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Section | # of Hooks | # Verified |
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April 13 | 2 | 1 |
April 14 | 1 | |
April 15 | 1 | |
April 19 | 1 | |
April 24 | 1 | 1 |
April 25 | 2 | |
April 26 | 2 | |
April 28 | 1 | |
April 29 | 2 | |
April 30 | 1 | |
May 1 | 1 | |
May 2 | 2 | |
May 4 | 1 | 1 |
May 5 | 1 | |
May 6 | 1 | |
May 7 | 2 | |
May 8 | 2 | |
May 9 | 2 | |
May 10 | 4 | |
May 12 | 6 | |
May 13 | 1 | 1 |
May 14 | 3 | 1 |
May 15 | 1 | |
May 16 | 5 | 2 |
May 17 | 7 | 2 |
May 18 | 5 | 3 |
May 19 | 4 | 3 |
May 20 | 7 | 4 |
May 21 | 10 | 2 |
May 22 | 8 | 5 |
May 23 | 8 | 5 |
May 24 | 9 | 3 |
May 25 | 5 | 2 |
May 26 | 6 | 3 |
May 27 | 10 | 4 |
May 28 | 8 | 7 |
May 29 | 6 | 3 |
May 30 | 8 | 5 |
May 31 | 11 | 10 |
June 1 | 5 | 2 |
June 2 | 9 | 5 |
June 3 | 6 | 2 |
June 4 | 3 | 1 |
June 5 | 8 | 3 |
June 6 | 4 | 1 |
June 7 | 8 | 2 |
June 8 | 7 | 2 |
June 9 | 14 | 1 |
June 10 | 4 | 1 |
June 11 | 3 | |
June 12 | 2 | |
Total | 231 | 88 |
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Nominations edit
Special occasion holding area edit
June 28 edit
Stonewall Inn
- ... that names in the Stonewall Inn's visitor logbook included Donald Duck, Elizabeth Taylor, and Judy Garland? Source: Carter, David (2004). Stonewall: The Riots that Sparked the Gay Revolution. St. Martin's Press. pp. 69-70.
- ALT1: ... that after the original Stonewall Inn closed in 1969, its space was used by a bagel shop, Chinese restaurant, and clothing store? Source: Multiple, see article
- ALT2: ... that the Stonewall Inn may have been named after a lesbian autobiography? Source: Wang, Hansi Lo (May 30, 2016). "Long A Symbol, Stonewall Inn May Soon Become Monument To LGBT Rights". NPR.
- ALT3: ... that the Stonewall Inn was originally two horse stables? Source: Stonewall (Report). National Register of Historic Places, National Park Service. February 16, 2000. p. 10.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Dadang Supriatna
- Comment: I also know that this is unlikely to happen, but can I request that this run on June 28 (the first full day of the Stonewall riots)?
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 650 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Epicgenius (talk) 12:21, 15 April 2024 (UTC).
- Ooh, Stonewall! Article eligibility and condition checks out, became a good article a few days ago. I like the ALT0 here best, though I would suggest linking those names. Assuming good faith on the sourcing. Obviously, going to have to wait til the QPQ is resolved to officially check this off. And I think June 28 would be a wonderful day for this hook. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:18, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Generalissima. I've now done a QPQ. Epicgenius (talk) 14:34, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- Good to go here! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 14:39, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius and Generalissima:, as it is over six weeks until the proposed date (and was something like ten weeks at nomination approval) an exemption needs to be obtained at WT:DYK per WP:DYKSO. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:53, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- I started a discussion on WT:DYK, which has been archived. From the comments there, I think there was a consensus to allow the request, but since there were only 3 commenters, feel free to correct me if this needs more discussion. Epicgenius (talk) 01:18, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius and Generalissima:, as it is over six weeks until the proposed date (and was something like ten weeks at nomination approval) an exemption needs to be obtained at WT:DYK per WP:DYKSO. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:53, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Good to go here! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 14:39, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Generalissima. I've now done a QPQ. Epicgenius (talk) 14:34, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
July 1 edit
Score: A Hockey Musical
- ... that Score: A Hockey Musical has been described as "so Canadian it hurts"?
- Source: "A high-shticking breakaway", Rick Groen, The Globe and Mail ProQuest 749452350 "In 339 films from 59 counties, TIFF the vast festival is so pluralistic it entrances; in this one film from the host country, Score: A Hockey Musical is so Canadian it hurts."
- ALT1: ... that Score: A Hockey Musical opened five international film festivals in the month before the 2010–11 NHL season? Source: Groen (as above): "Score: A Hockey Musical will screen as the opening-night film in five festivals across Canada, including Toronto on Sept. 9, Halifax on Sept. 16, Sudbury on Sept. 18, Calgary on Sept. 23 and Edmonton on Sept. 24." and NBC Sports "NHL releases full 2010–2011 schedule of events" "NHL Face-Off-the League’s annual launch event in North America-welcomes the beginning of the 2010-11 NHL season in North America on Oct. 7 with the Toronto Maple Leafs hosting arch-rival Montreal Canadiens live on CBC."
- ALT2: ... that the premiere of Score: A Hockey Musical has been called "disastrous", "embarrassing" and "infamous" despite receiving a standing ovation? Source: Craig Takeuchi "Will the Bollywood-spiced Breakaway beat Canada's Score as a hockey musical?" The Georgia Straight quote: "The ill-advised, WTF idea to blend musicals with Canada's most beloved sport, hockey, proved to be a disastrous combination for last year's Cancon atrocity Score: A Hockey Musical." + Will Sloan "Score: A Hockey Musical " Exclaim! quote: "Score: A Hockey Musical is a musical/comedy/inspirational sports movie that fails resoundingly on every level. That it was selected to open the Toronto International Film Festival is embarrassing." + Justine Smith "The strength of this year's Canadian lineup comes from TIFF's focus on fresh and innovative young voices" National Post quote: "The negative impression of Canadian film - certainly not helped by Score: A Hockey Musical, the Toronto International Film Festival's (TIFF) infamous 2010 opening night movie". + Jamie Hall, "Score hits the ice in hockey-loving Edmonton", Edmonton Journal ProQuest 754978695 quote: "The movie has opened at festivals in Toronto, Halifax and Sudbury to sold-out audiences and standing ovations."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Led Zeppelin Played Here
- Comment: Please hold for 1 July Canada Day
Reidgreg (talk) 22:49, 21 May 2024 (UTC).
- 5× expansion of 4 March 2024 version completed from 1,888 characters to 20,402 and nominated on the same day. No copyvios detected (high confidence of violation due to direct quotes from reviews that have all been cited; AGF sources which can't go through Dup detector). Article is well-sourced. Main hook is 74 characters long (ALT1 is 113; ALT2 is 141); all three are under 200 character max. and are interesting. Refs 46 (verifying the main hook and ALT1), 54 (verifying ALT1), 66, 69, and 72 (verifying ALT2) are reliable sources. QPQ done. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 00:21, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
- Reidgreg, I don't see the WP:SOHA connection to July 1, other than that it's just a Canada-related hook. Can you expand? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:51, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: I thought the connection is fairly strong and "sufficiently special" for the date: Multiple sources (five sources in the second paragraph of critical reception, and others elsewhere) talk about the film being chocked full of Canadiana and a "love letter" to Canada and Canada's national sport. Not just to hockey, but to hockey as Canada's national (winter) sport. – Reidgreg (talk) 01:03, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Reidgreg, I still don't see the relevance to the date. The film isn't a love letter to Canada Day, it doesn't take place on Canada Day, there's no special hockey match depicted in the film that takes place on Canada Day (afaik). Same situation with Template:Did you know nominations/International Register of Electors. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:23, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: Okay, I get your interpretation of the guideline. Shall we take this to WT:DYK? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Reidgreg (talk) 16:16, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Reidgreg, I still don't see the relevance to the date. The film isn't a love letter to Canada Day, it doesn't take place on Canada Day, there's no special hockey match depicted in the film that takes place on Canada Day (afaik). Same situation with Template:Did you know nominations/International Register of Electors. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:23, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: I thought the connection is fairly strong and "sufficiently special" for the date: Multiple sources (five sources in the second paragraph of critical reception, and others elsewhere) talk about the film being chocked full of Canadiana and a "love letter" to Canada and Canada's national sport. Not just to hockey, but to hockey as Canada's national (winter) sport. – Reidgreg (talk) 01:03, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Reidgreg, I don't see the WP:SOHA connection to July 1, other than that it's just a Canada-related hook. Can you expand? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:51, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
International Register of Electors
- ... that expatriate Canadians added to the International Register of Electors may vote in Canadian elections in the electoral riding of their last Canadian address?
- Source: "Votes cast by Canadians living abroad count in the electoral district where they last lived before leaving Canada." at Voting rules for electors living outside of Canada
- ALT1: ... that as of 2019, inclusion in the International Register of Electors no longer requires residency in Canada in the preceding five years? Source: "Now, any Canadian expatriate qualified to vote, regardless of how long they have been out of the country" and "Previously, only citizens who had lived abroad for less than five years were allowed to vote." at List of countries where Canadian expats live disclosed for security reasons
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Rebecca Odes; see my DYK tracker.
- Comment: I welcome suggestions for shorter hooks, and a better alternative for ALT1, which is lacking some context.
Mindmatrix 16:37, 17 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article moved to mainspace the day it was nominated. Article is long enough, well-cited to reliable sources, presentable, and with no policy issues detected. Hooks are formatted and of good length, hook facts cited in article, verified from sources, and interesting. QPQ verified. ALT0 is probably the more interesting of the two. I'm going to hold the tick for a bit while I think about other hooks (per nom). (I had something interesting about the Quebec (provincial) list, as voters outside the province were more likely to vote "no" on sovereignty.) BTW, would you like to request this for Canada Day? – Reidgreg (talk) 16:36, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
Oxtongue River
- ... that the Ragged Falls (pictured) on the Oxtongue River is considered one of the top 10 waterfalls in Ontario?
- Source: Ref #9 (Oxtongue River-Ragged Falls Provincial Park: Amazing Waterfall in Ontario)
- ALT1: ... that the Oxtongue River was a canoe route for indigenous people is still used for recreational canoeing? Source: Refs #5 and #6
ALT2: ... that the Oxtongue River (pictured) flows through an ancient glacial spillway that drained meltwaters from the Algonquin Highlands into Lake Algonquin?Source: Ref #6 (Oxtongue River-Ragged Falls Provincial Park Management Plan)- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Larmanjat guided rail system
- Comment: This DYK should run on July 1 (Canada Day).
P 1 9 9 ✉ 14:13, 29 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article new enough and long enough. All sections well sourced and neutrally written. Hook one is verified. hook two and three are source, but we need citations directly after each in the article per DYK rules.--Kevmin § 16:19, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
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- All three hooks now cited for DYK. Sources for each are neutral and hooks are accurate to sourcing. Work is needed on the article and hook wording for Alt2, which as it is right now is too close to the source
The Oxtongue River flows through an ancient glacial spillway, which drained meltwaters from the Algonquin Highlands into glacial Lake Algonquin.
for our policies.--Kevmin § 14:33, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- All three hooks now cited for DYK. Sources for each are neutral and hooks are accurate to sourcing. Work is needed on the article and hook wording for Alt2, which as it is right now is too close to the source
- I understand that the hook is about a Canadian topic, but is it really so relevant to Canada that it needs to run on Canada Day? It would be nice of course but the connection to Canada Day seems rather tenuous at best. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 22:43, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Well, if we're going to limit DYK hooks specifically to Canada Day, good luck getting even one! In fact, the 2 hooks in the holding area now are also not related to Canada Day, but just Canadian topics. As you say, "it would be nice of course"... -- P 1 9 9 ✉ 12:45, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with P199 Canada related in general is better then no Canada Day hooks at all and looking like stuck up Americans.--Kevmin § 16:06, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
Leontius of Autun
- ... that the details about the life of Leontius of Autun can be summed up as, "July 1 – The burial of Leontius, bishop of Autun (Gaul), 5th century"?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Drake–Kendrick Lamar feud
- Comment: I'm asking that this run on July 1, which is his saint day. Thanks.
--evrik (talk) 04:21, 25 May 2024 (UTC).
- Fascinating little article about such an obscure figure! The source checks out, the article seems in good shape (just barely long enough, fully cited, no evidence of copyvio), and the QPQ checks out as well. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:01, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima:, would you mind please dropping this in the Wikipedia:SOHA for July 1? Thanks. --evrik (talk) 16:35, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Approved nominations edit
Articles created/expanded on April 13 edit
Sitdown strike
... that there were 583 sitdown strikes in the United States from 1936 to 1939, affecting over a half-million workers?Source:
- US Department of Labor, Division of Industrial Relations (May 1939). "Analysis of Strikes in 1938". Monthly Labor Review: Table 16.
- US Department of Labor, Division of Industrial Relations (May 1940). "Strikes in 1939". Monthly Labor Review: 28-29.
- Reviewed:
- Comment: The cited sources are online here: https://www.bls.gov/wsp/publications/annual-summaries/pdf/strikes-in-1939.pdf and here: https://www.bls.gov/wsp/publications/annual-summaries/pdf/analysis-of-strikes-in-1938.pdf
Source 1 states: "The number of sit-down strikes in 1936, 1937, and 1938 by months, with the number' of workers involved, is given in table 16."
Table 16 lists the same numbers of strikes given in source 2 below. It lists workers involved as follows: 1936: 87,817 1937: 398,117 1938: 28,749
Source 2 states: "In 1936 there were 48 so-called sit-down strikes. In 1937 the number increased to 477, but by 1938 they decreased to 52. There were only 6 strikes during 1939 in which all or part of the strikers remained at their workplaces for one or more days after ceasing work. he number of workers idle in connection with these 6 strikes was 3,416, although the number participating in the sit-down or stay-in feature is not known."
This sentence involves a very encyclopedic form of synthesis in that it adds numbers from two consecutive studies by the same source. Similar synthesis, but without inclusion of the latter number appears in Sidney Fine's book Sitdown, cited in the article.
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Carwil (talk) 16:00, 13 April 2024 (UTC).
- QPQ not needed, expansion is recent and article is long enough. Hook is properly sourced. However, Earwig detected a 43.2% similarity. Before I pass this nom, I think it would be suitable to trim down some quotes, if possible. Davest3r08 >:3 (talk) 22:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- I've reviewed the Earwig similarity report, which highlights passages that are either in quotes or comprise part of citations (including the journal name and another cited article). The longest passage is the summary of the Matignon Agreement, a quotation I don't think I can improve upon. I've revised the article to reduce the amount of material directly quoted from Torigian and from Adamic, but keep Adamic's longer definition and Torigian's POV that the mid-1930s strikes were a distinct phase of using the tactic. Let me know whether you think these changes sufficiently reduce the reliance of direct quotations.--Carwil (talk) 13:29, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- FYI, here's the Earwig similarity report with bibliography temporarily removed.
- Fair rationale. Passing nomination. LunaEcplise (for the record I'm Davest3r08) (talk) 20:33, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
@Carwil, LunaEclipse, AirshipJungleman29, and RoySmith: - given that there was no definite resolution to the discussion at Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Sitdown strike, I'm reopening this. A couple of issues were raised regarding the state of the article, and also whether the figures from the Dept. of Labor should be given in Wikivoice. — Amakuru (talk) 22:47, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
- Upon additional consideration, I'm fine with the wikivoice thing. RoySmith (talk) 21:52, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
- Replying here as I'm traveling and on mobile only: Hmm... I'm not sure this makes sense as a general principle for DYK hooks (in voice sourcing for official statistics), though I'm not adverse to a "by official counts" phrase being added. There's no reason to suspect that the government counted any non-existent strikes and political reasons to suspect that this government attempted to both be complete in its count and to accurately report both the rise and fall of the phenomenon in its counts. Unintended errors of categorization could fall in both ways. But this seems like the kind of fact routinely sourced in a footnote in a lead section or DYK. - - User:Carwil
Alt0a ... that by official counts there were 583 sitdown strikes in the United States from 1936 to 1939, affecting over a half-million workers?- Alt0b ... that according to the U.S. Department of Labor there were 583 sitdown strikes in the United States from 1936 to 1939, affecting over a half-million workers?
