User talk:MTJ78/Juan E. Gilbert
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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Miss Bono in topic Article review
This is my first effort at creating a Wikipedia article. I would appreciate any critiques, edits, or feedback on the draft. I've put a lot of work into the preparation of the draft, and I don't want it to get deleted. Thanks for your help! MTJ78 (talk) 04:52, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
- It's a very good first effort! I have quite a bit of experience at Articles for creation, a draft as well written and complete as this one is a very rare pleasure. I think it's basically ready - if you agree just add {{subst:submit}} to the top of the page and it will be properly reviewed and published as soon as it's ready. I have "de-activated" the categories because categories are only allowed on articles that are already in mainspace. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 20:38, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you so much! I am also getting feedback from editors at the Teahouse Q&A: Wikipedia:Teahouse/Questions#Need_editors_for_first_article. I'll read all commentary and make all the suggested changes at the same time later this weekend. MTJ78 (talk) 20:50, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
Article review edit
Hello. Sorry for getting late but I've been working and I don't have Wikipedia access on weekends. What do you need for me to reviw on your article'?? Miss Bono (zootalk) 18:56, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
- No worries. I just have one question now. I added the submit tag to the article, and got a notice that the article would be better placed in Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Juan E. Gilbert. I selected "move," but I don't see it in the list at AfC. Thoughts? MTJ78 (talk) 19:03, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
- I don't know. I am not good with tags. I am sorry can't helping you with that. Better ask that at the Teahouse. They can help you.
- I think the article needs more explanations on the fields though (e.g. Education: Instead of * Ph.D., University of Cincinnati, Cincinnati, Ohio, 2000 (Computer Science), this: JuanE. Gilbert has a Ph.D..... etc) I don't know if you understad me. Feel free to ask. Miss Bono (zootalk) 19:13, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
- I understand. I used Richard A. Tapia as my example, so I thought this format was ok.MTJ78 (talk) 19:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
- Barack Obama is written in the narrative style that you are suggesting. Maybe the article format is different depending on how famous the person is. MTJ78 (talk) 19:20, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
- I think the article needs more explanations on the fields though (e.g. Education: Instead of * Ph.D., University of Cincinnati, Cincinnati, Ohio, 2000 (Computer Science), this: JuanE. Gilbert has a Ph.D..... etc) I don't know if you understad me. Feel free to ask. Miss Bono (zootalk) 19:13, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
- I don't know. I am not good with tags. I am sorry can't helping you with that. Better ask that at the Teahouse. They can help you.