Talk:Addo Bonetti

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Mike Christie in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination edit

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The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 08:23, 16 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that Addo Bonetti lost renomination in the Democratic primary by one vote, but the primary was later invalidated? "Miscikoski Defeats Bonnetti by One Vote". Hartford Courant. October 17, 1972. p. 16. Archived from the original on June 9, 2021 – via Newspapers.com."Judge Invalidates Primary". Hartford Courant. October 26, 1972. p. 23. Archived from the original on June 9, 2021 – via Newspapers.com.

Created by Jon698 (talk). Self-nominated at 01:27, 11 June 2021 (UTC).Reply

  •   Article is long enough and new enough; no sourcing, copyright, or content issues were found. Hook has good source and meets length and format criterion. However, QPQ is not done yet.--Orygun (talk) 04:02, 12 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
  Good to go.--Orygun (talk) 21:36, 14 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Addo Bonetti/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 15:53, 25 August 2022 (UTC)Reply


I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:53, 25 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

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  • I'm not sure we should use the funeral home's obit -- these are often written by the family themselves, and are not independently verified.
  • "Bonetti petitioned himself onto the ballot": what does this mean?

No other issues. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:33, 25 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

  • @Mike Christie: I removed the "petitioned himself onto the ballot" part as it was unnecessary. Jon698 (talk) 15:13, 27 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
    OK. How about the obit? I don't think we can use it. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:27, 27 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
    • @Mike Christie: I assume that the obituary appeared in a newspaper at one point. Legacy.com points to the funeral home obituary so I think it is okay. https://www.legacy.com/us/obituaries/name/addo-bonetti-obituary?id=5757061 Jon698 (talk) 15:57, 28 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
      I don't think we can assume that -- legacy.com looks like an aggregator. I did try searching the web for strings from the obit and couldn't find it on any site that seemed independent of the funeral home. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:34, 28 August 2022 (UTC)Reply
      Jon698, I had another look at this and I think the obit would be OK for everything except the bit about Iwo Jima and the Purple Heart. The rest is self-reported basic facts and is not controversial. If you remove the sentence about Iwo Jima and the Purple Heart I can pass this. However, there may be other sources that can be used to look up Purple Heart recipients if you want to try to keep that. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 09:33, 3 September 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • @Mike Christie: I apologize for my odd schedule. I returned to college in mid-August and my plan is to edit Wikipedia on the weekends in order for me to have a consistent amount of edits, rather than previous years where I don't edit at all for months. Sadly I am currently sick, but I should get better by today or tomorrow. Thank you for your help and patience on so many GA articles. Jon698 (talk) 12:56, 3 September 2022 (UTC)Reply
    No problem; hope you feel better soon. I'll check in again next weekend if you haven't been able to post anything by then. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 13:04, 3 September 2022 (UTC)Reply