Talk:Thirteen (2003 film)/GA1

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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Parkwells in topic Plot

GA Review edit

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Sorry, but I'm going to quick-fail this article primarily because of the lack of sources. Two references is simply not enough to substantiate everything claimed in a good article, and there are many other things that need to be fixed before this can be promoted.

  • Big chunks of text are missing citations, e.g. whole first paragraph of Production
  • The non-free images should be removed as they are only illustrative
  • The introduction needs to be expanded so it covers everything in the article (see WP:LEAD)
  • The Reception section needs excerpts from reviews and box office figures
  • The pop culture references does not serve much encyclopedic purpose and should probably be removed if sources can't be found to illustrate that the film's use of pop culture references was particularly notable
  • The Soundtrack section can be expanded with information about the music and the physical soundtrack CD

This article will need a lot more work to get to GA status, but it can be done. MOS:FILM is a great page outlining what a decent film article should look like, which you may find useful. If you need any help, feel free to leave me a message or ask the Film WikiProject's participants at WT:FILM. Good luck with improving the article! —97198 (talk) 07:42, 21 May 2009 (UTC)Reply

Plot edit

Has too many details and no cites.Parkwells (talk) 16:55, 29 May 2013 (UTC)Reply