- --evrik (talk) 18:15, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
- I wonder if there were exactly 583 sitdown strikes between 1936 and 1939 – I think that there should be some lip service to the idea that a figure like that probably can't be exact. Attributing inline makes sense to me, if only briefly. theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 19:14, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
- Comment - @Carwil: there are still some citation needed templates in the article itself, which need fixing. Plus we need a consensus on which hook to use. If this isn't resolved soon, this may have to be rejected and archived. Cheers — Amakuru (talk) 20:27, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- @LunaEcplise: I think the sourcing problems are fixed. What about the hooks? --evrik (talk) 01:56, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
- I'm dropping this review. Someone else should take my place. 🌙Eclipse (talk) (contribs) 10:38, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Carwil: Much to whinge about here I'm afraid. There are a couple of unsourced bits and unattributed quotes in the article, which I've annotated accordingly, and I don't really think it's on to comment out unsourced content while it's here, so I've taken it out. As written, the Form and purpose section would deserve {{disputed}}, because an account of the late 1930s can't really be written in 1936 and I'd question whether it should even be there given WP:NOTDEF. I'd be willing to approve ALT0b, although I would suggest the below as a WP:DYKTRIMmed variant of ALT0b:
- ALT0c:
... that the U.S. Department of Labor recognises 583 sitdown strikes in the U.S., affecting half a million workers? - which says everything ALT0b says in fewer words. (If I had my druthers, we'd be running some variant of "that quickies have disrupted the rubber industry", but pigs will fly before that gets past WP:DYKGRAT.)--Launchballer 11:40, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer:, while I appreciate the principle that we're not providing dictionary definitions, it's helpful to know what this concept actually means. As it turns out White (2010) and Adamic (1936) offer pretty close parallels, as does Fine (1965): "The term "sit-down strike" has generally been used to embrace a variety of work stoppages ranging from the brief strike or "quickie," in which a group of workers cease their labors for a few minutes or hours or for a single shift until their grievances are settled, to the "stay-in strike," in which a portion or all of the workers remain in the plant overnight and perhaps for an extended period of time. Most commonly when the term is used the reference is to the extended sit-down strike, the so-called stay-in strike." In my view, the goal of the encyclopedic text should be to lay out both how such strikes work and how the types differ as clearly as possible, and I think the Adamic quote helps to do that. I've added a new sentence at the beginning of the section to try to make that clearer.--Carwil (talk) 15:23, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- I'm dropping this review. Someone else should take my place. 🌙Eclipse (talk) (contribs) 10:38, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @LunaEclipse: I'll try to finish this. @Launchballer: I like ALt0c and will approve it. @Carwil: I went through and did a final clean-up. I found the sources, and dealt with the other tags. --evrik (talk) 22:01, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks so much for the clean-up work.--Carwil (talk) 15:23, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT0c gives the impression that 583 sitdown strikes have occurred in the U.S. from whenever they began to the present day, while the sources for this hook are from 1939 and 1940 covering only 1936 through 1939, and the article goes on to mention quite a few both before and after those years. Trimming a hook like ALT0b is one thing—I don't see any obvious issues with it—but trimming it to the point that it's misleading if not inaccurate is quite another; I have struck it. I think, given the circumstances, we need a new reviewer; it's a stretch for evrik to be approving a tightened version of their own hook, especially given its issues. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:51, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- Apologies, I meant ALT0d: ... that the U.S. Department of Labor recognises 583 sitdown strikes in the U.S. between 1936 and 1939, affecting half a million workers?--Launchballer 11:35, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not sure of my role here, but I think Alt0d is accurate, though the tense of this government agency's recognition feels awkward to me. Perhaps, ALT0e: ... that the U.S. Department of Labor recorded 583 sitdown strikes in the U.S. between 1936 and 1939, affecting half a million workers?--Carwil (talk) 14:31, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- Approve ALT0e. AGF on the offline sources. (Please note that I have only really checked the hook, and merely glanced over the article otherwise. But as far as I understand, it has been throughly vetted by previous reviewers.) –LordPeterII (talk) 19:25, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on April 24 edit
Chris Tanasale
- ... that in a period of religious tensions, military officer Chris Tanasale was selected as mayor of Ambon, Indonesia to placate local Christians? Source: [3]: "In the end, the governor chose not to further alienate the Christian community and selected a Christian candidate, Chris Tanasale".
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Elizabeth Yeampierre
- Comment: -
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 225 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Juxlos (talk) 05:48, 1 May 2024 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough, well written, hook is verified and interesting, no plagiarism, QPQ done. I'm not entirely sure that the image is correctly licensed, but in any case it is not used with the hook. Dahn (talk) 09:29, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
@Juxlos, Dahn, and AirshipJungleman29: sorry for last minute pull, I checked this set earlier today but only just had access to a computer to edit... anyway, the issue is there seems to be a chronological issue with this hook, based on what's in the article. The hook begins with "that during a period of religious tensions...", with a link to Maluku sectarian conflict, which is described as being from 1999 to 2002, but then it says he was "selected as the mayor of Ambon, Indonesia, to placate local Christians", something which took place in 1996. So it can't have been during the Maluku conflict. The article goes on to say that this was during his tenure. If there was already tension in 1996, then we probably need to spell that out in the article to use it in the hook and also not link to a specific conflict that took place later. Cheers — Amakuru (talk) 21:55, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Amakuru: I suppose that will count as OR in the hook. Maybe we can go with a half-hook instead?
- ALT1: ... that military officer Chris Tanasale was selected as mayor of Ambon, Indonesia to placate local Christians?
- Juxlos (talk) 01:01, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Dahn: As the original approver, can you confirm if the above hook is approved, and if this article is good to go? @Amakuru: Is the above hook acceptable to you? Z1720 (talk) 00:24, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- Approving new hook, and sorry for not catching that. Dahn (talk) 03:45, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720: my only query would be whether placate is the best word here... The article text reads "to prevent alienating Christians in the city" which sounds quite benevolent and inclusive, whereas placate means "make (someone) less angry or hostile". Were the Christians angry and hostile before Tanasale's selection? — Amakuru (talk) 07:53, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- Approving new hook, and sorry for not catching that. Dahn (talk) 03:45, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Dahn: As the original approver, can you confirm if the above hook is approved, and if this article is good to go? @Amakuru: Is the above hook acceptable to you? Z1720 (talk) 00:24, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 4 edit
Qin Huasun
... that when Qin Huasun was the Permanent Representative of China to the UN, China vetoed UNSC resolutions of sending United Nations peacekeeping forces to Guatemala and Macedonia?
- Source: Guatemala: China Asserts Taiwan's Ties To Guatemala Led to Veto
Macedonia: China Vows Veto of Macedonia Force Renewal
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 32 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Toadboy123 (talk) 12:33, 4 May 2024 (UTC).
- Not interesting and a coatrack, since Huasun is surely not the person who made these decisions. (t · c) buidhe 00:07, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Buidhe: As Qin represented his country in the UNSC, he made the decision based on his country's political position. However, prior to 2011, China's vetoes in the UNSC were rare and only four times [4] were it used prior to the start of the 21st century. Since the mentioned vetoes were related to sending peacekeeping troops, it might be interesting as the users would look into the article to see why the peacekeeping resolutions were vetoed. However, if you any ideas for another hook in the article or if I should modify it in a certain phrasing, I am happy to consider that. - Toadboy123 (talk) 09:12, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
- Yes, I know how the UN works. Certainly the hook phrasing makes it sound like a coatrack. Frankly not all articles are suited for DYK and this one may not be. Peacekeeping is not inherently dull but UN resolutions can be, especially if there is no real information what the vote is really about. Furthermore, the article as it stands does not qualify due to sourcing. (t · c) buidhe 13:23, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Buidhe: Is there anything that I should do to improve the article such as adding more reliable sources or expanding the information regarding the reasons of the vetoed resolutions so that the article can be featured in DYK ? Or does the article does not have the information much needed for the DYK? I can improve the article based on your suggestions but if you feel there is no room for it in DYK then you can cancel this nomination. - Toadboy123 (talk) 02:26, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
- @Buidhe: I have added detailed information on the vetoed UN resolutions. Let me know if anything more has to be done. - Toadboy123 (talk) 06:56, 8 May 2024 (UTC).
- @Buidhe: Is there anything that I should do to improve the article such as adding more reliable sources or expanding the information regarding the reasons of the vetoed resolutions so that the article can be featured in DYK ? Or does the article does not have the information much needed for the DYK? I can improve the article based on your suggestions but if you feel there is no room for it in DYK then you can cancel this nomination. - Toadboy123 (talk) 02:26, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
- Yes, I know how the UN works. Certainly the hook phrasing makes it sound like a coatrack. Frankly not all articles are suited for DYK and this one may not be. Peacekeeping is not inherently dull but UN resolutions can be, especially if there is no real information what the vote is really about. Furthermore, the article as it stands does not qualify due to sourcing. (t · c) buidhe 13:23, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Buidhe: As Qin represented his country in the UNSC, he made the decision based on his country's political position. However, prior to 2011, China's vetoes in the UNSC were rare and only four times [4] were it used prior to the start of the 21st century. Since the mentioned vetoes were related to sending peacekeeping troops, it might be interesting as the users would look into the article to see why the peacekeeping resolutions were vetoed. However, if you any ideas for another hook in the article or if I should modify it in a certain phrasing, I am happy to consider that. - Toadboy123 (talk) 09:12, 7 May 2024 (UTC).
- Since I have not heard any response from the previous reviewer, can a new reviewer check the updates to the hook I made and if it is good to go? - Toadboy123 (talk) 03:59, 15 May 2024 (UTC).
- Much to whinge about here I'm afraid. As written, the biography section would deserve {{subsections}}, and much of its early paragraphs can feel more than a bit WP:Proseline at times and would deserve {{prose}}. None of the hook has an end-of-sentence citation, and given that WP:CLUMP says that "more than three [references] should generally be avoided", I'm not going through four. Take your time, and ping me when these are remedied.--Launchballer 10:12, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: I have made the edits to the article based on the suggestions you made. Check and let me know if it is good to go now. - Toadboy123 (talk) 02:01, 16 May 2024 (UTC).
- It's a bit better, but you need a cite for "February 2000".--Launchballer 14:49, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Added citation. Let me know if all is good now. - Toadboy123 (talk) 03:36, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
- It's a bit better, but you need a cite for "February 2000".--Launchballer 14:49, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: I have made the edits to the article based on the suggestions you made. Check and let me know if it is good to go now. - Toadboy123 (talk) 02:01, 16 May 2024 (UTC).
- Much to whinge about here I'm afraid. As written, the biography section would deserve {{subsections}}, and much of its early paragraphs can feel more than a bit WP:Proseline at times and would deserve {{prose}}. None of the hook has an end-of-sentence citation, and given that WP:CLUMP says that "more than three [references] should generally be avoided", I'm not going through four. Take your time, and ping me when these are remedied.--Launchballer 10:12, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
- Pulled hook per interestingness of hook issue brought up at Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Prep 2. SL93 (talk) 19:18, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93: In that case, you can terminate this hook. - Toadboy123 (talk) 02:50, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- Reopening per WT:DYK.--Launchballer 08:36, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- Since this was pulled back from Prep with a hook issue, and there isn't an approved one on this page, this shouldn't be given a tick, Launchballer. I've struck the hook above per nominator Toadboy123, and directly below is the last part of the discussion from WT:DYK#Qin Huasun, followed by a restatement of the proposed hook. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:52, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- Reopening per WT:DYK.--Launchballer 08:36, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93: In that case, you can terminate this hook. - Toadboy123 (talk) 02:50, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- How about:
- ... that Qin Huasun criticized Taiwan's bid to join the United Nations as a "brazen attempt ... aimed at splitting a sovereign state"? although https://digitallibrary.un.org/record/240758/files/A_52_255-EN.pdf would probably be a better source for that than what's there now. RoySmith (talk) 21:04, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- From the above section, here's the hook ("aimed" dropped per discussion) with an ALT label:
- ALT1: ... that Qin Huasun criticized Taiwan's bid to join the United Nations as a "brazen attempt [...] at splitting a sovereign state"?
- New reviewer needed for ALT1. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:52, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- From the above section, here's the hook ("aimed" dropped per discussion) with an ALT label:
Articles created/expanded on May 12 edit
Lillie Shockney
- ... that Lillie Shockney is a co-founder of the Academy of Oncology Nurse & Patient Navigators?
- ALT1: ... that breast cancer patients became a primary patient population for nurse navigation after Lillie Shockney reported the impact of the program at Johns Hopkins Hospital? Source: https://www.myamericannurse.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/12/an12-Oncology-Navigtion-1201.pdf "Breast cancer navigation became a primary patient population focus of nurse navigation when Lillie Shockney, MAS, BS, RN, publicized her success at the Johns Hopkins Hospital in Baltimore, Maryland, where she helped increase appointment completions, improve timeliness of care, and expedite chemotherapy start time by 2 weeks."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Evgeniia Subbotina
Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 17:18, 12 May 2024 (UTC).
- The article is long enough and new enough with no copyright violations. All of the references are reliable. The article is neutral. Both hooks are cited, but I prefer ALT1. SL93 (talk) 21:40, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
- As a promoter, I also greatly prefer ALT1, but I don't quite understand the "nurse navigation" bit. What's the best way to simplify the hook Mary Mark Ockerbloom? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:33, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- The "nurse navigation" or "patient navigation" field is one that few people will know and hopefully people will go to the page to find out more about it. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 16:05, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- Ah I see, is there any way we can rephrase "primary patient population" to make it more accessible for the general reader then Mary Mark Ockerbloom? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:43, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
- The "nurse navigation" or "patient navigation" field is one that few people will know and hopefully people will go to the page to find out more about it. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 16:05, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29, I get it now. How's this? (same references and meaning, less tachnical language) Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 01:12, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1a: ... that breast cancer patients became a population who frequently worked with nurse navigators after Lillie Shockney reported the impact of the program at Johns Hopkins Hospital?
- ...I'm not sure, I think it's still a little unclear. I'll wait to see what another promoter thinks. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:13, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- As a promoter, I also greatly prefer ALT1, but I don't quite understand the "nurse navigation" bit. What's the best way to simplify the hook Mary Mark Ockerbloom? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:33, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 13 edit
BBL Drizzy
- ... that the instrumental track "BBL Drizzy" is about rumors accusing Canadian rapper Drake of receiving buttock augmentation surgery?
- ALT1: ... that American producer Metro Boomin unknowingly sampled a song created with generative artificial intelligence in the instrumental diss track "BBL Drizzy"? Source: https://www.billboard.com/business/tech/metro-boomin-bbl-drizzy-future-ai-sampling-1235682587/
- Reviewed:
~Liancetalk 21:07, 13 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Earwig's clear, long enough, new enough, sourced well, and gtg. The Graun really needs to get its reporting up though, "Metro did something that had yet to be done in this rap battle: he apologized" might be the most damning indictment of J Cole's role in the beef I've seen. AryKun (talk) 05:25, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
- Liance, would you do an ALT hook that doesn't mention "rumors accusing" a living person of cosmetic surgery? Rjjiii (talk) 18:52, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
- Just wanna say that this is awesome. Where will it show up? Freedun (yippity yap) 00:46, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
New reviewer needed for ALT1; as ALT0 is problematic, I don't intend to promote it. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:08, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Liance: Where is the "unknowingly" bit in the article and source?--Launchballer 00:34, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 14 edit
Maud Morgan (harpist)
- ... that Maud Morgan (pictured) was the first ever American to perform as a solo harpist on the American concert stage? Source: NYtimes (freely available via Proquest with Wikipedia Library, The Brooklyn Daily Eagle, Time magazine
- ALT0a: ... that Maud Morgan (pictured) is considered the first American to perform as a solo harpist on the American concert stage? Source: Same as above
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Axel Downard-Wilke
X (talk) 21:00, 14 May 2024 (UTC).
- I'm afraid that that QPQ does not count, as a previous full review had already been conducted.--Launchballer 21:31, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: A really interesting person to read about! I think we would need to use ALT 0a, which better reflects the claims of the sources. The only query is on the hook not appearing in the body of the article. If you can add it somewhere appropriate, this is good to go. Mystery Merrivale (talk) 10:09, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Mystery Merrivale: Done. Yes, let's go with ALT0a. X (talk) 11:10, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
- @X: That's great, ready to go with ALT0a. Mystery Merrivale (talk) 14:45, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
- Considered to be the first, sounds unsure but does reflect the uncertainty in the Time magazine source. Is there a possible hook that doesn't include "first"?
