Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Louis Mountbatten, 1st Marquess of Milford Haven

Hoping to bring it to FA standard. DrKiernan 13:09, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Every paragraph should have at least one citation, even if it's a repeat of the citation for the following paragraph. It keeps the article from looking like it has uncited text.
You don't need to put citations mid-sentence, you can combine them at the end of the sentence.
You don't need in-line citations in the intro if the same information is repeated with citations in the main body, which appears to be the case here.
You don't have to have citations next to each other, you can combine them into a single citation.
The information that gives Mountbatten's opinion on something, such as the naval skills of the Turkish navy, should make clear that this is Mountbatten's opinion, not necessarily a generally recognized fact as the text appears to indicate.
Quotes that are four lines or longer should be blocked (placed in an indented paragraph-see the WP:MOS).
The last paragraph in the "final years" section needs a citation.
Identical citations can use the "refname" citation format to combine them in the footnotes section. Instructions on how to do it are here: [1].

All in all, a well-written, informative, and enjoyable article to read. Nice work. Cla68 04:21, 6 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! DrKiernan 07:43, 7 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 00:36, 15 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]