Talk:2010 Chinese Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:58, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add a short description and then add WP:ALT text to every image.
• "Fernando Alonso for Ferrari, started from third, and passed" → "Fernando Alonso for Ferrari started from third and passed"
• Add a hyphen between "single seater".
• "Others teams in the field" → "Other teams in the field"
• "onto its flap and onto the" → "onto its flap and the"
• "Button used the soft compound tyres though an unbalanced car" - reword
• "Hisapnias" - typo?
• "Petrov took his first Formula One points finish in seventh" → "Petrov took his first Formula One points to finish in seventh"
• "the importance about changing" → "the importance of changing"
• "Domenciali" → "Domenicali"
• Add a comma after Luca Cordero di Montezemolo.
• "pleased duel other drivers" - reword
• "McLaren moved past Ferrari to become the new leaders" → "McLaren moved past Ferrari to become the new leader"
• Sources are archived.
• Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:22, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
  • @Some Dude From North Carolina: Have made changes according to the queries raised above MWright96 (talk) 08:04, 20 July 2021 (UTC)