- @X: That's great, ready to go with ALT0a. Mystery Merrivale (talk) 14:45, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 15 edit
Sadie O. Horton
... that Sadie O. Horton (pictured), who was the first recorded female United States Merchant Marine veteran of World War II, filled various roles?
SL93 (talk) 04:36, 21 May 2024 (UTC).
- Comment only (not a review): cumbersome hook, the part "filled various roles" is pointless and superfluous to the more-than-notable statement preceding it. Just simplify the hook:
- ALT1: ... that Sadie O. Horton (pictured) was the first recorded female United States Merchant Marine veteran of World War II?
- -- P 1 9 9 ✉ 16:36, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Hook is interesting and meets criteria. Article is new enough and long enough. Picture is free use and used within article. Detected no plagiarism, but when spot-checking citations I was unable to verify the statement "They had 5 children" from this source which only mentions there were seven family members without specifying if these were children, or aunts, uncles, etc. Only three children are named within the source. I also struck the original hook based on above comments.
@SL93: Notifying as nominator. CSJJ104 (talk) 16:40, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
- CSJJ104 I just removed that part. SL93 (talk) 18:04, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
- Approving. I did consider that the word "recognised" might be better than recorded, but as at least one source uses the word recorded I am happy to approve as is. CSJJ104 (talk) 19:44, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93 and CSJJ104: Two things: the hook seems to rely on the evidence of Horton's son (the Daily Advance source notes "That's according to her son, Don Horton"), and the last sentence needs a better source than a blogspot image, which could potentially have been manipulated. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:10, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29 There are two other sources directly after that one that verify the fact. Sources 3 ("One such brave and seafaring woman was Sadie Horton, who was not recognized as a veteran until 2017 when her family received her official military DD 214 certificate of discharge as a veteran of the U.S. Merchant Marine.") and 8 (" Prior to this passing, mariners who remained along the coast faced difficulty in earning veteran status, thereby affecting benefits that they could later receive. For one woman in particular, it was the lobbying of her son who fought to finally receive paperwork of his mother's Honorable Discharge. ") SL93 (talk) 15:29, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- Also here - "Despite serving her country during World War II, Sadie Horton was not recognized as a veteran until February 2017, and even that was due to the extensive efforts of her son, Don." SL93 (talk) 15:43, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- I have removed the last sentence. SL93 (talk) 15:58, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- Page 41 of Daily Cargo News. SL93 (talk) 17:25, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93 and CSJJ104: Two things: the hook seems to rely on the evidence of Horton's son (the Daily Advance source notes "That's according to her son, Don Horton"), and the last sentence needs a better source than a blogspot image, which could potentially have been manipulated. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:10, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- Approving. I did consider that the word "recognised" might be better than recorded, but as at least one source uses the word recorded I am happy to approve as is. CSJJ104 (talk) 19:44, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 16 edit
Sea of Voices
- ... that "Sea of Voices" was accepted by Porter Robinson's fans even though it was a fundamental change to his prior musical style?
- Source: McCarthy, Zel (2014-03-28). "Porter Robinson's tired of 'electro bangers', will switch things up on Worlds debut album". Billboard.
- ALT1: ... that despite the single "Sea of Voices" being released just before the 86th Academy Awards, it became a trending topic on Twitter during the event? Source: ibid.
- Reviewed: [[]]
- Comment: This is my final QPQ-exempt nomination.
—TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 00:39, 17 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: LGTM, hooks looks good overall, tho I feel like the second one could be punchier, however that should not block promotion. I now have something new to listen to while I code :) Sohom (talk) 22:12, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- Appreciate the review, Sohom! If you like this song, I can confirm that Porter Robinson has plenty of other good options to jam to while writing. :D —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 22:24, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
IBM Advanced Computer Systems project
- ... that although it was never built, Lynn Conway notes that IBM's ASC-1 would have been the premier supercomputer of the era? Source: Conway 2011
- Reviewed: Hush WAACs
Maury Markowitz (talk) 16:20, 16 May 2024 (UTC).
- The article is long enough, new enough, and neutral with reliable sources. There are no copyright violations. There are a few issues. The part with "now-famous memo" has an external link, and external links should not be in the article's body. The last part of the Cancellation section needs to be referenced. As for the hook, the article actually says, "it would have been the premier supercomputer of the era". Conway likely was referring to the world, but the quoted words do no say that. SL93 (talk) 23:58, 25 May 2024 (UTC) SL93 (talk) 23:56, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93: fixed! Maury Markowitz (talk) 00:12, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Maury Markowitz: The part with "now-famous memo" has an external link, and external links should not be in the article's body. I can approve it once that is taken care of. SL93 (talk) 00:15, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93: This does not appear to be a reason to hold up DYK, but whatever, changed. Maury Markowitz (talk) 00:29, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Maury Markowitz: The part with "now-famous memo" has an external link, and external links should not be in the article's body. I can approve it once that is taken care of. SL93 (talk) 00:15, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93: fixed! Maury Markowitz (talk) 00:12, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- I meant the external link, in retrospect I realize that was not specified. Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:49, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 17 edit
Xiaotian Quan
- ... that Xiaotian Quan (pictured), the loyal canine companion of the deity Erlang Shen, is worshipped as the protector of pets? Source: Yifang, Lian (8 November 2019). "寵物開刀別擔心!到廟裡找哮天犬求平安". Now News (in Chinese).
- ALT1: ... that the Tibetan Mastiff breed is believed to be descended from the celestial dog Xiaotian Quan (pictured)? Source: "哮天犬食日天狗 二郎神神獸 - 大公報". Hong Kong Ta Kung Wen Wei Media Group (in Chinese). 29 September 2009.
- ALT2: ... that the proverb "to bite the hand that feeds you" is believed to have originated from a story about Xiaotian Quan (pictured) and Lü Dongbin, one of the Eight Immortals? Source: 台灣俗語諺語辭典(精) (in Chinese). 五南圖書出版股份有限公司. 1 July 2022. ISBN 978-626-317-913-4.
- Reviewed:
TheGreatPeng (talk) 12:36, 17 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new enough, more than long enough, and very well sourced. Hook is interesting and well-sourced, with a minor problem: while the source is Taiwanese, the article does not actually state that the worship actually takes place in Taiwan. Maybe just drop "in Taiwan", especially since the article mentions other countries like Malaysia as well? ALT1 is a bit dull, ALT2 is otherwise OK but "is said to have" is a bit weak. The image would otherwise be good, but it's a bit muddy/unclear and the dog is barely visible. (Not a blocker though, the image is optional anyway). Jpatokal (talk) 23:46, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
- @TheGreatPeng: Jpatokal (talk) 23:46, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Jpatokal:, Thank you for noticing. These days, I have returned to the U.S. and have had no time to edit on Wikipedia. Please pardon me. I have now fixed the issues you requested. Thanks. TheGreatPeng (talk) 06:46, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you so much. I already fixed image blur and color tone. TheGreatPeng (talk) 13:37, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- @TheGreatPeng: Jpatokal (talk) 23:46, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
- Request' - Hi, DYK promoter, As a newbie, I have made 4 or 5 DYK articles, but none of them were chosen with a photo. So if possible, please promote this DYK with an image. Thanks TheGreatPeng (talk) 13:40, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
George Kunkel (theatre manager)
- ... that blackface actor George Kunkel (pictured) originally portrayed the character of Uncle Tom to promote slavery during the American Civil War, but later used the part to attack it when his views changed?
- Source: Spingarn, Adena (2018). "Chapter 3: Uncle Tom and Jim Crow". Uncle Tom: From Martyr to Traitor. Stanford University Press. ISBN 9781503606098.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jude McAtamney
- Comment: Moved from draft to mainspace on May 17, 2024
4meter4 (talk) 05:00, 19 May 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this one. Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 21:57, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. I would just link 'blackface' and 'American Civil War' in the hook. Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 22:37, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
- Forgot to mention it but the photo is GTG too (in the PD, used in the article, clear photo). Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 23:06, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 18 edit
I Am Human (film)
- ... that the documentary film I Am Human has been used as a panel conversation starter by the Institute of Electrical and Electronics Engineers?
- Source: IEEE
- ALT1: ... that the documentary film I Am Human has been the conversation starter for neuroscience panel discussions at universities such as Harvard? Source:
- ALT2: ... that the documentary film I Am Human "chronicles how neurotechnology could restore sight, retrain the body, and treat diseases—then make us all more than human"? Source: See the subtitle of this WIRED article
- ALT3: ... that the documentary film I Am Human has been praised for its "fundamentally optimistic" nature with relation to "neuroscience and brain medicine"? Source: "We’re in a dark moment for the tech industry: a time when some new technologies have been adopted recklessly and backfired terribly, and others have developed far more slowly than their creators hoped. Against the backdrop of this pessimism, a film like I Am Human — a fundamentally optimistic documentary about neuroscience and brain medicine — feels surprisingly refreshing." The Verge
- ALT4: ... that the documentary film I Am Human asks the existential question "what makes us human"? Source: "By the end, though, the film's central question is more of an existential one: What makes us human?" WIRED
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Lewis Katz Gulfstream Charter Crash
TheSandDoctor Talk 00:06, 24 May 2024 (UTC).
- General eligibility:
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- Other problems: - Length is a bit iffy; the direct quotations take up a sizable portion of the article.
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Overall: Preference is for ALT1, though I'd use "such as" — Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:50, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: Thank you for the review. I have copyedited ALT1 per your suggestion as that is a good idea/better grammar. I respectfully disagree with relation to the length, though. I just added up the characters of the quotes and count only around 517 characters out of an article the DYKcheck tool says is over 2600 characters in length. Given that the DYK criterion for length is only 1500 characters, taking all of the quotes away would still leave us with around 2000-2100 characters in length, more than enough to qualify. The production section has no quotes, the premise has 2 but ultimately equating to a sentence, release has no quotes, and it is almost impossible to have a "critical reception" section without any quotes since that section is about what critics have written; take for example Shake It Off#Critical reception or Hackney Diamonds#Critical reception etc. --TheSandDoctor Talk 18:23, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- The critical reception section is fine. However, the third paragraph of #Premise is 60% quotations. The lengthy quotation in the lede could also be paraphrased to better present the premise; that would help improve neutrality as well. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 19:03, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: Does that look better now? --TheSandDoctor Talk 15:50, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, this looks better. Thank you! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:03, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: Does that look better now? --TheSandDoctor Talk 15:50, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
David W. Music
- ... that David W. Music has taught music, composed music, conducted music, and written about music?
- Source: Sourced to his entry in the Canterbury Dictionary of Hymnology.
- Reviewed:
- Comment: The hook gains its interest as an example of nominative determinism. If you think a different hook would be better, let me know.
Mystery Merrivale (talk) 19:06, 24 May 2024 (UTC).
- ALT0a: ... that David W. Music has taught, composed, conducted and written about music?
- Approved: Article is new enough, long enough, well-cited, presentable, and with no policy issues detected. QPQ waived. Hook is formatted and of good length. Hook fact cited in article (will assume that when he "led" a Sacred Harp sing ["directed" in source] this is equivalent to "conducting"). This is roughly verifiable from the summary preview of the subscription-required online source. Hook is interesting. Could probably do an alternate about the nominative determinism, but for non-April Fools, I don't think it'd be any more interesting than ALT0 which is excellent. I put up ALT0a just so the promoter can see them side-by-side, I think the slight repetition of phrasing in ALT0 (while less concise) makes for a better hook. All good! – Reidgreg (talk) 02:03, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
Ryu Sung-hyun
- ... that Olympian Ryu Sung-hyun (pictured) taught himself gymnastics for four years because his father did not want him to become an athlete?
- Source: KNSU (in Korean), The Dong-a Ilbo (in Korean)
- ALT1: ... that Ryu Sung-hyun (pictured) is set to become the first Korea National Sport University student athlete to compete at two Olympic Games? Source: KNSU (in Korean)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Peter Bowden
- Comment:
QPQ coming soonDone.
Riley1012 (talk) 13:02, 18 May 2024 (UTC).
- Comment I'm an IP user so I think I can't approve the overall DYK, but just a heads up that I'm a Korean speaker and I verified that both hook 1 and ALT1 are supported by the sources given. I'll give a slight comment that I'd prefer ALT1 be worded as "... that Ryu Sung-hyun (pictured) will become the first Korea National Sport University student athlete to compete at two Olympic Games?" Think the meaning of this is slightly clearer and it's slightly more concise. I prefer the main hook to ALT1 though; think it's more interesting. 104.232.119.107 (talk) 07:35, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for your input. I have changed the wording on ALT1. I was trying to figure out how to emphasize that he is competing in two Olympics while enrolled in the school- there are multiple alumni who have competed in multiple Olympics. -Riley1012 (talk) 12:50, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: hooks that treat the future as definite are problematic. I'm assuming Ryu Sung-hyun has qualified for the Olympics, but even athletes on their country's Olympic teams sometimes don't end up competing due to injury, illness, accident, or some other complication, so "will" is a problem (see WP:CRYSTAL). Perhaps "is set to become" could be used (though, like the IP user, I prefer the original hook):
- ALT1a: ... that Ryu Sung-hyun (pictured) is set to become the first Korea National Sport University student athlete to compete at two Olympic Games?
- Note that if you want the Olympics in the original hook, you can do so simply by adding "Olympian" before his name. —BlueMoonset (talk) 04:33, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: hooks that treat the future as definite are problematic. I'm assuming Ryu Sung-hyun has qualified for the Olympics, but even athletes on their country's Olympic teams sometimes don't end up competing due to injury, illness, accident, or some other complication, so "will" is a problem (see WP:CRYSTAL). Perhaps "is set to become" could be used (though, like the IP user, I prefer the original hook):
- Thanks for your input. I have changed the wording on ALT1. I was trying to figure out how to emphasize that he is competing in two Olympics while enrolled in the school- there are multiple alumni who have competed in multiple Olympics. -Riley1012 (talk) 12:50, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: The article is well-written, well-sourced, and well-organised. Both English-language and Korean-language sources were checked for close paraphrasing; no issues arose. Both hooks are interesting and verified, but I strongly favour the initial hook over ALT1. Yue🌙 03:15, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 19 edit
Alan Kulwicki Memorial Park
- ... that Alan Kulwicki Memorial Park was partially financed with a US$250,000 donation from Hooters chairman Robert Brooks?
- Source: $250,000 donation also the Pavilion is named called the Brooks Pavilion A Brooks family donation helped finance the pavilion
- ALT1: ... that there is a park and museum dedicated to a NASCAR driver in Greenfield, Wisconsin? Source: [Memorial celebrates NASCAR driver Nearly a decade after his death, Alan Kulwicki's Wisconsin hometown remembers him fondly. https://www.newspapers.com/article/wisconsin-state-journal-memorial-celebra/147798334/]
- ALT2: ... that a park named after a NASCAR driver features a building named after the owners of Hooters? Source: Brooks Pavilion, a house-size facility at the park named after Mark Brooks, who also died in the '93 crash. His family owns Hooters
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/New York State Pavilion
Lightburst (talk) 15:00, 21 May 2024 (UTC).
- New article of good length. Sources look OK and everything looks neutral. Hooks are cited and interesting. ALT2 stretches it a little since the building is not named after a current owner, but the others are good. The pictures are nice-looking, free photos taken by the nominator, good job there. QPQ is done. I see two minor problems that need to be addressed. The Milwaukee County Park System involvement is mentioned in the lead but not in the article body, and is unsourced. The infobox says the park was established in 1997, but this is also unsourced and not mentioned anywhere else (and it overwrites the "opened" parameter - what is the difference here?). Fix those issues and I think it's ready to go. Ffranc (talk) 10:48, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Lightburst: Please address the above. Z1720 (talk) 01:02, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Ffranc: Thanks for the review and ping. Been driving and traveling but coming to address. The main photo in the article shows the Milwaukee County Park System sign for the park but I added a source. I also removed the established date. The open date remains and is likely good enough. Lightburst (talk) 05:11, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Great Martyrdom of Edo
- ... that a Japanese samurai was beatified by Pope Benedict XVI nearly 400 years after his execution during the Great Martyrdom of Edo? Source: Vatican News "9) Juan Hara Mondo No Suke, mártir de Edo (1623), hoy diócesis de Tokio" (in Spanish)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Siege of Durham (1006)
(claimed, review not done)done
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Siege of Durham (1006)
WatkynBassett (talk) 20:43, 21 May 2024 (UTC).
