done.
• fortifying the crossings of the Nile to prevent Unlink Nile because of common term.
  • Done.
• He soon joined the fledgling National Resistance Movement American fledgling.
  • Revised.
• which constituted the second largest ethnic group in the UNLA Second largest needs any hyphen.
  • Done.
• Suspected to harbor NRA fighters American harbor.
  • Fixed.

I'll continue the source's, image's and infobox's part. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 15:21, 18 August 2019 (UTC)

Images

• Looks fine.

Sources

• Ref 23, no link and needs an access-date?
  • I retrieved that through my university's database (and, if I recall, specifically through ProQuest), which can't be linked to (since the whole network is password protected). And since its an archived version of a print copy and there's no link to maintain, there is no point in adding an access-date.

• Does that means that the rest of the refs in this source review are also archives in ProQuest? Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 14:39, 21 August 2019 (UTC)

• I have just finished adding access-dates to all of the sources I retrieved from normal links online. The rest have come from ProQuest or other databases as archived copies. -Indy beetle (talk) 21:28, 21 August 2019 (UTC)

• Ref 26, Same as above and needs an access-date.
  • ^^
• Ref 27, needs an access-date.
• Ref 32, same as above.
• Ref 42, same as above.
• Ref 43, no link and needs an access-date?
• Ref 45, same as above.
• Ref 46, same as above.
• Ref 49, same as above.
• Standardise ISBNs, some of them have hyphens in their ISBNs and some don't.
  • Hyphenated.

Infobox

• Are there links for all the commanders?
  • None that I know of.
• Are there links for all the units?
  • None that I've found.

That's anything. Place it on hold. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 10:56, 21 August 2019 (UTC)

@CPA-5: I think I've responded to everything. -Indy beetle (talk) 22:28, 21 August 2019 (UTC)

• Okay I think this one is ready to go, I'll pass it. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 08:04, 22 August 2019 (UTC)