Talk:Aasif Sheikh

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Hi Sir, My name is Sharad Asthana from Allahabad.U.P. Sir, I would like to say U that plz start U old program which is Yes Boss .It is most intresting or enjoyble. Everyone's like this program very much in my family.. So plz sir once again..plz..my mobile number-8299791049, Sharad Asthana (talk) 10:49, 19 July 2017 (UTC)Reply

Content deletion edit

@PriyaMishra0121: Sorry, but I've deleted the bulk of the content you added in the Career section for a few reasons. The entirety of it was unsourced. There were numerous grammar and formatting errors (for instance, we italicise film and television series titles). You've editorialised about the subject's work being "appreciated" without providing any references, you included puffery in the form of subjective words like "superhit" and phrases like "everyone's favorite till date", which also violates our policy on neutral tone.

Beyond that, the section basically just repeated everything that could be found in the filmography, so it's not really clear to me what purpose it serves. You should look at a good article like Katrina Kaif, where the Career section has substantively more connective tissue, highlighting her most important roles, giving some background about those roles, adding critical response, etc. While we don't expect perfection right out of the gate, this seems like something you'd want to build to some level of quality before adding it here. Regards, Cyphoidbomb (talk) 16:52, 2 February 2021 (UTC)Reply