- Will review. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:55, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:32, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: Just to be sure: This nomination of mine is approved, right? Or is there some issue I overlooked? Because if I see it correctly, the nomination is still in the pending category (maybe a technical issue?). Thanks a lot! WatkynBassett (talk) 05:52, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- It is approved. Not sure why it'd still be marked as pending... BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:48, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: Just to be sure: This nomination of mine is approved, right? Or is there some issue I overlooked? Because if I see it correctly, the nomination is still in the pending category (maybe a technical issue?). Thanks a lot! WatkynBassett (talk) 05:52, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
Edna Hibel
- ... that Edna Hibel painted over 10 different decades?
- ALT1: ... that a 2022 book lamented that American painter Edna Hibel did not have a Wikipedia article? Source: Marx, W.D. (2022). Status and Culture: How Our Desire for Social Rank Creates Taste, Identity, Art, Fashion, and Constant Change. Penguin Publishing Group. p. 148. ISBN 978-0-593-29670-7. Retrieved May 19, 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Lillie Shockney
SL93 (talk) 21:47, 19 May 2024 (UTC).
- Will review. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:05, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:07, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 20 edit
Jerzy Kosinski: A Biography
- ... that a biography of Jerzy Kosinski was published five years after his death? Source: https://www.latimes.com/archives/la-xpm-1996-05-12-bk-3077-story.html
- ALT1: ... that one of the reviewers of Jerzy Kosinski: A Biography argued that the book is both neutral but also an "apologia" and "justification of the misdeeds of a brilliantly flawed friend" of the author? Source: see https://www.latimes.com/archives/la-xpm-1996-05-12-bk-3077-story.html
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/American Colossus: Big Bill Tilden and the Creation of Modern Tennis
- Comment: I am having trouble coming up with a hook. First one is boring, hope the second one is more interesting.
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:52, 20 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article is well sourced and neutral. It's new enough and long enough. QPQ looks to be underway at Template:Did you know nominations/American Colossus: Big Bill Tilden and the Creation of Modern Tennis. I agree that the hooks could be more interesting, and I think it's because it glosses over why this person is notable. (Both in the hook and in the article body.) Following the links the article about the man himself, there's probably a way to describe at least one aspect of what earned him coverage in reliable sources. Either his fiction, his personal life, or both. Shooterwalker (talk) 15:57, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- Hey, this still has a lot of potential. I wanted to check back in to see when you have time to work on this again. Shooterwalker (talk) 16:19, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- Giving a ping to @Piotrus:. Shooterwalker (talk) 02:18, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- Shooterwalker, Sorry, my watchlist is not usable (too big), so I can see only pings. Do you have any suggestions for a more interesting hook? I am open to ideas, but as I said, I can't think of anything better, and I think the proposed hooks are "good enough" for DYK rules. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:51, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- That's ok, Piotrus. I think it's hard to come up with this because the article doesn't really summarize the contents of the book. The article summarizes several reviews of the book, but we don't have the context of what they're reviewing.
- Not to create too much more work, but would it be possible to get a short summary of the book in the contents section? It could be similar to the main Jerzy Kosinski article, plus even one sentence about the viewpoint/thesis of the author. If that's too much of a pain, plan B would be to scrape something from the review section. I can do my best to come up with something, but it would definitely be easier with more about the contents of the book. Shooterwalker (talk) 00:28, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
- Shooterwalker, The problem is that the reviews do not, as far as I recall, provide any comprehensive information on the book's contents, which I assume is a biography of Kosinski, and the reviewers assume everyone will figure that out, I guess. They do not talk about chapter structure or such, just occasionally engage with some parts of his biography presented in the book the reviewer found interesting. And there is the issue of trying to make this article (and hook) be about the book and not about Kosinski's biography, which after all is a different article... --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:40, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
- That's okay. We can work without it. I think the hook would end up overlapping with aspects of the subject of the book, but let me see what I can come up with. Shooterwalker (talk) 15:01, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- Piotrus How about this:
- ALT1a: ... that Jerzy Kosinski: A Biography described its subject as a "liar", and yet, one reviewer felt that the author's "studiously neutral position ends up sounding like an apologia for Kosinski".
- It leaves out a lot, but hopefully refines the original idea to invite more curiosity. Shooterwalker (talk) 15:15, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- Shooterwalker, Sure, it's likely more interesting that what I came up with. I've no problem "adopting" it so you can approve it :) --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:04, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- That sounds good to me. I approve ALT1a. (I also don't mind if another editor wants to come by with further revisions.) Shooterwalker (talk) 02:08, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- Shooterwalker, Sure, it's likely more interesting that what I came up with. I've no problem "adopting" it so you can approve it :) --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:04, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- Piotrus How about this:
- That's okay. We can work without it. I think the hook would end up overlapping with aspects of the subject of the book, but let me see what I can come up with. Shooterwalker (talk) 15:01, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- Shooterwalker, The problem is that the reviews do not, as far as I recall, provide any comprehensive information on the book's contents, which I assume is a biography of Kosinski, and the reviewers assume everyone will figure that out, I guess. They do not talk about chapter structure or such, just occasionally engage with some parts of his biography presented in the book the reviewer found interesting. And there is the issue of trying to make this article (and hook) be about the book and not about Kosinski's biography, which after all is a different article... --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:40, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Edward M. Zimmerman, Marie Kunkel Zimmerman
- ... that husband and wife Edward M. and Marie Zimmerman co-wrote the suffragist anthem "Votes for Women: Suffrage Rallying Song" (1915) (pictured)?
- Source: Crew, Danny O. (2015). Suffragist Sheet Music: An Illustrated Catalogue of Published Music Associated with the Women's Rights and Suffrage Movement in America, 1795-1921, with Complete Lyrics. McFarland & Company. p. 337. ISBN 9781476607443.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Travis Clayton
- Comment: Second QPQ: Template:Did you know nominations/C. J. Hanson
4meter4 (talk) 20:59, 26 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Articles nominated for double hook are new enough and long enough. Passes earwig, no close paraphrasing was found. The hook is interesting, cited inline, and verified. Image appropriately licensed. 2 QPQs done for each article nominated. GTG. Pseud 14 (talk) 23:52, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
Mary A. Wray
- ... that Mary A. Wray was the oldest living American actress at the time of her death in 1892? Source: The Oldest Actress Dead, Recent death: The Oldest Actress
- ALT1: ... that Mary A. Wray, a celebrated American actress of the 19th century, was considered the oldest representative of the American stage at the time of her death in 1892? Source: A Woman of the Century
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Henry Street salamander tunnels
X (talk) 05:20, 21 May 2024 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough, and neutral with all reliable sources. The hook is directly cited. I assume good faith on the book reference. I prefer the first hook. A QPQ is needed. SL93 (talk) 18:53, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93: QPQ done. Re AGF, you could also access them by Wikipedia Library repositories such as Newspapers.com and NewspaperArchive.com. But Google News archive in itself is freely accessible and reliable. And yes, let's go with ALT0. Regards. X (talk) 06:43, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
American Colossus: Big Bill Tilden and the Creation of Modern Tennis
- ... that American Colossus is a biography of a man who was "the most famous sportsman in the world" and "the most forgotten great athlete in American history"? Source:
Throughout the decade, Tilden was the most famous sportsman in the world
, Simon Briggs, "Brilliant New Biography Underlines Debt Tennis Owes to Big Bill Tilden", The Telegraph, February 23, 2018; andmost forgotten great athlete in American history
, Allen M. Hornblum as quoted in Dan Wolken, "Tennis Legend Bill Tilden's Controversial History Resurfaces in a Suitcase" USA Today, October 16, 2019.
Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 04:50, 20 May 2024 (UTC).
- Date, size, refs, hook, copyvio spotcheck, QPQ, etc. all fine - GTG. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:30, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 21 edit
Akinada Tobishima Kaido
- ... that the island-hopping Akinada Tobishima Kaido road near Hiroshima was named after its resemblance to stepping stones in a garden?
- Source: "Akinada Tobishima Kaido: The collective term for the seven bridges connecting Kure City and the islands of the Aki Sea in Hiroshima Prefecture. ""Tobishima"" is derived from ""tobi-ishi"", meaning ""stepping stones,"" due to the islands' appearance resembling the stepping stones of a garden.[1]
Jpatokal (talk) 07:46, 28 May 2024 (UTC).
- New enough. Barely long enough prose length (but definitely long enough when the bridge list is included). Well written. Citations check out. (I used Google Translate for the Japanese sources.) But the article needs a few additional citations. First, add citations for the eighth bridge and the existing seven bridges. And add Citation #1 to the hook (about the stepping stones.) Right now, you have just Citation #6. Other than the needed citations, others look good. No obvious copyright issues; the hook is interesting, and QPQ has been done. We're very close. Hybernator (talk) 21:22, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Hybernator: Thanks for the review! I've added the citations as requested. Jpatokal (talk) 01:11, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Jpatokal, thanks for the updates. Could you add the specific page numbers for Citation #4 ("大崎上島町 第2次長期総合計画")? It's a 130-page doc in Japanese, and it'll be helpful to the reader to provide the specific pages. Thanks. Hybernator (talk) 16:34, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Hybernator: Done. Jpatokal (talk) 06:09, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. Just reviewed your updates. The article reads well. AGF on Japanese sources. Good to go. Hybernator (talk) 22:17, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
References
Boom (Doctor Who)
- ... that while filming the Doctor Who episode "Boom" some takes lasted up to seven minutes?
- ALT1: ... that Steven Moffat was executive producer for only one episode of the fourteenth series of Doctor Who? Source: https://www.tvchoicemagazine.co.uk/tv/doctor-who/the-big-interview-doctor-whos-steven-moffat/
- ALT2: ... that the Doctor Who episode "Boom" was shot in chronological order? Source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R6zAd_nTLXY
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Silence Is Loud
- Comment: TheDoctorWho is the top contributor on the article, I am the second. Alex 21 created the draft and moved in into the main space.
Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:35, 21 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article is neutral, free from copyvio, suitably referenced, and meets the length and newness criteria—moved to mainspace on 21 May, the same day as this nomination. The hooks are succinct, neutral, interesting, and reliably sourced (though I would recommend adding timestamps to the video refs). My pick would be ALT2, then ALT0; I find ALT1 interesting personally, but I'm not sure general audiences would as well. QPQ is done (albeit a bit brief). This is good to go! – Rhain ☔ (he/him) 23:44, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
- Timestamp for ALT2 is from 6:08 to 6:28; it's a quote from Russell. TheDoctorWho (talk) 04:25, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 22 edit
Answers Research Journal
- ... that HIV has its origins in the Fall, according to one journal? Source: [6]
- Reviewed: Template:Did_you_know_nominations/George_Kunkel_(theatre_manager)
- Comment: If preferred, the 'according to the journal' clause can be in the beginning.
Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 22:48, 22 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: LGTM, tho I don't love the hook. Given that this is Psuedoscience territory, it might be best to err on the side of being a bit verbose.
How about ALT 1: ... that according to one creationist journal, HIV has its origins in the Fall?
Thoughts Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d? Sohom (talk) 21:59, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- Sohom Datta, Alt1 looks good to me! Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 23:37, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- Approved, per above. Sohom (talk) 00:36, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- Can I offer an even more direct alternative hook? And Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d, if you're not feeling this, you can strike it. Rjjiii (talk) 19:16, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- Approved, per above. Sohom (talk) 00:36, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that the inaugural article of one creationist journal claims that HIV goes back to the biblical Fall?
- I prefer the Alt1 hook still. Alt2 just seems a bit wordy. Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 19:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Deir ed Darb
- ... that Deir ed Darb, Arabic for "monastery of the road", is in fact a Jewish monumental tomb dating to the Second Temple period?
- Source: Raviv D., 2013, "Magnificent Tombs from the Second Temple Period in Western Samaria - New Insights", In the Highland's Depth - Ephraim Range and Binyamin Research Studies, Vol. 3, Ariel-Talmon ,pp. 109-142. (Hebrew); Peleg-Barkat, Orit; Raviv (2019). "שלושה פריטים ארכיטקטוניים מן התקופה הרומית הקדומה מאזור הכפר קרוות בני חסן" (PDF). במעבה ההר. 9: 43–58; Palmer, H (1881). "The survey of western Palestine". p. 228.
- Reviewed:
Owenglyndur (talk) 13:24, 22 May 2024 (UTC).
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- Other problems: - It appears that a paragraph uses content copied without attribution from Qarawat Bani Hassan
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Overall: Mariamnei (talk) 11:18, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Mariamnei: Did you mean to post a "maybe" status (purple slash) instead of an "again" status (red arrow)? The again status is for DYK that need another new reviewer, while the slash is for indicating that there is a concern with the article/nomination. Z1720 (talk) 23:27, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720: Hey there! This DYK overall looks pretty good, but since it's my first time doing a DYK review, I thought it'd be better to get another view. What do you think? Mariamnei (talk) 18:32, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Mariamnei: Since you outlined some concerns above, I'll let the nominator, Owenglyndur, address them. Z1720 (talk) 19:57, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, thank you for your comments and help to get the DYK right. I did not know i'm not allowed to copy some sentances from another Wikipedia article, especialy whemn it is so relevant for the article i wrote. I will not do it again in the future. Owenglyndur (talk) 07:18, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- Hey @Owenglyndur:, thanks for explaining that! Awesome, I see the pic is up on the article too. Looks like we're good to go! Mariamnei (talk) 08:39, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, thank you for your comments and help to get the DYK right. I did not know i'm not allowed to copy some sentances from another Wikipedia article, especialy whemn it is so relevant for the article i wrote. I will not do it again in the future. Owenglyndur (talk) 07:18, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Mariamnei: Since you outlined some concerns above, I'll let the nominator, Owenglyndur, address them. Z1720 (talk) 19:57, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720: Hey there! This DYK overall looks pretty good, but since it's my first time doing a DYK review, I thought it'd be better to get another view. What do you think? Mariamnei (talk) 18:32, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
- Just a question; the article refers to a "Dar" ("Dar - late 70's", "in Dar's opinion", "led Dar to conclude that"), but I cannot find any reference to any "Dar"?, cheers, Huldra (talk) 22:51, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- Also, it would have been nice to wikilink the SWP authors (Palmer, Conder, Kitchener) -and the page-links. Also; isn't the 3 and 7 references the same (except the page-no)? Why then is one marked in Hebrew, while the other is not? Also ref.3 has a red warning: "Cite journal requires journal=", cheers, Huldra (talk) 23:01, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
William Henry Harrison Seeley
- ... that William Henry Harrison Seeley was the first American recipient of the Victoria Cross?
- Reviewed: [[]]
- Comment: For the source, note that there are two newspaper sources that I couldn't get to as it seems that the access through The Wikipedia Library is down currently.
CommissarDoggoTalk? 10:50, 22 May 2024 (UTC).
- Comments by Tbhotch
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Overall: An article that was recently promoted to GA. No picture to review. No QPQ is needed, this is your fourth nomination. No copyright issues on text and files. The hook is interesting and sourced. The article is sourced and I assume good faith on the inaccessible sources. (CC) Tbhotch™ 04:54, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
Lois E. Trott
- ... that American educator Lois E. Trott (pictured) ran the first lodging house for homeless girls in America, providing shelter and support for over 1,000 girls annually, all without receiving any payment? Source: A Woman of the Century
- ALT0a: ... that American educator Lois E. Trott (pictured) managed the first lodging house for homeless girls in America, providing shelter and support for over 1,000 girls annually, without receiving any remuneration? Source: A Woman of the Century
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sam Kee Building
X (talk) 14:59, 22 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The article was created on 22 May 2024. It has a readable prose size of 3211 characters. QPQ not yet done. WP:EARWIG shows now copyvios. More comments later.
