Template:Did you know nominations/Catherine Courtney, Baroness Courtney of Penwith
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The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:50, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
Catherine Courtney, Baroness Courtney of Penwith edit
- ... that Lady Courtney (pictured) hosted the first meeting of the committee from which the Save the Children Fund would develop?
- Reviewed: Filipinos in Norway
Created by Surtsicna (talk). Self nom at 17:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
Length, date verified. Hook's ref requires subscription so accepted AGF from seasoned editor. All non-lead paragraphs have the same ref; it is a RS. Couldn't check for close paraphrasing because of subscription requirement, but again AGF. QPQ done. Interesting hook; hook length is fine. Good to go. Thanks for an interesting article.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Rosiestep (talk • contribs)
I do have access to the source, and am concerned that some of the structure and phrasing in this article is rather close to it. The problem might be alleviated through a diversification of sources, if possible; hewing too closely to the source is a more frequent problem when there's only one source being used. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:38, 14 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for your input. Accedie was kind enough to agree to help out with restructuring and I believe she's done a wonderful job. Is the article alright now? Surtsicna (talk) 12:32, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
- Much better, but it would benefit from a bit more work, particularly in the end of marriage and beginning of war. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:58, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
- Done, methinks. Surtsicna (talk) 19:34, 19 January 2013 (UTC)
ODNB source now clear, don't have access to the other sources. Nikkimaria (talk) 17:29, 24 January 2013 (UTC)
- Done, methinks. Surtsicna (talk) 19:34, 19 January 2013 (UTC)
- Much better, but it would benefit from a bit more work, particularly in the end of marriage and beginning of war. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:58, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for your input. Accedie was kind enough to agree to help out with restructuring and I believe she's done a wonderful job. Is the article alright now? Surtsicna (talk) 12:32, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
- I believe this is now acceptable to all. It is new enough and long enough. The image is in the public domain and the hook has an inline citation to a source not accessible to me. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:18, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