Each paragraph has a source. Some parts of the lead and the section "Early life and education" sound very similar to the text in Moulton 1893, p. 722. This needs to be rewritten to avoid WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE. I didn't check the rest of the article so please make sure that the problem is not found in other parts as well. The hooks are interesting and supported by the source. Both hooks are too long: they should be below 200 characters and ideally below 160 characters. The picture is freely licenced, used in the article, and clear. Phlsph7 (talk) 13:44, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Phlsph7: thanks for your evaluation. Some parts of the lead and the section "Early life and education" sound very similar Because they are similar. I've used it as a source material, and "the article merely presents standard facts for a topic like this in standard sequence. The article does not copy any creative words or phrases, similes or metaphors." And a direct comparison with the Moulton source shows no violation. However, all of these becomes irrelevant here because the dictionary is in public domain and properly attributed in the source section. Regardless PD or not, the article does not closely paraphrase, rather presents standard facts in an orderly sequence. WP:LIMITED exists. Although redundant, I've now added a PD template as well in the ref section (which is usually done if it's a case of somewhat direct copy-paste, although this isn't the case here). Re the blurb's lentgh, while nominating I made sure they are under 200 characters. And yes shorter blurbs would be better. We may simply remove the "American educator" bits: ALT0b ... that Lois E. Trott (pictured) ran the first lodging house for homeless girls in America, providing shelter and support for over 1,000 girls annually, all without receiving any payment? ALT0c... that Lois E. Trott (pictured) ran the first lodging house for homeless girls in America, providing shelter and support without receiving any payment?
Let me know which one you prefer or if have your own opinion. Regards. X (talk) 07:24, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
- The template should solve the close-paraphrase problem. I wasn't aware that the phrase "(pictured)" does not count towards the character limit (per WP:DYK200), which means that the original hooks pass the test. I think all that remains is the QPQ. Phlsph7 (talk) 07:55, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
Mel Carnahan
- ... that Mel Carnahan (pictured) was the first person in U.S. history to be elected to the United States Senate posthumously?
- ALT1: ... that in 1999, Missouri Governor Mel Carnahan (pictured) commuted a death sentence at the request of Pope John Paul II? Source: https://www.nytimes.com/1999/01/29/us/governor-grants-pope-s-plea-for-life-of-a-missouri-inmate.html
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FountofInterestingInfo (talk) 14:10, 22 May 2024 (UTC).
- (for original hook, which is most interesting) GA status, date, close paraphrase check ok. No qpq needed. Image free on Commons. --Soman (talk) 19:37, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 23 edit
List of historic places in Gore District
- ... that the Creamoata Mill, which once produced a now-nonexistent breakfast food, was listed as Gore's only "place of outstanding historical and cultural influence"?
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 20:49, 23 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Everything checks out. SL93 (talk) 02:12, 12 June 2024 (UTC) SL93 (talk) 02:12, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
Morris Villarroel
- ... that for several years, Morris Villarroel wore a camera on his chest that took 1,200 photos a day?
―Panamitsu (talk) 08:46, 23 May 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:29, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. Awaiting QPQ. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:35, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: I've done the QPQ now. ―Panamitsu (talk) 22:52, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
- BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:57, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: I've done the QPQ now. ―Panamitsu (talk) 22:52, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
Dazed and Confused (film)
- ... that Gramercy Pictures attempted to build publicity for Dazed and Confused by screening the film to antidrug and Christian groups to force a protest?
- Source: Maerz, Melissa (2020). Alright, Alright, Alright: The Oral History of Richard Linklater's Dazed and Confused. HarperCollins. pp. 313-324
- ALT1: ... that Richard Linklater's original concept for Dazed and Confused took place entirely within a car as its characters listened to ZZ Top? Source: Spitz, Marc (December 26, 2013). "An Oral History of Dazed and Confused". Maxim. Archived from the original on April 28, 2017. Retrieved May 7, 2017.
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Lbal (talk) 02:34, 23 May 2024 (UTC).
- I like the first DYK idea, especially how the studio forced a protest to bring attention to the movie. It's also reasonably sourced. Yoshiman6464 ♫🥚 14:04, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- Approved ALT0, ALT1: Article is new enough (nominated the day it became a GA), long enough, well-cited to reliable sources, presentable, and with no policy issues detected (a relatively high Earwig score due to quotes from interviews, reviews, and soundtrack lists). QPQ waived. Hooks are formatted, of good length, cited in article and interesting (verified source for ALT1, AGF for offline source for ALT0). Good work! – Reidgreg (talk) 20:46, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
- BTW, the two non-bolded articles in ALT1, Richard Linklater and ZZ Top, have refimprove tags... it'd be nice if those were addressed before this ran, though it is not a requirement. – Reidgreg (talk) 20:46, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
Metaphysics
- ... that metaphysics may have received its name by a historical accident?
- Source: [1]
- ALT1: ... that 20th-century metaphysics started with a "revolt against idealism"? Source: [2]
- ALT2: ... that according to some metaphysicians, everything in the world is predetermined, but humans are free nonetheless? Source: [3]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Lois E. Trott
- Comment:
References
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- Mumford 2012, § 10. What Is Metaphysics?
- Carroll & Markosian 2010, pp. 1–2
- ^ Griffin 2013, pp. 383–385
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- O’Connor & Franklin 2022, Lead Section, § 2.4 Compatibilist Accounts of Sourcehood
- Timpe, Lead Section, § 3c. Compatibilism, Incompatibilism, and Pessimism
- Armstrong 2018, p. 94
- Sources
- Mumford, Stephen (2012). Metaphysics: A Very Short Introduction (1 ed.). Oxford University Press. ISBN 978-0-19-965712-4.
- Carroll, John W.; Markosian, Ned (2010). An Introduction to Metaphysics (1 ed.). Cambridge University Press. ISBN 978-0-521-82629-7.
- Griffin, Nicholas (2013). "Russell and Moore's Revolt against British Idealism". In Beaney, Michael (ed.). The Oxford Handbook of The History of Analytic Philosophy. Oxford University Press. doi:10.1093/oxfordhb/9780199238842.013.0024. ISBN 9780191749780.
- O’Connor, Timothy; Franklin, Christopher (2022). "Free Will". The Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy. Metaphysics Research Lab, Stanford University. Archived from the original on 15 May 2021. Retrieved 28 March 2024.
- Timpe, Kevin. "Free Will". Internet Encyclopedia of Philosophy. Archived from the original on 6 April 2019. Retrieved 28 March 2024.
- Armstrong, D. M. (2018). The Mind-body Problem: An Opinionated Introduction. Routledge. ISBN 978-0-429-96480-0. Archived from the original on 28 March 2024. Retrieved 29 March 2024.
Phlsph7 (talk) 13:02, 23 May 2024 (UTC).
- AGF on the source for ALT0, which I do not have access to. However, it is cited within the article which is good. (The sentence itself needs to be cited per DYK rules, but I did that myself to save time.) Hook itself is interesting, QPQ checks out, article eligibility and length (obviously) is good. Seems like we're good to go here. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 23:32, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
Youn Sung-ho
- ... that a DJ 'monk', NewJeanNim, was credited with reviving interests of Buddhism among South Korean youths? Source: South Korean DJ NewJeansNim barred from performing at Singapore nightclub
- Reviewed:
– robertsky (talk) 17:23, 23 May 2024 (UTC).
- Good to go. Article is new enough, just long enough, and has the proper sourcing. Earwig tool shows a very low copyvio%. The article is presentable, and the hook is both sourced properly and particularly interesting. QPQ is unnecessary here. Should be all good. Soulbust (talk) 15:23, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
- New to DYK. Article looks fine but the hook is a bit awkward - maybe try ...that "NewJeansNim," a DJ[ing] monk, was credited with reviving interest in Buddhism among South Korean youth[s]? (Bracketed parts are ones I might add or remove.) Also the guy's nickname is NewJeansNim (not NewJeanNim) and the article uses his real name as the title (though I've seen a fair amount of DYKs that were TV Tropes-style potholed). Wuju Daisuki (talk) 00:46, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
Clark House (New Zealand)
- ... that Clark House (pictured) was used to host Cold War meetings?
- ALT1: ... that Clark House (pictured) was constructed with hollow ceramic blocks? Source: https://clough.co.nz/monographs/clough_monograph3.pdf
- Reviewed:
- Comment: First time at DYK, I think the Cold War hook is more interesting to a general reader, although someone into architecture would be more interested about the hollow ceramic blocks (but most of that information is out of scope for the article).
Abydocomist (talk) 17:56, 23 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Really nice inaugural article from new user Abydocomist about a historic house in West Auckland, New Zealand (hopefully many more to come!) Since I am taking the Clough & Associates reference on good faith (I had problems accessing it on my browser) I would rather stick with ALT0. I also removed a possibly promotional sentence which used an unreliable source. Havradim leaf a message 08:00, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 24 edit
Come, O thou Traveller unknown
- ... that Isaac Watts, the "father of English hymnody", described one of Charles Wesley's hymns as "worth all the verses he himself had written"?
- Source: The entry in the Canterbury Dictionary of Hymnology: "Almost all commentators quote from John Wesley’s obituary of his brother at the Methodist Conference of 1788: ‘His least praise was his talent for poetry: although Dr Watts did not scruple to say, that “that single poem, Wrestling Jacob, was worth all the verses he himself had written”.’"
Mystery Merrivale (talk) 16:33, 29 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article is long enough and new enough. Earwig shows high percentage, but it's either the long names or the quote, that's properly attributed in text, so should be fine. The hook is interesting, and the only question I have is why there is no excerpt from the hymn there, given that it's in PD? I think that it'll be nice to actually see at list one stanza of the acclaimed hymn, that "worth all the verses" of the "father of English hymnody". Otherwise it's good to go, QPQ is done, and thanks for the nice article! Artem.G (talk) 15:26, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Battle of Stainmore
- ... that the events following the Battle of Stainmore have been called the end of the first Viking age in England?
- Source: https://www.bbc.co.uk/history/ancient/vikings/bloodaxe_01.shtml "This is sometimes taken as the end of the first Viking Age"
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Camping in Alaska
- Comment: Unsure why DYKcheck is saying this isn't a 5x expansion, but checking this version against the current version seems to show the required expansion.
CSJJ104 (talk) 21:53, 24 May 2024 (UTC).
- Expansion length and date, hook, qpq, close paraphrase check ok. --Soman (talk) 01:31, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
Sam Kee Building
- ... that the Sam Kee Building (pictured), recognized by Guinness World Records as the "narrowest commercial building in the world", was built on a bet between two businessmen?
- Source: Moliere, Ashley (May 25, 2021). "Built on a Bet: An inside Look at the World's Narrowest Building". CBC News.
- ALT1: ... that the title of "narrowest commercial building in the world" is contested between the Sam Kee Building (pictured) in Vancouver, British Columbia, and the Hendel Building in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania? Source: Mellon, Steve (May 30, 2004). "Here: In Downtown". Pittsburgh Post-Gazette. p. F9. Archived from the original on February 5, 2010.
- ALT2: ... that Chinese-Canadian businessman Sam Kee built the Sam Kee Building (pictured), a narrow spite house, after the city took his land without compensating him? Source: "Sam Kee Building". Canadian Register of Historic Places. Parks Canada.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ryu Sung-hyun
- Comment: A very curious building in my hometown with many interesting details, too many to fit in one DYK nomination. The hooks offered here are ordered by my personal preference.
Yue🌙 03:34, 24 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The fivefold is borderline met here as per my calculation. All other criteria are fulfilled. I've done some minor copy-editing. ALT0 is the most intriguing of the 3. X (talk) 08:10, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 25 edit
Larrabee County, Iowa
- ... that Larrabee County was a proposed county in Iowa, however because it failed, Iowa remained a state with 99 counties?
- Reviewed:
48JCL (talk) 11:39, 25 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article attained Good article status. No problems regarding copyright and referencing, and hook mentioned in the 'Proposal' section and is cited. Good to go. - Toadboy123 (talk) 02:59, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Toadboy123 Thank you! 48JCL (talk) 19:27, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
Ella Scoble Opperman
* ... that American pianist Ella Scoble Opperman (pictured), the first dean of the Florida State College for Women, was praised for growing the college into a credible School of Music?
- Source: Faucett, B.F. (2017). The Marching Chiefs of Florida State University: The Band That Never Lost a Halftime Show. McFarland, Incorporated, Publishers. p. 19. ISBN 978-1-4766-6832-1. Retrieved May 25, 2024.
SL93 (talk) 07:55, 25 May 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing now! Innisfree987 (talk) 03:06, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
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The documentation on this image is not really adequate (incorrect template used, no date given in the source linked); however this alternative source shows a portion of the same picture with a date given as circa 1920, and thus PD in the US, so I do believe it’s freely licensed but I’m not sure how we can adequately update the documentation; that probably does need to happen so it doesn’t wind up deleted on a technicality while on MP. Alternately, that site does have more pictures of her you could choose from, altho the organ is very nice. - Used in article:
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Overall: For the image and the sourcing, just let me know when updated and I will update my review! Innisfree987 (talk) 03:32, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
- Innisfree987 I added more sources. I will just ditch the image. SL93 (talk) 04:13, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: * ... that American pianist Ella Scoble Opperman, the first dean of the Florida State College for Women, was praised for growing the college into a credible School of Music?
- Thanks for the quick turnaround! All set now. Innisfree987 (talk) 05:46, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 26 edit
Portrait of Cornelis van der Geest
- ... that for many years a painting (pictured) was attributed to a different painter and the person in the portrait was also misidentified?
- Source: page 71
- ALT1: ... that experts at the National Gallery in London believe that Anthony van Dyck executed a painting (pictured) of the subject's head and collar but over the years other artists expanded it? Source: page 72
- ALT2: ... that a portrait (pictured) at the National Gallery in London is considered a "problem painting" because it was skinned and the early provenance is not known? Source: page 71
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/To Catch a Copper
Bruxton (talk) 21:31, 26 May 2024 (UTC).
- I like the first hook best. Article is in good shape, great job on it. Seems fully sourced to reliable sources, and there's no evidence of copyvio. QPQ checks out. Hook checks out from the Google Books link. Good to go. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:26, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Command information newspaper
- ... that 80,000 copies of a command information newspaper were dumped into the South China Sea during the Vietnam War?
- Source: Newsday (2005)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jaelyn Brown
- Comment: 5x expansion start on May 26.
Cielquiparle (talk) 22:58, 28 May 2024 (UTC).
- 5x expanded, article is NPOV and reliably-sourced, hook is interesting, reliably-sourced in-article. Verified QPQ required in order to pass. ViperSnake151 Talk 23:32, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks ViperSnake151. Have added QPQ above. Also changed "in" to "into" in the hook as I think it's better. Cielquiparle (talk) 04:16, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
- Approved. ViperSnake151 Talk 05:49, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
- Per WP:NEWSORG, the source would be primary. It could be attributed to the author, but it's a hard fact. Could the citation be switched to a secondary source? Rjjiii (talk) 18:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks ViperSnake151. Have added QPQ above. Also changed "in" to "into" in the hook as I think it's better. Cielquiparle (talk) 04:16, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
Songbird (TV program)
- ... that in her musical show Songbird, Regine Velasquez picks out one lesser-known song to perform from the featured theme each week?
Pseud 14 (talk) 00:04, 27 May 2024 (UTC).
- Expansion date and length ok. QPQ done and close paraphrase ok. The source is not exactly independent (GMA, same as producing company) but the claim is hardly extraordinary. --Soman (talk) 01:36, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 27 edit
David Marchese
- ... that David Marchese accidentally posted a picture of a cat's testicles on Salon.com?
- ALT1: ... that David Marchese comes to interviews with three to five pages of questions prepared in advance? Source: "I come in with anywhere from three to five pages of questions that I’ve narrowed in advance."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mindar
Spaghettifier (talk) 01:53, 30 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article looks good -- created within the window, long enough and generally in a good state. All statements are sourced and I can see no BLP or copyvio issues: the article does err on the positive side, and there might be some relevancy questions about e.g. the volume of his notes or his high-school disciplinary record, but none which represent serious problems or should prevent a DYK appearance. I do however think that His 2018 interview with Quincy Jones, in which the subject ... revealed an affair between Marlon Brando and Richard Pryor, went viral on social media needs a rephrase: revealed means that it was absolutely factual, whereas it seems that the claim is far more contentious and a serious matter to at least one living person. It hardly needs saying that ALT0 is the stronger hook: there's a WP:SELFPUB question-mark over it that would be solved by changing it to "once claimed to have..." or similar. UndercoverClassicist T·C 19:24, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- @UndercoverClassicist: Thanks for the review! In regards to the Brando/Pryor sentence, let me know if the phrasing (alluded to an alleged affair) looks more solid — I also added another reference to substantiate the whole topic a bit. Also cut the suspension sentence, I was wavering about whether to include it. To couch the hook a little bit, how's this below?
- ALT2: ... that David Marchese once recalled accidentally posting a picture of a cat's testicles on Salon.com?
- Cheers — Spaghettifier (talk) 01:38, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Approved: all of that works well. UndercoverClassicist T·C 09:26, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Solomon Islands at the 2020 Summer Olympics
- ... that a law was signed so that the delegation of the Solomon Islands at the 2020 Summer Olympics could return home?
- ALT1: ... that the Solomon Islands used the 2020 Summer Olympics as a learning opportunity for their hosting of the 2023 Pacific Games? Source: https://www.oceanianoc.org/press/rara-using-tokyo-olympics-to-inform-sol-2023-pacific-games
- ALT2: ... that Naoyuki Fujiyama's role as the chef de mission of the Solomon Islands at the 2020 Summer Olympics was controversial as he was not a citizen of the Solomon Islands? Source: https://www.oceanianoc.org/press/tokyo-2020-organising-committee-hosts-chefs-de-mission-seminar-in-tokyo-this-week https://www.solomonstarnews.com/fujiyama-told-to-step-down/
- Reviewed: [[]]
Arconning (talk) 13:19, 27 May 2024 (UTC).
- Qualifies through 5x expansion. Good sourcing on both the first hook and the article in general. No evidence of copyvio, article generally in good shape. Still needs a QPQ. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:24, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- Oops! I've seen you around so much I sort of assumed you needed a QPQ; this is good to go. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:49, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Called by Name
- ... that the Called by Name project aims to commemorate Poles who were murdered for aiding Jews during World War II? Source: pretty much any and all sources in the article
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:46, 27 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article seems presentable enough. It's also eligible in terms of newness and length. No evidence of copyvio. The first source in the article checks out. This hook seems like it needs "the" added before "Called by Name", but otherwise is interesting enough. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 23:16, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: "the" has been added. Thank you for the review. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:20, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
- Good to go here. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:29, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: "the" has been added. Thank you for the review. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:20, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
Watamou Lamien, Revolutionary Military Organization
- ... that the Upper Voltan National Radio chief editor Watamou Lamien was the liaison between the ROC group of young radical military officers and the clandestine Voltan Revolutionary Communist Party?
- Source: James Genova. Making New People: Politics, Cinema, and Liberation in Burkina Faso, 1983–1987. MSU Press, 2022.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Songbird (TV program), Template:Did you know nominations/Battle of Stainmore
Soman (talk) 01:41, 27 May 2024 (UTC).
- Both articles are in good shape, I don't see any evidence of copyvio or anything that would need fixing before running. AGF on the hook, but it's supported and cited in both articles. QpQs check off. Both articles are eligible in terms of length and newness. Seems good to go here. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 23:13, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 28 edit
Erismatopterus
- ... that the Eocene fish Erismatopterus has been preserved in shoaling formation?
- Source: Mizumoto, N.; Miyata, S.; Pratt, S.C. (2019), "Inferring collective behaviour from a fossilized fish shoal"
- ALT1: ... that young Erismatopterus formed shoals as a likely way to avoid predators? Source: Mizumoto, N.; Miyata, S.; Pratt, S.C. (2019), "Inferring collective behaviour from a fossilized fish shoal"
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Meratus blue flycatcher
Kevmin § 04:09, 28 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Everything looks good to me. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:50, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Red Sea mangroves
- ... that unlike other mangrove ecosystems, Red Sea mangroves have been expanding in area since 1972?
- Source: Almahasheer, H; Aljowair, A; Duarte, CM; Irigoien, X (2016). "Decadal stability of Red Sea mangroves". Estuarine, Coastal and Shelf Science. 169: 164–172.
- Reviewed:
— hike395 (talk) 13:29, 28 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Very short article barely over the minimum length about an interesting habitat of the Read Sea. Newness is ok, hook is cited and interesting. The article is well sourced, and earwig could not detect any plagiarism. Picture has a valid license and clear at 100 pixels. No QPQ required. My only remark for @Hike395: is that it would be nice to add to the article some information present in the two online source about the economic and ecological significance of the mangroves. This would make the article longer and above all more interesting. Alex2006 (talk) 05:54, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- Added material about economic benefits (e.g., ecosystem services) and more about ecological significance. — hike395 (talk) 06:14, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Yazathingyan (14th-century minister)
- ... that Yazathingyan Nga Mauk betrayed his brother Commander Nga Nu after being promised Nu's wife Queen Saw Omma?
- Source: Chronicle sources: (Maha Yazawin Vol. 1 2006: 278–279); (Yazawin Thit Vol. 1 2012: 184); (Hmannan Vol. 1 2003: 400–401)
Hybernator (talk) 21:38, 1 June 2024 (UTC).
- The article was made on May 28th, so is new enough. It is more than long enough. The article reads neutrally and properly uses in-line citations. AGF on the offline sources and copyvio check, which finds no issues with the one online source. The hook is interesting, short enough, and cited inline. The QPQ has been done. Looks good to go! SilverserenC 02:36, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Jude Law
- ... that English actor Jude Law is actually named "David", as a result of his parents naming their children after their best friends?
- Source: WIRED Autocomplete Interview: https://www.wired.com/video/watch/natalie-portman-jude-law-answer-the-web-s-most-searched-questions (7:28)
B3251 (talk) 23:50, 28 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Waiting for the QPQ. 🌙Eclipse (talk) (contribs) 23:05, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
- @LunaEclipse: QPQ added. Thanks, B3251 (talk) 19:56, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
Detroit Lions draft history
- ... that 15 future Pro Football Hall of Fame players were drafted by the Detroit Lions? Source: Pro Football Hall of Fame – 15 entries for the Lions.
- Reviewed: N/A
Hey man im josh (talk) 15:53, 28 May 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:01, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Hey man im josh: Looking at the link, I see Wojciechowicz (1), Graham (2), Tittle (3), Karras (4), B. Sanders (5), Johnson (6), Stanfel (7), Biletnikoff (8), Barney (9), Lary (10), C. Sanders (11), Christiansen (12), Schmidt (13), Speedie (14) and Creekmur (15). Am I missing something? BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:59, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: Looks like it was me who was missing something. I believe I accidently counted Doak Walker, who wasn't actually drafted by the Lions. I've updated this nom and the article appropriately. I also updated the DYK statement's wikilinking (but not the wording outside of the number of players). Hey man im josh (talk) 17:10, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: With the number issue being sorted out, this looks good to go. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:01, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
Kēkerengū
- ... that the sheep-herding founder of Kekerengu in New Zealand became an international fugitive?
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 00:09, 28 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article was moved to mainspace on the 28th, so is new enough. At over 3000 characters, it is long enough. In-line citations are properly used, the article reads neutrally, and the copyvio detector found no issues. The hook is neutral, interesting, and cited in-line in the article. The QPQ has been done. Looks good to go! SilverserenC 23:24, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
Hindu Temple of Wisconsin
- ... that the first Hindu temple in Wisconsin was built "in the middle of nowhere"?
- Source: [7] The 22 acres that are home to the Hindu and Jain Temples of Wisconsin were situated in “the middle of nowhere” when they were built in 2001, according to Sarvesh Geddam, the secretary of the two congregations.
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Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk contribs) 17:01, 28 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article new and long enough, well-referenced generally. Hook interesting, cited inline and verified by source cited. No copyvio detected, and nominator has no QPQ requirements. Good to go. Juxlos (talk) 03:36, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 29 edit
Tatto Suwarto Pamuji
- ... that after completing his tenure as regent, Tatto Suwarto Pamuji walked 96 kilometres (60 mi) to fulfill a vow he made? Source: [8]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/John White (Kentucky politician)
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Juxlos (talk) 03:31, 29 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article seems in good enough shape. Hook is interesting, and although I am limited to English, the news article seems to directly confirm the hook even without knowledge of Indonesian. No evidence of copyvio, fully sourced, and the hook fact is correctly cited in-article. Just needs that QPQ. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:32, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: QPQ added. Juxlos (talk) 08:51, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- Good to go! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 14:12, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: QPQ added. Juxlos (talk) 08:51, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
Charleen Kinser
- ... that a mail-order catalogue offered a "Rocking Ram" toy designed by Charleen Kinser for $1600 in 1985?
- Source: Gilman-Tompkins, Sherri (8 May 1985). "Tiniest Yuppies Treated Royally in this Catalogue". Chicago Tribune – via ProQuest.
Take the $1,600 Rocking Ram by Forever Toys, which will be available in the next catalogue. The animal's fleece is made of three types of sheepskin, hand pieced and stitched.
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- Comment: QPQ now done: A Modern Mephistopheles Mike Turnbull (talk) 16:33, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Found an open url for the source:[9] Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 06:40, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
Mike Turnbull (talk) 16:01, 30 May 2024 (UTC).
- Interesting enough — it might be good to include a conversion template for readers unaware of what $1600 means in an 1980s US context, but I don't think this is strictly required. Hook does check out with the source, and the article is long enough, eligible, and fully cited. I don't see any evidence of copyvio. Looks good to go. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:58, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Added inflation template to article:[10]. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 08:47, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Yulia Lipnitskaya
- ... that Yulia Lipnitskaya (pictured) is the youngest Olympic figure skating gold medalist since 1936 and second-youngest ever?
- Source: Yahoo! Sports
- ALT1: ... that at the 2014 Olympic Games, Yulia Lipnitskaya (pictured) became Russia’s youngest ever Winter Olympic gold medalist? Source: The Telegraph
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jordynn Dudley
- Comment:
QPQ coming soon
Riley1012 (talk) 11:18, 29 May 2024 (UTC).
- GA status confirmed as recent (May 29, 2024). Size, hook, etc. all GTG. I wonder if a more interesting hook could be made, for example about anorexia?. I'd be happy to review a more interesting hook if any are proposed. Ping Riley1012. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:38, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 30 edit
List of individual body parts
- ... that the Sourtoe (pictured) is one of many body parts found around the world?
- ALT1: ... that a toe used for cocktails (pictured) is one of many body parts found around the world?
- ALT2: ... that a human toe (pictured) is one of many body parts that are tourist attractions? "Up in the far north of Canada, there is a bar where you can order a shot of whiskey garnished with a real human toe."
- ALT3: ... that body parts such as arm bones (example pictured) are sometimes placed in arm-shaped reliquaries? Source: ...while a fragment of the bone in his left arm was eventually transferred to San Domenico Maggiore in Naples, where it is still preserved inside an arm-shaped reliquary made of bronze, silver and glass in the church’s Sacred Relics Chamber.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Melanie L. Campbell
gobonobo + c 23:02, 4 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Everything looks good to me! A very interesting list. Preference is for either toe hook. Noting that DYK Check shows less than 1500 characters, but the text in the list proper is well over the limit — Chris Woodrich (talk) 20:45, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Melanie L. Campbell
- ... that Melanie L. Campbell was arrested for civil disobedience while protesting against ongoing proposed voter restrictions?
- Source: https://www.essence.com/news/black-women-leading-the-fight-for-voting-rights/ Since the November elections, lawmakers in 49 states have proposed over 400 measures to restrict voting access... Those detained included Rep. Joyce Beatty (D-OH), Melanie Campbell, Clayola Brown, Barbara Arnwine, Linda Sarsour, and several others who engaged in civil disobedience.
- Reviewed:
CaptainAngus (talk) 22:47, 3 June 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new enough and long enough. It is presentable, well-sourced, written neutrally, and BLP-compliant. Earwig looks good. The hook is cited and interesting. QPQ is not required. The article's image is freely licensed. @CaptainAngus: The hook phrase "protesting against ongoing proposed voter restrictions" reads a little awkward to me. I suggest dropping the "against ongoing" or something like "...that Melanie L. Campbell was arrested for civil disobedience while protesting proposed restrictions on voting rights?" gobonobo + c 16:55, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Gobonobo: I'm good with your suggested streamlining! Thank you very much! CaptainAngus (talk) 22:24, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Melanie L. Campbell was arrested for civil disobedience while protesting proposed voter restrictions?
- ALT2: ... that Melanie L. Campbell was arrested for civil disobedience while protesting proposed restrictions on voting rights?
Al-Ma'mun al-Bata'ihi
- ... that the Fatimid vizier al-Ma'mun al-Bata'ihi helped empower Caliph al-Amir, only to be imprisoned and executed by the latter?
- Source: Summary of the article sections 'Rise to power' and 'Downfall and death'.
- ALT1: ... that the attempts of Fatimid vizier al-Ma'mun al-Bata'ihi to construct an astronomical observatory led to rumours of his wanting to use it to predict the future or perform magics? Source: Halm, p. 139: "im Volk munkelte man gar, dieser habe mit Hilfe des Saturn die Zukunft zu ergründen oder Magie zu treiben versucht"
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Battle of Dollar
Constantine ✍ 11:47, 30 May 2024 (UTC).
- Ooh, nice GA! Qualifies through that, and the article is in great shape and fully cited. No evidence of copyvio, and I think the first hook is pretty interesting. The QPQ seems good. However, the hook really does need a specific source - we would just need the specific page numbers of (what I assume) Halm & Brett for him helping al-Amir rise to power, and him being imprisoned & executed. Once we have that, it's good to go. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:17, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: The article has a quote from Brett in the section 'Rise to power' (p. 253: "The relationship itself was one of alliance, in which the minister was entrusted as before with the responsibilities of government, in return for bringing the monarch out from his seclusion into the public eye"), and for the rest, Brett p. 257 ("[al-Bata'ihi] he had exchanged al-Afdal for the Caliph as his patron. Thereby he had placed himself in the position of ... a minister with full responsibility for the government, but one who was nevertheless dependent upon the favour of a monarch to whom he had restored the powers of the Caliph after their appropriation by Badr and his son...resurrected to prominence and power in the ceremonial routines redeveloped by al-Bata'ihi. To it, towards the end of 1125, the Wazīr fell victim."). Constantine ✍ 07:47, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good enough to me, and it seems these sentences are cited in the article. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:54, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: The article has a quote from Brett in the section 'Rise to power' (p. 253: "The relationship itself was one of alliance, in which the minister was entrusted as before with the responsibilities of government, in return for bringing the monarch out from his seclusion into the public eye"), and for the rest, Brett p. 257 ("[al-Bata'ihi] he had exchanged al-Afdal for the Caliph as his patron. Thereby he had placed himself in the position of ... a minister with full responsibility for the government, but one who was nevertheless dependent upon the favour of a monarch to whom he had restored the powers of the Caliph after their appropriation by Badr and his son...resurrected to prominence and power in the ceremonial routines redeveloped by al-Bata'ihi. To it, towards the end of 1125, the Wazīr fell victim."). Constantine ✍ 07:47, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Vivian Cosby
- ... that playwright Vivian Cosby was hospitalized for three and a half years after lighting herself on fire because of a faulty gas heater?
- Source: "Fire Cripple Writes Scenarios From Bed" and "Vivian Crosby"
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Kēkerengū
- Comment: The article was moved from draftspace to mainspace with this edit.
SilverserenC 23:29, 30 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Cremastra (talk) 23:19, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
Ice
- ... that between 1994 and 2017, 28 trillion tonnes of ice were lost worldwide due to climate change?
- Source: [1]
InformationToKnowledge (talk) 13:08, 31 May 2024 (UTC).
- article was recently promoted to GA, is long enough and is within policy. Hook is sadly interesting to a general audience and short enough. Image is freely licensed. QPQ is complete. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:46, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Slater, Thomas; Lawrence, Isobel R.; Otosaka, Inès N.; Shepherd, Andrew; Gourmelen, Noel; Jakob, Livia; Tepes, Paul; Gilbert, Lin; Nienow, Peter (25 Jan 2021). "Review article: Earth's ice imbalance". The Cryosphere. 15 (1): 233–246 Material was copied from this source, which is available under a Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International License. Bibcode:2021TCry...15..233S. doi:10.5194/tc-15-233-2021. hdl:20.500.11820/df343a4d-6b66-4eae-ac3f-f5a35bdeef04.
Articles created/expanded on May 31 edit
Daniel Chapo
- ... that the favorite to be the next president of Mozambique, Daniel Chapo (pictured), was previously a radio announcer?
- Source: several, e.g. Reuters for radio announcer and e.g. The Africa Report, News24 or Bloomberg News for being the favorite
BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:34, 7 June 2024 (UTC).
- Interesting hook. The hook itself is properly cited and there within the article. No copyright issues and the article is good to go. Toadboy123 (talk) 03:36, 07 June 2024 (UTC)
John White (Kentucky politician)
- ... that John White (pictured) shot himself after it was discovered that he plagiarized a speech from Aaron Burr?
- Reviewed:
Kentuckian |💬 06:50, 5 June 2024 (UTC).
- Length adequate, referencing satisfactory and GA recent. Hook definitely interesting and verified in source, cited inline in article (2 separate sentences, but both are cited). Good to go as QPQ not necessary. Juxlos (talk) 08:51, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
Edwin Ford Piper
- ... that American poet Edwin Ford Piper collected 828 folksongs, with most of them coming from Iowa and Nebraska?
SL93 (talk) 02:30, 31 May 2024 (UTC).
- Interesting enough hook, but you need to provide a source. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:51, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima I did in the article. https://pubs.lib.uiowa.edu/bai/article/id/29045/ SL93 (talk) 04:00, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- SL93 I know, but it also ideally would have a source given in the submission above. The article otherwise is in good shape and eligible, the QPQ checks out, and I see no evidence of copyvio. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 19:45, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima Can you give a final approval template if this is approved? SL93 (talk) 20:55, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- SL93 I'm still waiting for you to add the source to your submission itself. I know it's in the article, but it needs to be added here as well for reference reasons. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 00:19, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima No. That is not a requirement. SL93 (talk) 00:45, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- BlueMoonset Did something change? SL93 (talk) 00:47, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima If at some point in the future the source is removed or altered, it would make verifying the hook after the fact extremely difficult. It's an edge case, sure, but it's best to make sure everything on here has a listed source. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 00:47, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Again, no. I'm not doing it on principle at this point, because it isn't required. It is already here anyway up above. SL93 (talk) 00:50, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- After some consultation, it seems that including the source in the nomination is standard practice, but not strictly required. I apologize for my ignorance on the matter. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:52, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima If at some point in the future the source is removed or altered, it would make verifying the hook after the fact extremely difficult. It's an edge case, sure, but it's best to make sure everything on here has a listed source. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 00:47, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- SL93 I'm still waiting for you to add the source to your submission itself. I know it's in the article, but it needs to be added here as well for reference reasons. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 00:19, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima Can you give a final approval template if this is approved? SL93 (talk) 20:55, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- SL93 I know, but it also ideally would have a source given in the submission above. The article otherwise is in good shape and eligible, the QPQ checks out, and I see no evidence of copyvio. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 19:45, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima I did in the article. https://pubs.lib.uiowa.edu/bai/article/id/29045/ SL93 (talk) 04:00, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Oxford (toy company)
- ... that Korean brick toys, colloquially called "Korean Lego", often feature themes of "war and danger", including sets such as military vehicles? Source: https://www.dbpia.co.kr/pdf/pdfView.do?nodeId=NODE11205467
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:43, 31 May 2024 (UTC).
- So this is technically not a 5x expansion. However, if you found a way to summarize some of the genres of sets in the bulleted lists, this would qualify. It's about 50 words short as far as I can tell. Otherwise AGF on the source, as I do not speak Korean. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:57, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima, I debulleted the list. The cited source is in English, although access may be limited for folks outside Koraen university network (I can provide the file by email). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:19, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- I'm willing to AGF on the paywalled source, especially since the news articles about the company's new sets show off these same themes described. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 22:47, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima, I debulleted the list. The cited source is in English, although access may be limited for folks outside Koraen university network (I can provide the file by email). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:19, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Flemish bond
- ... that brick laid in Flemish bond (pictured) was a sign of wealth in colonial Virginia?
- Source: McClain, Joe (August 30, 2011). "1,000 Giddy Arcana*: Bond. Flemish bond". The W&M Blogs. Williamsburg, VA: College of William & Mary. Retrieved May 31, 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Gabriel André Aucler
- Comment:
QPQ coming soon.
Pbritti (talk) 22:02, 31 May 2024 (UTC).
- Once the QPQ is done, this seems like a good hook. The article qualifies, is long enough, is fully sourced, seems in good shape, and has no evidence of copyvio. The hook is interesting and is cited in the article. The image is also correctly licensed (as your own work). Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:07, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: QPQ done! ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:34, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 17:22, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: QPQ done! ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:34, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Republica weatbrooki, Republica (plant)
- ... that while both are named from the same place, the genus Republica (pictured) is not the genus Republica?
- Source: Archibald & Cannings 2021 doi:10.11646/zootaxa.4966.3.11 materials and methods for location data "We examined a single fossil in lacustrine shale recovered from exposure B4131 of the Tom Thumb Tuff Member
of the Klondike Mountain Formation at Republic, Washington, U.S.A."
Wolfe & Wehr 1987 doi:10.3133/b1597 page 2 fig 1 shows the location in Republic of site 8428 of the Klondike Mountain Formation, page 22 gives the genus etymology and 23 the type locality occurrence in Republic- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Buellia aethalea
- Comment: Also reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Calamophyton
Kevmin § 00:13, 31 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: My first time reviewing a dual-article nomination, and I appreciate the effort which must have gone into it!
Both articles moved to mainspace yesterday. QPQ is done. No plagiarism detected via Earwig. For both articles, length, referencing and image licensing are all good. For the insect, I think that the first paragraph of "Description" and of "Paleoenvironment" are both a bit long and ought to be split up a bit, and that "Paleoenvironment" should have at least one image - even the location map over at Klondike Mountain Formation would be really helpful. For the plant, you really should move the distribution images a couple of paragraphs down to avoid MOS:SANDWICH, and the last sentence of the lead is missing a period. Still, I would not hold up the nomination for those reasons alone.
To me, it is the hook which has multiple significant issues. It may not be grammatically correct (shouldn't it be named after the same place, not named from the same place
?), it is really confusing and vague, as you have no way to tell what place is actually being referred to without clicking on both links, and I feel that a lot of readers would just say "So what?" when they see it as currently written. Suggested wording: Alt1 "...that extinct plants and damselflies from the Eocene were discovered and named after Republic in Washington?"
I also think that both articles should have a sentence which makes this connection between the two more explicit than the mere hatnote at the top. Lastly, you should at least add DOI and ISBN links to your DYK citations. Right now, there is no way to tell which citation refers to which fossil without going through the articles' references, and we should not have to do that. InformationToKnowledge (talk) 13:05, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- InformationToKnowledge The hook as written is a play on the hemihomonym use of the genus name Republica for both a plant and an animal, but I like alt1 as well. I've added the dois for each source and a map to Republica weatbrooki, plus added splits in the Description and Paleoenvironment sections. A sentence calling out the hemihomonymy has been added to each article under classification. The image/map placement for Republics (plant) is more problematic though. I edit on a wide screen desktop monitor, and my view of the article has the maps already almost all the way down to the start of References. Ideally I was wanting a single map, but I wasn't able to find one I could make work for the West coast sites plus Alaska.--Kevmin § 18:37, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- Taking conciseness into account and a matching the details of the articles:
Alt2 "...that fossil plants (pictured) and damselflies from the Ypresian were named after Republic in Washington state?"
- Kevmin OK, that addresses all my concerns. Thanks for the prompt response! InformationToKnowledge (talk) 17:24, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Gabriel André Aucler
- ... that Gabriel André Aucler tried to reestablish paganism after the French Revolution?
- Source: various
- ALT1: ... that Gérard de Nerval used Gabriel André Aucler's 18th-century neopaganism as an example of the persistence of religious faith? Source: "In 'Quintus Aucler', Aucler’s pagan beliefs are presented directly to the reader following the bleak image of the disenchantment of French society. Therefore, the pessimistic vision conveyed in the opening pages is immediately counterbalanced by the revelation of the persistence of religious faith." Nerval's Illimunés, Eccentricity, and the Evolution of Madness, p. 266 (276 in the PDF file)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Alan Kulwicki Memorial Park
Ffranc (talk) 11:16, 1 June 2024 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough, sourced properly with no copyright issues on Earwig, and with appropriately licensed images. QPQ is done. Hook is cited appropriately, interesting, and short enough. Recommend ALT0. Overall, great work. Good to go! ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:33, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Shane Rawley
- ... that baseball player Shane Rawley (pictured) published a novel?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/George Kunkel (actor)
- Comment: Second QPQ from a two article hook.
DYKchecktool does not recognize a 5x expansion because of this vandalism. I doubt his daughter was creating a cat army or his son is hunting dolphins.
– Muboshgu (talk) 15:35, 31 May 2024 (UTC).
- Another good hook - and I feel making an exception for that obvious vandalism is warranted. Hook checks out, article seems in good shape, and is fully sourced with no evidence of copyvio. Looks like we're good here. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:03, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Arndt Jorgens
- ... that Arndt Jorgens (pictured) won five World Series despite not playing in a game?
- Source: [11]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/George Kunkel (actor)
- Comment: First of two QPQ from the Kunkel double hook
– Muboshgu (talk) 03:36, 31 May 2024 (UTC).
- A very good hook! I like the image, the article seems in good condition (no sign of copyvio, etc.), and the hook checks out to the source. It also qualifies from 5x expansion. Good job. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:59, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Detroit Sign
- ... that an AI-rendering of the Detroit Sign (pictured) misled people into thinking it would be larger than its actual size?
- Source: AI tricked Detroit into thinking it was getting a huge Hollywood-style highway sign. April 11, 2024. Quartz.
- ALT1: ... that Detroit installed a sign (pictured) inspired by the Hollywood Sign in preparation for the 2024 NFL draft? Source: Hollywood-style Detroit sign installed ahead of NFL draft. April 9, 2024. Detroit Free Press.
- Reviewed:
- Comment: Open to alternatives.
reppoptalk 02:35, 31 May 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new enough and meets adequate quality and notability standards, though due to the line "stopped on the side of the freeway to take selfies in front of the letters" being a pretty lengthy word-for-word phrase from the source, I would recommend that it be copyedited or placed in quotation marks. Both hook and ALT1 work, no QPQ needed. Nice work on the article, please ping when complete and I'll go through with passing it. B3251 (talk) 19:54, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 1 edit
Chenqiao Mutiny
- ... that according to the official history of the Song dynasty, Zhao Kuangyin's soldiers stormed his bedroom and surprised him by proclaiming him emperor?
- Source: Hung, Hing Ming (2014). Ten States, Five Dynasties, One Great Emperor. Algora Publishing. ISBN 978-1-62894-072-5.
- Reviewed:
Lyn1644 (talk) 23:43, 1 June 2024 (UTC).
- AGF on the source, as I don't have access to it. Article is eligible, in good shape (fully cited, well written), and I can't find any evidence of copyvio. No QPQ needed. Looks like we're good to go here. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:50, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Toby Olubi, Can't Touch This (game show)
- ... that Toby Olubi has claimed to have funded his Olympic bobsled career by being "shot out of a cannon"? Source: https://www.hampshirechronicle.co.uk/sport/national/15893627.human-cannonball-toby-olubi-turns-focus-bobsleigh-duties-pyeongchang/
- ALT1: ... that Toby Olubi has claimed to have funded his Olympic bobsled career by becoming "a human cannonball"?
- ALT2: ... that Toby Olubi funded his Olympic bobsled career with £12,000 from Deal or No Deal?
- ALT3: ... that prior to broadcast, the "unspecified marque" on Can't Touch This had been used as an example of why British game show prizes were "rubbish"?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Claude_Hamilton_Verity
- Comment: I can't get over The Telegraph, The Times, The Guardian, and even the BBC all printing as gospel that he actually did it - he was in fact shot out of a catapult. Where's your fact checking?
Launchballer 13:13, 1 June 2024 (UTC).
- Good work Launchballer. 5x expansion, article is properly sourced, and hook is interesting. 48JCLTALK 01:44, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 2 edit
Nexz
- ... that the Japanese boy band Nexz was created through the program Nizi Project season 2?
lullabying (talk) 22:15, 2 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Article is new enough, long enough. QPQ is done. AGF on the Japanese- and Korean-language sources for plagiarism etc. Hook isn't the most earth shattering, but it does seem to be the most interesting fact in the article. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:40, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Sara Houcke
- ... that Sara Houcke is known as the Tiger Whisperer for her use of quiet whispered commands to her tigers in her Ringling Bros. circus acts?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Yazathingyan (14th-century minister)
- Comment: The article was moved from draftspace to mainspace with this edit.
SilverserenC 02:41, 3 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Long enough, interesting. Article is well-cited, but AGF on paywalled source. Good to go! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:38, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
SkyBridge Alternatives Conference
- ... that the SkyBridge Alternatives Conference is the world's largest hedge fund conference?
- Source: "SALT has become the largest hedge fund conference in the world." The Financial Times
- ALT1: ... that the SkyBridge Alternatives Conference has been compared to the Super Bowl, but for hedge funds? Source: "In May, he invited Mr. Trump to make a surprise guest appearance at his SALT conference, which has been called the hedge fund Super Bowl." New York Times
- ALT2: ... that the SkyBridge Alternatives Conference has hosted US Presidents Bill Clinton and George W. Bush? Source: "Scaramucci packed the Bellagio hotel's ballrooms each year by giving some 1,800 attendees access to former U.S. Presidents including Bill Clinton and George Bush, central bankers such as Ben Bernanke and hedge fund superstars Daniel Loeb, Ken Griffin and David Tepper. At night there were pool parties and private concerts." Reuters
- ALT3: ... that the SkyBridge Alternatives Conference has diversified from hedge funds and features world leaders, concerts, and other talks? Source: WSJ "At night there were pool parties and private concerts." Reuters
- ALT4: ... that John Fogerty played a show at the SkyBridge Alternatives Conference in 2019? Source: "In many ways, this year’s event was similar to the past. There were cocktail parties, panels, a concert from John Fogerty and an overwhelmingly male crowd. Roughly 1,950 people attended the conference, Skybridge said, more than expected after the event was canceled last year" WSJ
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Arifin Achmad
TheSandDoctor Talk 21:52, 7 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: @TheSandDoctor: Nice work on this article. I notice that the article says "is considered by the New York Times to be "one of Wall Street’s most prominent gatherings"" twice in the lead. I would remove one of these as a duplicate, but this doesn't really affect the DYK review. Epicgenius (talk) 17:49, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: Thank you for the review and for pointing that out! I am not sure how I didn't notice that. I think that was supposed to be somewhat the start of the body but clearly in the wrong spot. I've re-arranged it now. Does that look better? --TheSandDoctor Talk 18:12, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- No problem. Yeah, it looks good now. Epicgenius (talk) 18:16, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: Awesome. Thank you for the compliment, by the way! I was genuinely surprised an article didn't exist on this when I started digging. The largest conference of its kind as noted by the Financial Times (FT), a paper of record in its industry, and compared to the Super Bowl by NYT, and chronicled a decent amount by Reuters & WSJ was somehow missed. It really does make you wonder how much has been missed being recorded due to paywalls or just simply because there is so much going on at all times that some really big things just slip through the cracks. --TheSandDoctor Talk 18:29, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- No problem. Yeah, it looks good now. Epicgenius (talk) 18:16, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
David Fishwick
- ... that David Fishwick became the biggest minibus supplier in Britain after finding he could not afford a chip butty for lunch? Source: https://www.telegraph.co.uk/money/fame-fortune/like-big-banks-hate-do-nothing-help-public/
- ALT1: ... that David Fishwick founded "Bank on Dave" after big banks abruptly stopped lending his customers money? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/money/2012/jul/06/bank-of-dave-small-business-finance-dave-fishwick
- ALT2: ... that David Fishwick presented the 2018 Channel 4 series How to Get Rich Quick? Source: https://www.irishtimes.com/culture/tv-radio-web/how-to-get-rich-quick-can-you-hear-it-ka-ching-1.3574894
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sebastian Zouberbuhler
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Overall: Good to go! 🌙Eclipse (talk) (contribs) 21:49, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- I call false positive as that quote is fully attributed and therefore not a copyright violation.--Launchballer 22:19, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Auto Dollar
- ... that in lieu of his portrait, a Chinese warlord put his car on the currency (pictured)?
- Source: Bevan, Paul (2019). "Zhou Xicheng's "Guizhou Auto Dollar": Commemorating the Building of Roads for Famine Relief". Journal of the Royal Asiatic Society. 29 (2): 345–359. doi:10.1017/S1356186318000561.
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:10, 2 June 2024 (UTC).
- Very interesting well written, no copyvio, QPQ done and on theme intrestingly enough, hook is interesting. I trust that the source listed confirms this but did go and look for external sources and found that it's true. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 03:50, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- @OlifanofmrTennant: Question! I was able to get a properly licensed image for the coin from a friend, as seen here. Would it be alright to include the image alongside the hook? Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:23, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: That would improve the hook add some context. Consider adding it to the article Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 03:26, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- It's been added to the article; I just wanted to include it as a picture alongside the hook. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:26, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: Go ahead. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 03:29, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- It's been added to the article; I just wanted to include it as a picture alongside the hook. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:26, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: That would improve the hook add some context. Consider adding it to the article Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 03:26, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- @OlifanofmrTennant: Question! I was able to get a properly licensed image for the coin from a friend, as seen here. Would it be alright to include the image alongside the hook? Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:23, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 3 edit
Swamps of Belarus
- ... that there are more than 9,000 swamps in Belarus? Source: [12], it's in Russian so you can ctrl-f "9192"
- ALT1: ... that swamps are often seen as a symbol of Belarus? Source: Elena Gapova, “The Land under the White Wings”: The Romantic Landscaping of Socialist Belarus
- ALT2: ... that over 60% of Belarusian swamps were drained during the Soviet era? Source: [13], "Площадь осушенных торфяников: 1 697 500 га (66,3% общей площади болот)", tr: "Area of drained peatlands: 1,697,500 ha (66.3% of the total swamps' area)"
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Come, O thou Traveller unknown
Artem.G (talk) 15:41, 3 June 2024 (UTC).
- Article is recent & has enough prose. Earwig is acting pretty slow right now, AGF due to non-English sources. Hooks OK, I find ALT2 the most interesting. QPQ done. Nice work. B3251(talk) 15:06, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
LACE (satellite)
- ... that the Low-power Atmospheric Compensation Experiment (LACE) (pictured) was the first Department of Defense satellite launched on a commercial launch vehicle?
- ALT1: ... that the 150 ft (46m) long retractable booms on the LACE satellite (pictured) were the longest ever put in space at the time of launch?
- Source: Amato, Ivan. "13". Taking Technology Higher The Naval Center for Space Technology and the Making of the Space Age (p. 252)
https://www.nrl.navy.mil/Portals/38/PDF%20Files/Taking_Technology_Higher_Amato.pdf "In the initial days and weeks after the LACE launch, he and colleagues spent many hours at the Blossom Point ground station in southern Maryland checking the spacecraft’s systems, which included, among other superlatives, the longest retractable
booms that had ever flown in space"- ALT2: ... that the Ultraviolet Plume Instrument onboard the LACE satellite (pictured) tracked rocket plumes from space for the United States's Star Wars program?
- Source: Naval Research Laboratory (October 1, 1991). "LACE" (PDF). Defense Technical Information Center. Washington DC: Naval Research Laboratory. Retrieved April 4, 2024.
https://apps.dtic.mil/sti/pdfs/ADA339075.pdf (p. 2): "SDIO [Strategic Defense Initiative Organization] began discussing the addition of an instrument to take video images of rocket plumes by their UV emission."
Images on pp. 20-22, some color versions at https://web.archive.org/web/20070916140820/http://code8200.nrl.navy.mil/uvpi.html, or on Commons- Reviewed:
- Comment: Hook: technically LACE was launched alongside another "Star Wars" satellite as a dual payload on the same rocket, however, LACE was deployed first so it still was the "first" satellite launched/deployed in the mission
AltHook: I would love to say that these were the longest booms *ever* deployed in space, but I haven't found any up-to-date sources or papers stating that.
AltHook2: "Star Wars" is the popular nickname for the Strategic Defense Initiative program
SpacePod9 (talk) 08:47, 6 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: main, ALT1 and ALT2 all verified Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:00, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 4 edit
Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics
- ... that judoka Kinaua Biribo used her participation for Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics to combat domestic violence and rising sea levels?
- ALT1: ... that a high jumper became a sprinter to qualify for Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics? Source: https://www.pacificaussports.gov.au/our-stories/lataisi-mwea-kiribati-my-tokyo-olympic-journey
- ALT2: ... that the delegation of Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics stayed with the delegation of Australia? Source: https://www.abc.net.au/news/2021-07-19/widening-wealth-gap-tokyo-olympics-pacific-asia-athletes/100295268?
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Arconning (talk) 03:42, 4 June 2024 (UTC).
- @Arconning: New enough and long enough. First hook looks good too; since the source mentions her participation before the games, how about "intended" instead of "used"? Curlymanjaro (talk) 20:49, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Curlymanjaro: So it would be, ... that judoka Kinaua Biribo intended to use her participation for Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics to combat domestic violence and rising sea levels? Arconning (talk) 02:56, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Arconning: That works too! How about, "... that judoka Kinaua Biribo hoped to use her participation ..."? Curlymanjaro (talk) 19:34, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Curlymanjaro: Yep that's alright! Just waiting for your approval. Arconning (talk) 03:09, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
- Happy with this - great work. Curlymanjaro (talk) 13:02, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Curlymanjaro: Yep that's alright! Just waiting for your approval. Arconning (talk) 03:09, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Arconning: That works too! How about, "... that judoka Kinaua Biribo hoped to use her participation ..."? Curlymanjaro (talk) 19:34, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Curlymanjaro: So it would be, ... that judoka Kinaua Biribo intended to use her participation for Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics to combat domestic violence and rising sea levels? Arconning (talk) 02:56, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 5 edit
Gladys Stone Wright
- ... that Gladys Stone Wright, one of the first woman band directors in the United States, won an award for promoting bands as a "musical art form"?
- Source: "Conductor at Harrison". Journal and Courier. September 7, 1971. Retrieved June 5, 2024.
SL93 (talk) 20:54, 5 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: I think the hook could do with a few alts, as having read the article, there are some other details that stand out to me as more interesting than the award she won. Feel free to ping me once some ALT hooks are written. Grnrchst (talk) 09:29, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
- Grnrchst ALT1 ... that Gladys Stone Wright, one of the first woman band directors in the United States, was the first one in Oregon?
- ALT2 ... that when Gladys Stone Wright was the first woman band director at an educators' conference, male directors applauded her band's performance? SL93 (talk) 12:49, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Bad Dürrenberg burial
- ... that the Bad Dürrenberg shaman may have been able to block blood vessels to her brain by holding her head at certain angles?
- Source: Orschiedt et al. (2023) "The Shaman and the Infant: The Mesolithic Double Burial from Bad Dürrenberg, Germany" p.128 "This vertebra also shows an anomaly, which is limited to the vertebral process in the form of a protruding bone clasp. This makes a blockage of one of the blood vessels leading to the brain plausible. This can be caused intentionally by adopting a certain head posture."
- ALT1: ... that the Bad Dürrenberg shaman may have been able to induce ataxia or nystagmus by holding her head at certain angles? Source: Porr & Alt (2006) "The burial of Bad Dürrenberg, Central Germany: osteopathology and osteoarchaeology of a Late Mesolithic shaman's grave" p.398 "Tyrrell & Benedix (2004: 58) mention ‘ataxia of the limbs’ as ‘the most common modern clinical presentation ofcraniovertebral anomalies’...The latter might have affected all forms of perception, resulting in nystagmus (involuntary rapid, jerky eye movement) or diplopy (seeing double)." Orschiedt et al. (2023) "The Shaman and the Infant: The Mesolithic Double Burial from Bad Dürrenberg, Germany" p.128 "This can be caused intentionally by adopting a certain head posture...However, it is conceivable that a nystagmus, i. e., an involuntary movement of the eyeballs, could be caused by the blockage of a blood vessel."
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Merytat3n (talk) 23:58, 5 June 2024 (UTC).
- Article is long enough and recently given GA status. It is presentable, well-sourced, and neutral. Earwig looks fine. The hooks are both cited and interesting. QPQ is not required. gobonobo + c 18:11, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Esther Tailfeathers
... that the "mythical love story" of Sami politician Bjarne Store-Jakobsen and Blackfoot physician Esther Tailfeathers is the subject of the 2014 film Bihttoš?Source: https://www.cbc.ca/radio/newfire/what-does-it-mean-to-come-of-age-1.3172991/filming-your-family-s-past-1.3173202 "My parents have this sort of mythical love story," is how she describes it.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/George Webster (presenter)
- Comment: Would like to use this as a second target for the Bjarne Store-Jakobsen hook in Template:Did you know/Preparation area 1, the nom for that hook is on board, will QPQ asap
Valereee (talk) 19:52, 5 June 2024 (UTC).
@Ornithoptera: Valereee (talk) 19:53, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: New enough, long enough, sourced and plagiarism free according to Earwig. The hook has been previously approved and everything seems to check out with me. If there are no issues everything should be fine with me. Great job Valereee, you've done an amazing job in taking initiative creating this article. Ornithoptera (talk) 21:04, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Ornithoptera and Valereee: I find it concerning that both the source given for the hook and the source in the article for the marriage don't actually name the father/husband. I see it in [14], which is used in the articles, so that source should be replicated. Noting also that the relevant Bjarne Store-Jakobsen sentence has not been adapted to note the film has two stars. CMD (talk) 00:49, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
per DYK Talk Valereee (talk) 11:11, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- Well, I'll complete the review since I've somewhat started, pretty much confirming the work of Ornithoptera, and I echo the appreciation of the quick work here. Since it's in the hook, also a quick note of appreciation to Ornithoptera for the detailed article on what seems quite an impactful person.This article is new and long enough. It is adequately sourced. Running a few spotchecks I found no plagiarism (unless "a member of the Kainai First Nation" is not a common phrasing, which I feel it is but this is not an area I am highly versed in). I mentioned one sourcing quibble above, and noticed but did not mention the far too short lead, but Launchballer handled both of these. On the hook itself, I do not have access to two of the sources used across both articles, but it is backed up by the source I mentioned above which is already in both articles. Before approval, I note the Bjarne Store-Jakobsen article and the Esther Tailfeathers article frame the hook sentence a bit differently, either they are joint focuses or he is the main focus. The wikilinks to the Esther Tailfeathers article should also be adjusted on the Bjarne Store-Jakobsen article, as they don't seem to reflect the page creation. I would also like to know which source mentions the divorce, as I didn't find that in my spotchecks. Best, CMD (talk) 11:53, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hey, Chipmunkdavis, thanks for the review! I've asked Ornithoptera to take a look at those three sections, as they have seen the film while I don't have access to it. From the reviews it looks like we could possibly tweak to
ALT0a: ... that the "mythical love story" of Sami politician Bjarne Store-Jakobsen and Blackfoot physician Esther Tailfeathers is a focus of the 2014 film Bihttoš?
- As the film deals not only with his and his wife's relationship but also with that of him and his daughter, and the film investigates how his experiences in the residential schools informed those relationships. Valereee (talk) 13:30, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- Works for me as an alt. It doesn't sound like the whole film is easily encapsulated in 200 characters, but the mythical love story aspect is hooky and prominent in the relevant sources. Waiting for Ornithoptera to confirm, I am copying over the relevant DYKmake coding here which should™️ ensure it gets copied over when this is promoted to my understanding. CMD (talk) 13:38, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Chipmunkdavis:! Thank you for taking the time to go through the article. There are a few questions that are raised in this discussion that I have missed that I will do my best to answer. Stofjell's article Elsewheres of Healing: Trans-Indigenous Spaces in Elle-Máijá Apiniskim Tailfeathers' Bihttoš is the primary source in terms of mentioning the divorce ("Tailfeathers uses Bihttoš totell the story of her parents’ marriage and divorce against the backdrop of agrowing global Indigenous rights movement") and Elle-Maija's mother ("The interspersed archival photographs are well-lit, but the liveaction sequences, featuring Elle-Máijá, her Kainai mother Esther Tailfeathers") and father ("Among other things, it is also very much a film honoring her father (“Áhčči”), Bjarne Store-Jakobsen"). If I have missed any other questions that require addressing please let me know and I'll do my best to adjust accordingly! Ornithoptera (talk) 16:52, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- Works for me as an alt. It doesn't sound like the whole film is easily encapsulated in 200 characters, but the mythical love story aspect is hooky and prominent in the relevant sources. Waiting for Ornithoptera to confirm, I am copying over the relevant DYKmake coding here which should™️ ensure it gets copied over when this is promoted to my understanding. CMD (talk) 13:38, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- As the film deals not only with his and his wife's relationship but also with that of him and his daughter, and the film investigates how his experiences in the residential schools informed those relationships. Valereee (talk) 13:30, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 6 edit
List of Seattle Reign FC seasons
- ... that in their 11 seasons, Seattle Reign FC have yet to win a league championship? Source: NWSL
- ALT1: ... that Seattle Reign FC have had three name changes during their 11-year history? Source: The Seattle Times
- Reviewed: Nabisco Shredded Wheat Factory
SounderBruce 07:09, 6 June 2024 (UTC).
- New, long enough, well written and cited, QPQ present. Nice work. Prefer ALT1 (though linked cite doesn't directly say three, others verify), as 11 years isn't that long, but who am I to say as someone now eager to see List of North Carolina Courage seasons unredlinked. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 02:39, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 7 edit
Wu shu (history)
- ... that the compilation of the Wu shu was hampered by the execution of two of of the compilation committee's members?
- Source: in the article
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Kzyx (talk) 00:05, 8 June 2024 (UTC).
- No QPQ needed. Hook is interested, although you really should list the source again here; it's de Crespigny, Rafe (2018). Generals of the South: The Foundation and Early History of the Three Kingdoms State of Wu. This checks out, however. Article seems in decent shape, although might need a round of copyediting; it's presentable, but some of the sentences are phrased a little clunkily. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 01:03, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 8 edit
Great Alaskan Lumberjack Show
- ... that in the Great Alaskan Lumberjack Show, the performers scale a tree that is 50 feet (15 m) tall and then free fall?
- Source: Ballas, Teeka; Bodry, Catherine; Bowman, Jessica; Coffman, Linda; Heller, Carolyn; Kernaghan, Sue; McBeath, Chris; Moure, Celeste; Readicker-Henderson, Edward; Reale, Tom; Schoenbohm, Laurel; Wyatt, Sarah (2009). Kealy, Kelly (ed.). Fodor's Alaska Ports of Call 2009. New York: Fodor's. p. 167. ISBN 978-1-4000-0707-3. ISSN 1520-0205. Retrieved 2024-06-08 – via Google Books.
The book notes: "We don't recommend it if you're looking for authenticity, but the Great Alaskan Lumberjack Show is a 60-minute lumberjack contest providing a Disneyesque taste of old-time woodsman skills, including ax throwing, buck-sawing, springboard chopping, log-rolling duels, and a 50-foot tree climb that ends in a free fall."
Cunard (talk) 10:40, 8 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Everything looks good to me. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:33, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Isle of Dogs Pumping Station
- ... that the Isle of Dogs Pumping Station (pictured) was designed in defiance of Margaret Thatcher? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/artanddesign/2017/jun/22/john-outram-temple-of-storms-listed-pumping-station
- ALT1: ... that the Isle of Dogs Pumping Station (pictured) was nicknamed the Temple of Storms? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/artanddesign/2017/jun/22/john-outram-temple-of-storms-listed-pumping-station
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Pahunkat (talk) 22:57, 8 June 2024 (UTC).
- Article was moved to mainspace today, so is new enough. At over 3000 characters, it is long enough. The article reads neutrally and properly uses in-line citations. The copyvio detector finds no issues. Both hooks are interesting and are cited in-line. No QPQ is required (though will be on your next one, have fun with that!). Everything looks good to go! SilverserenC 23:20, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 9 edit
Emily Spreeman
- ... that Emily Spreeman, the all-time top scorer for the United States deaf women's national team, played youth soccer with Alex Morgan?
- Source: LAT
- ALT1: ... that Emily Spreeman, the all-time top scorer for the United States women's national deaf soccer team, debuted for the team at the age of 15? Source: U.S. Soccer
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Stacy Hollowell
Hameltion (talk | contribs) 02:05, 9 June 2024 (UTC).
Articles created/expanded on June 10 edit
Dreamtime (climb)
- ... that Dreamtime (pictured) is considered one of the world's most famous bouldering routes?
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Aszx5000 (talk) 15:44, 10 June 2024 (UTC).
- article is long enough, recently promoted to GA and within policy. Hook is short enough and interesting. QPQ not needed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 11 June 2024 (UTC)